Art by Mr. Evan! <THEMATIC> Spoiler: Art Art by Mr. Death! Art by Mr. Death! Art by Lyrae! Art by Lesly Oh! Art by Lyrae! Full Name | Aleksandra Voronkovna Dragić, Aleks Race | Wildland Ailor, Krainivaya Age | 24 Gender | Female Sexuality | Bisexual (Preference for women.) Eye Color | Light Blue. Current Titles | Countess of Kyizamok, Minister of Law ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Aleksandra believes in Dogmatic Unionism fully as she was raised entirely in Kyizamok, albeit still accepting of other forms of Unionism. Aleksandra is the Law Minister of the Regalian Government, and is an all around fighter and general. ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Total Points | Strength | 2 Tactician Pack Skirmisher Pack Constitution | 1 Bruteforce Pack Wisdom | 1 Grauwald Wisdom Dexterity | 2 Roguery Point Buy Parkour Firearms Point Buy Purity Pack Magic | 0 Charisma | 8 Mount Husbandry Pack Cheval du Ciel Pet Husbandry Pack East European Shepherd State Leadership Pack State Dignitary Pack State Saboteur Pack Empire Linguist Pack Ancient Speech Pack ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Ailor Specials Ailor Familiar Dark Empathy Seizing Destiny Seizing Innovation Practiced Speech Ritualism Ritualistic Manifestation Ritualistic Scripture Ritualistic Crafting Light the Path ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Common | Passive Kriv | Parental Empire Linguist Pack ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Aleksandra has no abnormal physical traits other than a few scars here and there. Aleksandra's blonde hair reaches only to the edges of her shirt collar in the back and to her mid-cheek on the sides. Her height is 6'4'' and is quite muscular, which came to fruition from the efforts of her training. Voice Claim | Varvara Chaban Familiars | Ryurik, Cheval du Ciel Yaroslav, Eastern Imperial Eagle (Ailor Familiar) Rostyslav, East European Shepherd ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ ⫷‒════════════════════════════{⛞}════════════════════════════‒⫸ Childhood | Aleksandra was born in Kyizamok to Voronkov and Katerina Dragić. Adolescence | She usually spent her teenage years learning from her father the way of the axe and was forced into learning to care for the House and its members. She attended the Regalian Statesman Academy at fourteen due to her father paying for her tuition. Early Adulthood | Recently, she also attended the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy, allowing her to flourish and serve the Empire she lives in. She aspired to become a General within Regalia as well as being able to support her family to the fullest. Regalia | Aleksandra decided to move to Regalia because it was freeing, as she was able to escape her household and work without being held back. She wished to make her life her own and create a family of her own. Spoiler: Full Life Story Aleksandra’s beginnings were not… humble, per se. She grew up in a mainly patriarchal household according to usual Krainivaya cultural norms. As she entered childhood, her father quickly chose her to be his successor and forced her into a path, ironically, of toxic masculinity, abuse, and manipulation. He originally sought to appoint a male, but after Serafim, her twin brother, proved to be a failure in his eyes, she was chosen instead. She learned the ideals of Krainivaya culture, gender roles, and fashion; Aleksandra was taught anything that was “traditional” in the eyes of her father and her house. She picked apart what she believed was correct within the culture while also having her father instill their values into her. She became completely one-minded at the fact that she was going to be the next “Patriarch” of the family, seemingly almost brainwashed to pursue the goals that her father had set out for her. During her lessons one day, she met a small imperial eagle. Even when her father would continue to abuse her, the little eagle stayed by her side. It watched over her, flying away to hunt for her. One day, the animal came back, injured and defeated. Aleksandra knew what she had to do and healed it the best she could for her young age. Soon after, they became even closer, an inseparable bond. Once she had made it to fourteen, Aleksandra was sent to the Regalian Statesman Academy. At eighteen, she was inducted into the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy; she learned how to be a commander, a leader, and a soldier. Her father required her to become the ideal leader of her house. At twenty-one, Aleksandra was lucky enough to attain the rank of General in the Regalian Military after graduating from the Marshal Academy. Although, she had only achieved a low ranking spot. She then bought a black Cheval du Ciel from a horse breeder, naming him Ryurik. At twenty-four, Aleksandra now aims to prove her merit and gain prestige within Regalia, furthering her military career as best she can. In the end, Aleksandra hopes that she will lead her house into greatness as its… “Patriarch.”
Welcome to the server! Let's get down to this review; You have only used 26 of your 50 Skill points, and 0 of your Hobby Points, please list these as unused or feel free to spend them wherever. Please expand a little in your Life Story about how Aleksandra came to learn the skills she knows, and any other hobbies or major events that occurred in their life that developed them into who they are today. Shoot me a tag when these edits are done and we'll get you approved!
Awesome, however you also need to mark any skillpoints as unused too, you have currently spent 26, so you have 24 points left to spend of your 50 Skill Points. Also, Dancing Arts grants 0.5x Physical Stat on investment, so you'd only get 4 Physical Stat from this, your new Physical Stat would be 16.
@Lionfiles Hi, sorry for the delay. In the case that your reviewer is no longer staff, you can always swap your app to Needs Review, and it should help. Outside of that, after reviewing your application, everything seems to be in order. Approved.
@Follower Hey there! I had to change a lot about Aleksandra after finding out more about Vladno culture. Thank you so much!
Claimed for review. Please mark your linguistics investment under your core points invested. Mark this change and tag me when you’re done. @Lionfiles
@Acosmism I decided to change Aleksandra from Altalar to Ailor because it made more sense with the Vladno culture. I did a lot of reworking with the proficiencies and some familiars. Changes are in BLUE! Thank you!
There's only one thing to change & it's just a slight technical error. You can just change the 9 in "9 Linguistics (12 Core, 3 People of Many Tongues)" to a 12. Or 15 if you'd also rather keep the People of Many Tongues point addition, but you don't have to. But, this isn't something I'll hold your review for. Approved! @Lionfiles
No worries. You don't have to put your app under Re-Review unless you're moving 10 or more proficiency points around, or are doing something with your abilities. Anything that's a prominent change to your app, basically. @Lionfiles
