Basic Information Full name | Alfred Freidrich Wulfmacht Goes by | Alfred Schmidt Age | Born 278 A.C. November 30th - Thirty Two Gender | Male Sexuality | Questioning Race | Wirtem Ailor Core Concept Alfred is man terrified by religion to his very core, he dedicates himself to no more greater powers, out of absolute terror. A former zealot once honor-bound to his household fallen from grace, he began a brief attempt at redemption, before disappearing off the face of the earth, and taking up a solemn duty of protecting those he cares about. Skill Information STR - 6 Blades Pack Large Blades Pack Short Blades Pack Blunt Pack Polearm Pack Unarmed Pack CON - 3 Light Shielding Heavy Shielding DEX - 3 Parkour Pack Disguise Pack Stealth Pack WIS - 0 MAG - 2 + 3 Cahal [Exist Based] Water Magic Pack Ice Magic Pack Afflicted Predator Pack [Cahal] Afflicted Cursemaster Pack [Cahal] Afflicted Heartbeat Pack [Cahal] CHA - 0 Languages Calem | First Language (Fluent) Common | Second Language (Fluent With Heavy Accent) Special Traits/Mutations/Spells Etc Ailor racial abilities Appearance Information No mutations, however there is excessive scarring over the entirety of his torso, and his left arm starting from his elbow is missing. Alfred stands at six foot three, with blonde, messy, and frizzled hair, with blue eyes and deep bags beneath them; his musculature is fading, and now significantly more heavyset. Alfred's Cahalic form is a white bestial creature with wolf like features, white hair, and bright blue eyes; notably the creature is missing its left arm starting from its elbow. The creature is slightly larger than Alfred is but has significantly more musculature and vasculature than him, further the fact it is Alfred is indistinguishable. Character Backstory Born in Calemberg to House Wulfmacht, Alfred was born into a warrior lineage of zealots. Alfred's early teenage years were spent preparing to enter the military, upon the request of his father and at the standard age for men in Calemberg. After spending several years in service, Alfred's wife passed in childbirth, and send Alfred into a downward spiral, only to be brought back by his brother. Upon being rescued by his brother, Wilhelm, Alfred came to Regalia to aid in the Wulfmacht's gamble for power, which ultimately only left the man scarred and disappointed not only in what his brother preached, but in his failure to persevere. Alfred returned to Regalia with the intention of escorting his niece to the city, but decided to stick around for the purpose of becoming a wandering drunk.
@MrBlwe here is my review: Basic Information - No issuesSkill Information - Clarify that 'Waldmark Dialect' is Alt-Regalian. The 'Dialects', such as Waldmark or Calderligan dialects, are just accents of the same language. Think like... The difference in slang / wording / terms used by an american from boston vs an english person from southern london. It's both english, technically, just with different english words for roughly the same things. If that makes sense. Anyway. Clarify that it's Alt-Regalian. - Talent point investments aren't a thing. I assume you meant hobby point investment. Pathfinding isn't a talent proficiency, and you don't get free talent points. - You need to invest at least 5 points into perception before getting your racial boost.Visual Information - No issuesPersonality - No issuesLife Story - No issues Please make the requested changes then tag me.
@Lizmun Hey thank you for approving me, but you didn't change the tag. Not sure if it is an issue on my part or what but just figured I'd let you know.
Changelog - 1.1 Proficiency overhaul, got rid of Duchess Morgann Society all other points shifted around aside from schools. Aesthetic overhaul. Minor changes to backstory. Personality update after fleshing out character. + Major Aesthetic overhaul @Lizmun Character sheet overhaul! Would appreciate a re-review! Thank you!
@Lizmun Hi, big over-hall in light of engineering being really cool LOL additionally updated things as things progressed icly, added a small portion to the backstory to explain where his intrigue for engineering came from, lastly wrote down rokhaalism
I am claiming this character application for staff review! Expect a response within the next 24 hours.
✪ Staff Review! ✪ In order to add on your additional 5 point racial boost, you will have to have at least 10 points accumulated into said boosted Proficiency. Your blade combat only hold 9. Also, if you could please specify which type of blade your character is trained in, that would be perfect. Please note that Alfred's eyes are now red, this is free to change, without bumping me, once he is cured or somehow broken from Affliction. You explain in the Life Story a bit about Alfred's blood-lust and warfare. I would like you to elaborate a bit on the travels he endured! Was he horsing around the lands, or did he stay in the same city for the duration? Did he attend any wars that his violence encouraged him to join? Please along with include where Alfred was born, or where him and his family reigns from. Otherwise, your backstory is great. Please mark your changes in another color and tag me once done.
@Volaie Hey-ho, so, made changes, backstory blurb was edited in pink, red eyes were added to visual info, aaaand prof change to accustom for your request was made, blades turned to 14 + 5 racial boost, and shield went down to 16
If I am doing my math correctly, you have gone just /one/ over your 50 points. Please kick a single point out!
@Volaie Hey! Updated my character application for the new prog system / ailor racial abilities, not sure if I had to totally overhaul for the new sheet, was told by some people I didn't, if I do I can get that done real quick, thanks!
@Volaie i just realized i never even pinged you. Okay I updated Alfred, idk if you still wanna be the reviewer so the tag is changed accordingly, hope you're day is going well
@Yurs requesting re-approval in light of new prof update, I pray for all of you in light of appageddon
@Yurs Need a re-review after ic development, just a prof shift and mild update to character concept section
@Caelamus Alfred has been turned into a Cahal, as well as slight updating to visual appearance, requesting re-review please
