Shelved Character Alz'ersz

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    Full Name〙Alwi Yucinta Hállëvandëia
    Race〙Allar | Ksat-Nang | Body Silven
    Age〙19
    Gender〙Female
    Eye Color〙Pale Gold with Red Limbus
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    Given Name〙Seishu Yu
    ⊱〘Aliases〙Alz’ersz, Alzena, Alz’, Tithonia
    Sex〙Either
    Gender〙Often Female
    Sexuality〙Pansexual
    Preferred Weapon〙Elemental-themed Magic
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    〘Beliefs〙
    Alwi holds no reverence for any deities, but one could say she shows respect for them. All of them. The idea of Keyakinan makes sense to her. Influences in the Allar’s life have led her to in-depth knowledge of the Estellon pantheon and Loong Virtue specifically. There’s knowledge of Arken as well, but she finds the concept of worshiping one of her biological parents strange.

    〘Personality〙
    A mind and soul not fully intertwined, Alwi’s personality is sometimes a shoving match between the impulses inherited from her Arken parent and her ‘normal’ behavior. The part of her that is not influenced by her planar parent is energetic and optimistic, and incredibly loyal with a persistent curiosity. With any and all, her base assumption is, ‘people are good’. This comes from a somewhat deluded place, as it is blatantly contradictory to most of her life experience. She tries to reflect it in herself as well, and is very quick to befriend and forgive. In various circumstances, however, the potentially problematic side of the silven arises. Alwi holds a subtle but strong vanity in her form and appearance, and many individuals may mistake her curiosity and willingness to go along with their influence as flexibility, flattery or naivety. In reality, the Allar is on a near-constant obsessive trek to, in short, make herself the perfect being. There is the contradicting mindset of ‘I am perfect, but I could be better’ circling the back of her thoughts. She likes to try new things whenever she can, with the occasional slip of morality. These slips are met with tangled feelings.
    Summary:
    ⊱ Although she occasionally struggles with the impulses and obsessions lent from her Arken side, Alwi could be described as a generally happy go-lucky person who befriends many and holds strong loyalty to some, especially those she wishes to emulate. She fulfills an elemental mage role, and has been refining it since hatching.
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    14/14​
    Strength〘0〙
    Constitution〘2〙

    ⊱ Bruteforce
    ⊱ Tradeoff

    Wisdom〘0〙
    Dexterity〘4〙

    ⊱ Disguise
    ⊱ Parkour

    Magic〘7〙| Void |
    Displacing
    ⊱[Surfwalking | Airwalking | Sparkwalking]
    Materialism
    ⊱[Starwalking | Sanctum Vessel | Arcane Wardrobe]
    Mimicry

    ⊱[Altered Voice | Heat Immune | Cold Immune]
    Casting
    ⊱[Water Element | Snow Element | Wind Element]
    Blessings
    ⊱[Lunar Power | Life Wall | Light Element]
    Breaking
    ⊱[Prison Break | Chain Break | Stone Element]
    Illusionism
    ⊱[Fire Element | Spark Element | Arcane Sight]
    Greater Mage [7 inv.]
    ⊱Magic Blink | Perfect Copy | Magic Bolt
    Charisma〘1〙
    ⊱ East Linguist
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    Racials〙Allar | Ksat and Nang Specials
    Corresponding Abilities
    Silven〙Body
    Body Special
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    Wai-lan〘East Linguist〙
    Pidato〘Native | Sign Language〙
    Common〘Learned〙
    East Linguist〘Kriv, Dvalan, Réginyelv, Înnora, Faraddi, Sofaal, Wai-lan, Talumpati〙
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    〘Mutations〙
    ⊱ Alwi’s very nature is a mutation. Due to her Body Arken heritage, the Allar is in a constant state of flux; scale color, fins and just about every other aspect without obscuring her identity or race can change in a moment’s notice. A gift from her late adoptive father left her with various mutations. Hideable wings, weightless fins, and lightly glowing translucent watery blood. Healing magic allows her to mimic bioluminescence as well.

    〘Base〙
    ⊱ As mentioned above, Alwi’s visual features are somewhat malleable, including height and body shape. What remains consistent, however, is her head that is a solid blend between Ksat and a Bichir fish with external gills, and aquatic features. Having had a mostly aquatic raising, the Allar leans heavily into her Nang Kedua. It is only among Ksat that she may feel inclined to make her Pertua features prominent. Her most common appearance is somewhat short, with average fins, a long tail and warm colorations.
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    Hatching〙Alwi hatched and was orphaned shortly after in the Scaleborough district of Dexai, left in livable albeit dismal circumstances for several years. When her Silvenism and magespark became too problematic for those that took her in, the young Allar left as a stowaway on a trade ship.

    Adolescence〙The ship was partway across the map by the time Alwi was expelled from it. This landed her in Hadar, where she met a brood Allar who taught her the ways of Penyhir and how to embrace her more planar qualities.

    Teenage Years〙when the brood left home to live a different life, Alwi left as well. Although, her voyage was an attempt to get back into Dexai. This proved difficult due to her occult status, and she was forced to turn around for subsequent unexpected adventures around the sea. Some better than others.

    Regalia〙The Allar found herself in Regalia some time later, ingratiating herself with the present populace of her kin with skills that were not her own due to a spell of hers. She was adopted by a Yanar, but this happy time was cut short not too long after by their adoptive parent’s death. In response, Alwi retreated to the continent of Hadar, but has now returned to Regalia in light of the recent civil war.
     
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    Review!
    • 1) Your body-stat is capped at 10, fix this.
    • 2) You need Linguistics points to know a third language. Fix this.
    Tag me @Havsbris_ and mar your changes in Blue

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    Made a few edits to reflect Alz'ersz's skills better! Changes marked in Green.

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    Switched out the "Question List" option for the "Core List" in the personality section due to constantly changing views on things other than religion and such. Also added to the life story and Alz'ersz's name!

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    Added some of the optional expansions and changed my character alignment due to IC stuff.
    The new alignment is marked in blue!

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    Character has been infected with Vampirism. This means changes in Alignment, life story and an addition of Vampiric mutations have been written.

    Changes marked in red!

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    Proficiencies updated in BLUE!

    There will be changes to almost everything else soon, but it's not fully written yet. Proficiencies may also be subject to change as things are figured out further.
     
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    Please tag your reviewer in the future whenever you make any edits to a character application, especially in this case with the Proficiency Update. For now, tagging your reviewer, @Havsbris_
     
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    Please make the following edits:
    • Keel-Allar height minimum is 4'5. Be sure to increase your characters height by 5 inches to remain in the limitation of the sub-race.
    Tag me once you've made the following edits in a color of you choosing.
     
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    Changes made in Purple! Vampirism inactive now.

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    Changed just about everything in the App while bringing the character back, so a complete re-review will be needed!
     
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    Claimed. Expect a review shortly.
     
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    Please make the following edits and tag me when complete!
    Please add which genetics pack you bought here.
    Please add which alchemy packs you bought here as well.
    Please add which sorcery spells you bought here as well.
     
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    Restarting the Character! Big changes:
    > Name
    > Subrace to fit update
    > Proficiencies overhauled
    > Non-custom kit Silvenism + Magespark Added
    > Visual Info adjusted
    > Life Story compacted and origins adjusted. Now from Dexai.
    Basically rewritten entirely.
    Complete Re-Review needed!
     
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