Alyhna Agitheos

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  1. RememberTheGame

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    "Aloria! Flat? Obsurd! Aloria is ah' Hexagon! What ar' ya' on about!?"
    - Alyhna Estina Agitheos, the worst example of an Ailor.

    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Alyhna Estina Agitheos, though she has been known to call herself Ally.
    • Age: 29, born on June the 21st, 275AC.
    • Gender: Female.
    • Race: Ailor.
    • Main Ambition: She wants to know everything, an adventure for knowledge.
    • Special Permission: None.
    An Expansion to Basic Information

    Alyhna has properly lived in Regalia her entire life and is too scared to actually move away though she has had ideas to move to Ithania, she currently funds herself by working in different jobs and is interested in going into a more illegitimate line of work to progress herself. She currently rents out a house with a friend, to try and be a little more cost effective, though she isn't the best with money.

    She was raised in lower wealth, often having to learn things for herself without the benefit of Education although she was able to regulary attend it around the age of eight to seventeen, she constantly bounced jobs and hobbies and through this collected a majority of skills which stray from tailoring, engineering to basic athletic capabilities such as parkour.

    Different ideas strike her mind when she thinks of what she wants, though there are a few constant ones that come instinctively; she wants to be known for something good, not for something bad and is willing to achieve this at any cost, even if that means the ultimate sacrifice. She also wants to be successful in life, due to gender and social hierarchy capabilities she can see that she cannot get far but she wants to get as far as she can.


    Visual Information
    • Eye Color: Light blue.
    • Hair Color: Dirty blonde.
    • Hair Style: Shoulder height, though she often puts it in a ponytail.
    • Skin Color: White / Pale.
    • Clothing: Depending on the mood, scenario and occasion, she will try and wear the correct clothing to suit the matter. For day to day and higher class events, she will wear a dress, for work or more athletic means, she will wear more baggy and masculine clothing, something she can easily dispose of if it becomes dirty or damaged.
    • Height: 6'2"
    • Weight: 165lbs.
    • Body Build: Pear / Mesomorph
    • Weapon of Choice: Khopesh.
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    The Half Done Visual Information Expansion
    • Alyha often wears dresses, often consisting of lower class though she has some more expensive dresses which she would use if she ever had to appear a little more higher class. She often wears a silver ring that looks like it should contain a diamond but well, lacking the diamond along with an Opal necklace. If one was to check her inventory, be that from an arrest or just a robbery, they'd find a translation book of Common Regalianish to D'Ithanie and a book of Unionism, though they would both look old and damaged.
    • Alyhna has a very rough Commoner Regalianish accent and can often come off as very hostile or even uneducated at times from somebody who tries to stereotype her, she is prone to the occasional stutter and frequently loses track of what she is saying in conversation, often ending up with an barraige of 'Uhs', this can be worsened depending on the scenario, say if she was talking to somebody of high wealth or ability in combat.
    Personality and Abilities

    Personality Traits

    "Oi, have some respect for them. Without them, you'd be nothing, a piece of dirt on the road."
    Disciplinarian: Due to a borderline Commoner childhood, she was often forced in line to prevent her from doing something overall stupid and well, this is something that stuck with her across her life. If she feels somebody is superior to her, she will fall in line and obey their every command with a degree of self awareness ofcourse, as she knows this can be abused very easily.
    "Let me 'ave a bloody drink in peace 'cha man-whore."
    Masculine: Alyhna isn't the sort of person to willing fall into a stereotype, she will often wear clothes often linked to what a man should wear and will try and do things which would be looked down apon in those times, be that the plain stupidity of parkour or making drinking a habbit. She doesn't know why she is like this, all she knows is that its their and could result in her doing some unadvisable things.
    "Hey look, an open 'atch with 'cha name on it. Wanna go explore, 'cha lil-bitch?"
    Adventurous: Alyhna loves trying new things be that of any nature. This is something that is very obvious when doing nearly anything with her as she tries to do almost anything she hasn't done before though there is an extent to this, be that she isn't interested in going to prison for murder just because, she is just interested in reasonable experiences such as parkour, sewer exploration, diving or swimming. Stuff like that.
    "Fuck you, I don' care what anyone says. I'm 'dah best at beat boxing, bitch."
    Arrogant: Alyhna is often a little bit over descriptive of her skill, more than a little bit actually. She will often describe herself superior at a select skill than somebody else who may be slightly better or equal to her and that doesn't really make herself a likeable person at times as she will willingly rub it in somebodies face when well, its completely idiotic and useless when she was the inferior person in that scenario.
    "Oi, stop suggesting Aloria is flat. Its a fuckin' hexagon 'cha dumb cunt."
    Short-tempered: While unknown to her if this is something she was born in or converted into during her time in discipline, she is very easily pissed off and that does cause issues in relationships and even the work place, she often swears a lot due to this and actually swearing became the natural to her. Though, to be real she is very easily angered and will often release this anger with verbal means, though she tends to avoiding physical issues, being scared of breaking the law or hurting people and all.
    "If they pull a weapon, break line of sight and run towards the back entrance, Avoid contact and escape as quick as possible."
    Uninhibited: She isn't a very chilled person, at least most of the time she isn't. This completely blanks while drinking which actually does sort of lead her towards the road of alcohol abuse. She often has eyes on every exits, all possible weapons and defences and all possible threats and this always keeps her on edge, makes her paranoid and well, makes her sad. This sometimes stops her from making friends, who would want to be friends with somebody who is prepared for literally everyhting they could think of after all? That wouldn't be fun.

    Strengths
    • Light Magic: Throughout her life, she has constantly come and gone from this ability but has become more skilled in it in recent times, due to her trying to find usefulness in Regalia and well, this is it. She is around the skill of a Caster after practising for a few years. If one was to find out, the only reason she began practising this was to become a better person, so that she could help people effectively. She is far more effective at Healing light than anything, trying to become more educated in Cleansing light although thats mostly as far as she could go at the moment.
    • Nicoloan Fighting: Though this was a forced skill on her from her parents, she does not like to discuss or use it in day to day scenarios, more of a contingency incase she actually requires it to save herself or somebody else from a fate that could be worse from her openly revealing it. She is the rank of Usario (Practitioner) after years of training though does not believe in continuing the extent of her skill, only preserving it. Encouraged to do this from the Qadir attacks.
    • Parkour: A little hobby of hers and something she continously enjoys to do, she is a very fast runner and climber and can very easily escape somebody who is untrained in the subject and if the environment allows it, she is used to quick movement and effective movement patterns to conserve energy and speed. She is trying to invent more innovative and more effective methods of using this skill but to her its a hobby and well, a contingency. She also has combined this with techniques she learnt in Nicoloan fighting, to at least help make her a little bit better at combat.
    Weaknesses
    • Progessive Alcoholic: Herself trying to deal with her problems is overal very idiotic and well, doesn't often end well. One of these perfect and well though out ideas is Alcohol, she drinks a lot of it as she can though she has her restraints then again, when somebody gets worse enough then their personality becomes twisted and they lose the ability to see reason. She could come into work pissed or could be easily captured because of this.
    • Below-Average Endurance: Though this could be debated as a Pro and a con seeing that it could prevent muscle damage through excessive excerise yet she could not go the same extent, she could not take as many hits or run as long and that can be noticable in her hobbies, having to make constant stops if she can to catch her breath or just overal stop.
    • Physical Injury: Throughout her years, she has experienced a few ups and downs turning her training and that left scars or at least marks which she failed to ever get properly repaired nor is she interested in for some god awful reason. She has a little bit of an exagerated pain in her left side, due to that being her falling area incase she ever fucked up during training and well, this gets even worse when she is hit in the arm or shoulder.
    Likes
    • Unionism and its concept: Being raised in a Unionist Household and well, forced into the belief of Unionism. She enjoys its practise and extended knowledge in Regalians and Non-Regalians alike. She doesn't enjoy the amount of foreigners that come and insult her religion but knows when to back down from that.
    • Order: She enjoys the idea of Order through Resource Control and Management and often uses this as a technique in leading teams, she infact used this method during the Qadir Siege of Regalia as she lead a team to at least try to help them survive what was happening, to avoid what the fuck was going on above ground. Something she enjoys, be that small but still a very impactful thing on her day to day life.
    • Guard and Religious Charters: Something she aspires to be, a guard for one of the charters. A method of helping people, though she is afraid of harming another person, terrified of actually having to end another life. Something she actually adores and wishes to join the ranks of them, to find a proper purpose then healing, even though she believes that Healing is a very useful skill to have.
    Dislikes
    • Qadirs: Due to what she saw the Qadirs do during the siege, she actually has a firm dislike of them. She's not going to outright refuse helping them because of their race or at least she might if it was voluntary but she doesn't enjoy their company and will often be hostile towards them. If she was ever put under the same circumstances as the Siege, where she was allowed her own team and well, a Qadir was put under her command, lets just say they would die a swift death if it meant the slightest advantage for them.
    • Darkness: Vampirism is sort of what influences this, that and her fear of being incapable of seeing which often connects with her naturally uneasy self, she will try and avoid the dark at all costs, often keeping a set of Matches on her to at least have a chance at igniting something that could be used as a torch or just using the match as itself to light some darker areas, be that as little light as it produces.
    • Vampires that enjoy the curse: There is something completely wrong with people who stay a Vampire because they believe it makes them somewhat better, even when there is no actual situation at hand. She will often show a lack of disrespect towards these people but this could change, as she herself is a little bit hypocritical towards this concept, which can be further learned about in the Life Story.
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    The Adventures of Alyhna Agitheos

    Basic Rundown


    Alyhna Estina Agitheos was born on June the 21st, 275AC at 09:13am, the ninth child to Visemarys and Alaena Agitheos in Regalia, a home birth. She was raised in a household that was borderlining poor and overall didn't have the best of luck when it came to financial demand, the parents often unable to feed themselves and this fact taught her how sacred families are, how they aren't something to be toyed with. She wasn't the sort of person to play around with toys and indulge herself with story books but was a very active child and her parents often took note of that, her being the most active out of all the children and well, they chose her and her eldest brother to go to a Nicoloan Fighting School located in school in Daendroc, something she personally didn't like but still, it was for her parents and she didn't want to disapoint them so she tried her very best to complete all the tasks given, like her elder brother, who was actually a very good student, above average she was told.

    She attended that school from nine to eleven before anything really interesting occured, that being the lovely Chrysant War which she can't think about without nearly having an emotional break down. Why? Because her father and four brothers died in that war, including her brother who attended the school with her, who actually broke out to enlist. She all this time wasn't told a year after the war ended, after she escaped as well as requested by her parents as they believed she might be held there. When she returned, distraught and torn apart. She'd literally been unknown to her parent and siblings death for nearly five years, even finding out that they couldn't recover the body for her father and well, she avoids this subject as she can't stand handling it, an easy method of manipulating her if one was to somehow find this information.

    After returning at Sixteen, her mother had ended up remarrying to try and deal with the family as they eventually grew older and older as well, a single mother taking care of five girls would not be the best idea possible, they often being told to get married as quick as possible to live a better life, to do anything to get out of what happened. Alyhna was often scared of this and well, began to learn some more talents which could be used to earn a little more cash, help her siblings and mother for everything that happened. This is when she began learning light magic in the belief that she could use it to help others from the dangers that Regalia possessed, the belief that her brothers may have been saved by light magic, due to the lack of proper medical supplies further down the line of warfare.

    Though nothing very interesting happened through the years of her practising, an on/off sort of method towards it. She began to focus on it a little bit more in her twenties. Around this time, all of her sisters had already got married and left home while she was currently renting out a small room in a cramped house using money she'd earnt from working in a small cafe, its name I hear you not asking? Souprise. They specialised in soup, it wasn't a very high class resturant and more sold towards the less wealthy demographic. Around her twenties, she began practising parkour with the help of a few friends, this being a hobby, not a bragable skill for her. Around this time, it was just a continous stream of repetition, just practising her knowledge of light magic, nicoloan fighting and parkour with the added work from Souprise, which closed down in 299ac after it was found out that the owner was a Serial killer who overal did some lovely stuff. I'm kidding, he used to cut off the left ring finger and nail it to his wall, a very terrible person, he got the chop. She was actually very against him, completely despised him and was happy when she heard he was going to be executed, having a history of being beaten and verbally abused by him.

    After that business was shut down, she began searching for work and well, found it in a tavern called 'The Blind Lamb'. She worked in there for most of the time though she was often still studying Light Magic and keeping up with Nicoloan fighting, this is actually when she began studying and training with a Khopesh, which was given to her and taught by her current boss at the time, a Qadir named Abyad Khalifa. He was actually a person she believed in, due to the fact that he willingly taught her how to be effective, due to tensions and her overal fear that she would be attacked by a Sanguine or an armed criminal. Although it would be strange for somebody who practised in the art of Nicoloan fighting to take up a pracise of weaponry, she just believed that if she was much better equiped, she would learn how to successfully take somebody down without killing them, a more if you learn, you may be less capable of properly or signicantly harming somebody, all she wanted to do was stop someone, that was it. Not kill, not make their life a living hell, just stop them from causing harm.

    Soon after all the training, the Qadir's came and sieged Regalia. One of the reason why she doesn't like Qadirs very much anymore, even though she had much respect for one, that being damaged by this, an actual hatred towards the entire race from what they had done. Within a matter of hours, herself and a few work members fell towards the Sewers in an effort to try and get away from the madness, being collected by another ground and then another group, establishing a somewhat safezone inside the sewers, within days tension was said about rationing and the fact that they had a Qadir in the group, how he could be working with the Qadir invaders, how he does not respect the emperor. A lot of issues caused by the chaos, resulting in her boss being exiled after a fight which innitially had him to be killed, though she managed to lower the punishment. She doesn't actually know what happened to him and hopes for the best, even with her anger towards his kind.

    Within the first week, they had ran out of supplies and well, became despirite for resources. Even though they had innitially planned of waiting it out, they decided that they couldn't. Using the little amount of resources they had, a few weapons and little to none armor, almost all improvised from the resources they had on sight. Be that Leather, piled clothing or even wood at one point, it was still armor. They began choosing the groups of people to elect the most expendable person in the their group and well, she was chosen. Using her own weapon, the Khopesh she recieved earlier from her boss, she began working with a group of six on retrieving supplies. They were often met with constant attacks, the inability to move safely across the city and by the end of the war, that six man team had turned into two. Throughout all those runs, she had managed to collect a number of life saving materials, food and water that helped them survive and had confirmed the deaths of three Qadir troops at her hands, being able to live with it due to the fact that she saw them against the emperor, against her family and against Regalian people.

    An issue which constantly reminds her when she studies her light magic is that she failed to save one of those people, throughout that time a lot of them bonded and saw each other as a metophorical family and well, seeing so many of them die did not help her cope. Especially when she had the chance to save one of them but couldn't heal them intime, them dying from repeated stab wounds towards the lungs. Even though to any reasonable person, they'd die anyway, it would be more humane to try and put them out of their missery, she did not want to see them die. She had lost all her brothers and did not want to lose another one, even if they weren't bound by blood.

    Scared by the events that had happened, she was more than happy to see that the Banners had arrived to at least bring back her home to its former self. Returning home to find out that her sister had died due to a structural failure that may or may not have been sabataged though it was rather obvious who did it, confused on what to do, she began looking into different prospects and well, failed. After recently earning enough money from odd jobs, she has finally moved away from her mother towards a rented property and is looking for a new better job that would have a stable income or at least a more stable income than what she already has. Be that the Vigilant Shield, Crimson Inquisition, Bartender or maybe even an healer. She has no clue, she just wants to find her purpose in the world and do it.
     
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    Ethereeal A Study In Duality

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    This is aesthetic.
     
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    Did you read the purely immersive names I put in the backstory?
     
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    Ethereeal A Study In Duality

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    Truth be told I skimmed it - but I'll read it soon,
    Though the aesthetic is definitely eye pleasing!
     
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    _Grimmy_ Magic? More Like Mag-ick, am I right, purists.

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    Add the sub...
     
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    Review!

    All in all, your character is well done and nicely balanced, and actually garners some depth and emotion for those around her, unlike many others. Nonetheless, I did spot a few discrepancies which shouldn't take too much time at all to patch up.

    Firstly, you mention her learning to train Nicoloan Fighting in Regalia - how? That's not to say that it isn't feasible, but more so that any trainer of the art would keep to the less Guard-oriented districts to teach their students in private, due to the nature of the martial art having originated from slaves who overthrew their masters. The art altogether has very strong ties with anarchy, which is far from what Regalia tolerates. So I suggest you make Alyhna's progress through Nicoloan fighting very hush-hush throughout her backstory. I'd also like to see more regarding the stages of her life where she began to see improvement in her martial technique, alongside what she found difficult - be it the discipline or rigorous physical training. More detail on her physical ability overall.

    You mention her weapon of choice being a Khopesh, and yet I can't find any instance of her having trained with one within her lifestory. If you wish to keep it still, or substitute it for any other weapon, please mention her progress with training within the lifestory as well.

    Finally, her light magic. You mention her having learnt the magic over the span of a few years, aiming to use it to aid people. I'd like to see more clear cut instances within which she does just that, actually comforted by her progress and lack of powerlessness to aid a friend in need? It's your call. I feel it'd add more depth to her as a 'protector of the people'.

    Tag me once the necessary edits have been made in a different colour, and feel free to ask me any questions pertaining to the review here, @GodRoleplayer.
     
  8. RememberTheGame

    RememberTheGame The Local Chav

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    I admit to being a little bit confused on this so I doubt this is fully done to your expectation, I marked everything I changed of significance to red.
    Sorry in advance, working on all my character applications and forgot to recheck Alyhna so somethings may not respond as well they should.

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    TheBioverse ❖ Prince of Thieves ❖

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    How did I not get the notification for this.

    Accepted!~
     
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