╭⋟────────────────────────╮ Character ✦✧✦✧ Information ╰────────────────────────⋞╯ Full Name: Amon Kra’zzla Nicknames: Amy, Tiger, Half n' Half. Race: Feka Asha Mixture: Senef Asha x Songaskian Age: 32 Birthday: 8th of February Star Sign: Aquarius Sex: Male Gender: Male Pronouns: Any Sexuality: Achillean. Preference: Men. Eye Color: Yellow & blue heterochromia. Religiosity: Amon is a devout worshipper of Baskarr. He grew up around his aunt, who taught him many things about the faith, and he’s always strived to do things that would give him Kharma, this Faith in Baskarr is one of the main reasons he’s grown up to be as kind and optimistic as he has. Devoutness: 10/10 Core Concept: Amon is a kind-hearted ex-pirate with a passion for exercise and baking, he’s outgoing, energetic and wholeheartedly cares for everyone, using his skills and strength to protect those who need it. Alignment: Neutral Good ╭⋟────────────────────────╮ Proficiency ✦✧✦✧ Information ╰────────────────────────⋞╯ 20 Sword combat (+20 points) 5 Fist Combat (+5 points) 10 Sailing art (+10 points) 4 Cooking Art (+4 points) 15 Baking art (+10 hobby points, +5 Racial boost) Special Proficiency Training: 5 Strength Training (+5 points) Point Buy: 3 Roguery (+3 points) 3 Linguistics (+3 points): 20 Physical Stat: 20 (Sword combat) + 5 Strength Training (Strength Training) + 5 (fist combat) +5 (sailing art) = 35 Phys stat (capped at 20) Ability Information Roguery: Wall Climb 3 Asha Abilities: Body Claws 1 Body Tail 1 Asha Agility 1 Living Metal 1 Living Metal 2 Living Metal 3 Living Metal 4 Languages Common (Free) Ibeth (Parent) Sofaal (Learned) ╭⋟────────────────────────╮ Appearance ✦✧✦✧ Information ╰────────────────────────⋞╯ Abnormalities: Amon's left index finger and right arm from the elbow down are replaced with living metal, his tail is crooked in the middle due to an improperly healed injury, he has heterochromia and Poliosis of the hair (white portions within his otherwise dark brown hair). General Appearance: Amon is of average height, standing at 6’10 with dark skin and tiger-like fur patterns in patches on his shoulders and back, he has a ripped body shape and is generally hourglass-shaped, his hair is dark brown with a large portion of white, it has long, loose ringlet curls tied up in a thick ponytail at the back. ╭⋟────────────────────────╮ Life ✦✧✦✧ Story ╰────────────────────────⋞╯ Amon was born to a Senef Asha known as Tyliss Kra’zzla, and a Songaski pirate known as Ilyas. The first two years of Amon’s life were spent with both his parents at sea. His grandfather was the captain of a ship within the Sefetjew Fleet. Amon spent his adolescence training with a khopesh, as well as working in a bakery, saving up money so that he could move out of home and embark on his own adventure. During his young adulthood, Amon gained experience with sailing and admiralty within a pirate fleet, and eventually moved on to a more official section of a Corsair Fleet. He travelled to Farah’deen to learn Sofaal, learning a bit of unarmed combat whilst he was studying. Then, as his mother and step-father had been living in regalia for a long time, he finally decided to move there and live with the rest of the Kra’zzla family. Spoiler: FREE FORM LIFE STORY: Amon was born to a Senef Asha known as Tyliss Kra’zzla, and a Songaski pirate known as Ilyas. The first two years of Amon’s life were spent with both his parents at sea. His grandfather was the captain of a ship within the Sefetjew Fleet. His father was killed during the raid of another ship, leaving Amon in the custody of his young mother. The duo lived under the protection of his grandfather, and over the years he gained a few siblings- a pair of twins and one younger sister. Caught in a rather hefty storm, the ship gained significant damage, sinking off the coast of Daenshore. With the help of a few otter-like crewmates and some emergency rafts, most crewmates escaped safely. However, during the chaos, Amon’s younger sister was lost, and his father- stubborn and ageing, went down with the ship. The survivors of Amon’s family, made up of his mother, grandmother, aunt, and three of his siblings, settled in a semi-cramped townhouse within Santigo, Daenshore. He began to learn to wield a Khopesh, while working a job at a bakery to save up money for his future adventures. Missing the sea life, Amon left his home at the age of 15 to learn sailing and admiralty at the Silverwind Pirate Commune. After completing his time within the commune, he was sent out as the captain of his own ship. He eventually moved on to being an Admiral within a Corsair fleet. After a few years of this, Amon travelled to Farah’deen to learn Sofaal, both to learn more of his cultural heritage, as well as to help him communicate with his father in law, Fawzi. Additionally, he learned a few unarmed fighting techniques while studying. Once he’d learned the language well enough, he moved to regalia to join the Kra’zzla family within their family home in clawcourt. Progression Information Admiral Level 1 (Point buy) Warrior Level 2 (Forced) ╭⋟────────────────────────╮ ✦✧✦✧ ╰────────────────────────⋞╯
Only one issue. Please update your Physical stat section. You have down "20 Physical Stat: 19 (Sword combat) " but you have given 20 sword combat to the character @IGutTheMidasTuch
oh, thanks for bringing my attention to that- i also forgot to add in all the other combat profs i added since the update (I had almost completed the app when it happened and a lot of points were put into schools sjgh) I fixed the 20 sword combat and added in all the others!!' @BillyTheScruffy
@BillyTheScruffy Added aesthetics and the approved prefix was removed ;'( the price we pay for beauty....
@BillyTheScruffy as much as i love this man, he's currently shelved so I'm requesting his app to be rejected to make room for new kiddos!