Shelved Character Amadeus

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  1. yusuf12323

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Amadeus
    • Race: Ailor (Regal Culture)
    • Age: Unknown
    • Gender: Male
    • Affliction - Hallow Undead Warden
    • Eye Color: Green
    Core Concept

    • Once a strong Reliquary Knight of the Blackmark Order who fell whilst protecting a unionist temple, now turned into Hallowed Warden, protector of the Ordial.
    • Was a devout Unionist worshipper before he died, now he follows Eir the Nobility of Death
    Proficiencies

    • Strength: 0
    • Constitution: 7 (2 Specials)
      • Tank Charge Pack
      • Tank Slam Pack
      • Tank Hero Pack
      • Tank Swing Pack
      • Tank Rush Pack
      • Tank Watch Pack
      • Tank Switch Pack
      • Metallurgy Craft Pack (Hallow Ability)
    • Wisdom: 1
      • Dimenthist Wisdom Pack
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 5 (Ordial)
      • Breaking
      • Thanhicism
      • Disruption
      • Casting
      • Protection
    • Charisma: 1
      • Ancient Speech Pack




    Abilities

    Hollow Abilities
    • Deathmarch
    • Endless watch
    Hollow Specials
    • Hollow Shell
    • Hollow Mend
    • Body of Infinite Holding
    • Artificial Hands
    • Dead Sight
    • Death Speech
    • Hollow Aesthetics
    Warden Abilities
    • Leader’s Rally
    Warden Specials
    • Warden’s Will
    • Made to Serve
    • Eternal Watch
    Magic Specials
    • Echoes of the Past
    • Guardians
    • Wraithwalking
    • Beast of the Beyond
    • Cursed Touch
    • Grave Armor
    • Minor Resurrection
    • Lightning Immune
    • Dark Element
    • Decay Element
    • Fire Element
    • Chain Break
    • Prison Break
    • Life Wall
    • Evil Tongues

    Language
    Common
    Deathspeech
    Ancient Speech



    Appearance Information

    • Amadeus has no corporeal form, he inhabits a suit of old armor
    • Amadeus once being risen, inhabited his old Blackmark blacksteel armor, while looking at him green ordial essence leaks from it.
    Life Story

    • Was born into a family of Knights, he like his father before him Served in the Blackmark charter.
    • He spent his days training, and serving under the empire, protecting the faithful and places of worship
    • One day a group of northerners came to destroy the unionist temple he was guarding, he tried his best to fend them off but he was overwhelmed, as he lay bleeding out, he called upon the everwatcher to help him, but nothing came.
    • He awoke to a ailor standing over him, he told him to follow the green essence, it would take him to where he needed to be, he told Amadeus that his service was not over, to renounce the everwatcher, to become a ward of Eir, to protect the Ordial faithful and the Ordial temple.
    • As he stood brushing himself off, he looked around for his sword but could not find it, he turned to the man and asked where it was, but the ailor told him not to worry, as he placed a hand on his shoulder a power coursed through him, he then held out a heavy blacksteel shield and said that the magic he imbued will replace the need for a sword.
    • Up until that point, Unionism was all he knew, he began questioning everything. Why had the Everwatcher not saved him, his love for it grew into anger. He fully renounced the Everwatcher thinking those who worship it weak and feeble minded.
     
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  2. IreliaRamora

    IreliaRamora The 5.5 hour shitpost.

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    Claimed for Review. Expect a response within 24 hours.
     
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    IreliaRamora The 5.5 hour shitpost.

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    Hello! There are a few changes needed before I can approve this:
    • You've allocated 15 proficiency points, but the maximum is 14. Please remove one point.
    • Please mark down that your Magic point buy is Ordial (as required by Undeadism)
    • Please expand on Amadeus's Appearance. If he's still connected to his Blackmark origins, this should be some form of Blacksteel armor.

      In your Life Story:
    • Please explain why Amadeus decided to steer towards magic in his afterlife, as opposed to keeping a mundane weapon.
    • Please expand on why Amadeus gave up on Unionism in favor of Ordial Occultism.

    Make these changes in TEAL, and then please tag me in a reply.
     
  4. yusuf12323

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    @IreliaRamora Artificial Hands is a hollow special They gain access to one of the Crafting Point Buy packs for free, and theres a speciasl for Wardens called Warden’s Will, it break the Constitution Proficiency cap by 1, meaning they can invest up to 8 points, instead of 7

    All changes done in teal!
     
  5. IreliaRamora

    IreliaRamora The 5.5 hour shitpost.

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    Being capable of investing another point does not mean you get an extra point for free. It simply means you can put 8 into the Constitution category instead of the normal 7.

    Additionally, the Artificial Hands special gives a Crafting point buy pack for free, however, this does not give another point to add the category. It is something you get without having to spend a point.

    Please remove one point and point buy pack from your Proficiency allocation, you are still at 15 points.
     
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