Rejected Sheet Annaelyn Daevaar

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  1. SilentRuination

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Sihn-Annaelyn Nor’Daevaar
      • Imperialized: Annabelle Decimar
      • Nicknames: Anna, Ann, Rosebud, and Buttercup.
      • Bardic Title: Rose of the North
    • Race: Born Sihndar (Half Isldar + Avanthar)
    • Age: 35
    • Sex: Female
      • Gender: She/Her
    • Sexuality: Pansexual
    • Eye Color: Light Grey
    Core Concept
    • Anna does not believe strongly in any religion. She does however participate in worship of Evsrenllir-Mullontavan with her fellow Sihndar, but does not believe in it.
    • Annaelyn is a bard and warrior by trade. She is a rather upbeat Sihndar and tends to focus on the positives of life more than the negatives. She seeks to entertain, though isn’t above fighting if necessary.
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    Proficiency Information
    Total Points: 50/50 Skill Points + 10/10 Hobby Points
    • Core:
      • +10 Sword Combat
    • Hobby:
      • +10 Instrumental Art
      • +10 Vocal Art (From Hobby Points)
      • +7 Composition Art
      • +6 Linguistics
      • +3 Theatre Art
      • +3 Dancing Art
      • +1 Hunting Art
    • Talent:
      • +10 Bodycare Training
    • Physical Stat: 18
    Ability Information
    • Northern Taint (11 Abilities)
    • Bodycare Training (2 Abilities)
      • Skin Purge 1 (Mundane)
      • Age Control 1 (Mundane)
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Sinnayed (Home)
    • Forsk (Linguistics)
    • Nytalsk (Linguistics)
    Appearance Information
    • Annaelyn is unmutated.
    • Anna stands at a rather short 5’6”. Her body has some muscular definition, but remains more on the petite side. She has what can be described as a lightly defined hourglass form, not being overly prominent or undefined. Her hair is snow white, and it is often worn loose with a few messy braids. The braids often have feathers and beads woven into them.
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    Life Story
    • Annaelyn was born to Ellahie and Ruvyn Daevaar on June 7th 274 AC. She was born on Drowda at the time, and raised by both parents in her early youth. She got along well with other kids her age, and spent a lot of time with her friends, developing social skills during this time.
    • As she reached her teens, she was soon whisked away to train with the rest of the Sihndar in her hold. She soon mastered the way of the Khoptar and once she graduated she was put out on the front lines to aid the Sihndar cause. However, this didn’t sit well with her and with the aid of her mother she was able to pursue music as a hobby in the Banner Hold of Norras.
    • She remained in Norras well into her adulthood, fitting in better then in her previous hold with her family. Though she soon left the continent to explore the world, with the main goal of sending aid back to Drowda. She traveled around most of Ellador, offering her sword and skills as a bard for coin. She also picked up a language or two and a few folk songs from the region.
    • She decided to travel to Regalia to possibly look for aid there, and upon hearing good things about the city.
    Progression Information
    • Warrior Level 2
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    @fantuinn Updated sheet to new format and rewrote portions to be in line with the new Sihndar lore.
     
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    For future reference: Physical Stat rounds up per individual contribution. So Dancing Arts would give 3, rather than 2.5 . This is pretty minor, so I'll go ahead and approve. Just go ahead and edit it in post please!

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    @Yurs I've rearranged and added some proficiencies, also edited her backstory accordingly. Also added some sicc aesthetics to the sheet. All changes done in purple.
     
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    Looks great! Very nice aesthetics, and all the story changes are awesome.

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    @Yurs Added some art and lost the approved tag- whoops. Could I get it reinstated? No changes to the sheet otherwise.
     
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