Nyla

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    “The world breaks everyone, and afterward, some are strong at the broken places.”

    -Ernest Hemingway


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    〘 birth name. 〙 Alannah Ní Lazarus snoicheann an tine a cosán féin Klaus Uí Riordan

    〘 imperialized full name. 〙Alannah Lupenzi

    〘 lovingly nicknamed. 〙 Red, Strawberry, Lana.

    〘 alias. 〙Nyla

    〘 age. 〙 25

    〘 gender. 〙 Female

    〘 race. 〙 Ailor

    〘Culture: Ériunin and Ithanian. 〙

    〘 sexuality. 〙 Heterosexual

    〘 preferred weapon. 〙A length of chain, used as a whip.

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    【Total points: Forty】

    ➣ 【+24 Linguistics Knowledge】 — +12 culture boost, +10 spent, +2 ailor boost

    ➣ 【+10 Lashing Combat】 — +10 spent

    ➣ 【+10 Perception Training】 — +4 spent, +6 boost

    ➣ 【+ 4 Musical Arts】— +4 ailor boost

    ➣ 【+ 4 Food and Drink Sciences】 — +1 spent, +3 boost

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    〘 build. || physical stat: 10. 〙

    — Toned body shape

    — Moderate body fat

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    〘 languages spoken. 〙

    ↳【Ériunin Dialect | Fluent | Maternal】

    ↳【d'Ithanie | Fluent | Paternal】

    ↳【Common | Fluent | Free Language】

    ↳【Modern Altalar | Fluent | Six points invested】

    ↳【Skodje | Fluent | Six points invested】

    ↳【Alt-Anglian| Fluent | Six points invested】

    ↳【Daendroquin | Fluent | Six points invested】

    ➤ Elven Pack |

    【⤷ Twi Dialects: Based on no IRL Language and was the Language of the ancient Altalar. Used in their earliest years, both forms (Twi’Alac spoken tongue and Twi’von Script), were extremely crude compared to modern Languages, the Script being painted on cave walls. Some believe that the Language was so crude in speech because there was an external, Magic component, but this has yet to be proven.】

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    〘special traits/spells/mutations〙

    Shilôt bloodline

    ➺ status: active

    Vinteaar Partying

    Vinteaar Elegance

    Vinteaar Thickening

    Vinteaar Providing

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    〘eye color〙Cobalt blue

    〘hair color〙Raven black

    〘hair style〙Long and flowing, kept in a ponytail of sorts.

    〘skin color〙Tanned peach

    〘clothing〙Flowing, elegant dresses or robes, adding her own bits of flair to them.

    〘height〙5’6


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    〘character alignment〙

    ↳ Lawful Evil

    〘personality type〙

    ↳ the executive - ESTJ-A
    ➺ 92% extroverted, 8% introverted
    ➺ 54% observant, 46% intuitive
    ➺ 72% thinking, 28% feeling
    ➺ 72% judging, 28% prospecting
    ➺ 75% assertive, 25% turbulent
    〘religion〙

    ↳ Atheist

    ➺ believes in no gods. only believes in herself.


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    Childhood. ― { 0-12 }

    On a dark night in August, 281 AC, screams from an inexperienced mother echoed throughout Old Town. Shortly after, the crying of a newborn could be heard. That newborn would be given the name Alannah Renae Riordan. Joyful that her daughter had lived after all, Aoibhin Riordan held her precious baby to her chest, never letting her go-- even as the wet nurse bustled forth to wash her off. A few days later, after Aoibhin recovered, she stole away in the dead of night, bound for her beloved Ériu-Innis, not telling the father of her child the news. Alannah would grow up without a father and as such, Aoibhin simply did what she could to make her young daughter’s childhood a decently pleasant one.


    Adolescence. ― { 12 - 18 }


    When Alannah turned twelve, she grew curious as to why her father wasn’t in the picture. Going to her mother, she demanded to know the truth and after much convincing, Aoibhin told her the story of how she came to be. She discovered that her father’s name was Lazarus and that he was a Bloodcast Knight, with a love for tea. To Aoibhin’s surprise, Alannah was not sad. In fact, the young girl was determined to become a Knight, just like her dad. So, when her fourteenth birthday rolled around, off to Regalia she went, immediately beginning her training at the Castle Duurwallis, not letting anyone know her true identity.

    Knight times.. ― { 19 - 23 }

    During her time at the Castle, Alannah was met with trouble all along the way. She simply wasn’t built to be a fighter, but she still kept that determination, showing her instructors that she could handle the rigorous training. Unfortunately, this training would come to a halt shortly after her nineteenth birthday. After a long fight against two brazen drunkards, Alannah lost and was ‘rewarded’ with several gashes on her back. Passing out from the loss of blood, the men no longer found her entertaining, and walked off, laughing. She didn’t recall being taken back to the Castle. She did not want to give up the Bloodcast training, given how close she was to graduating and carried on, more determined than ever.

    Present times. ― { 24 }

    After she graduated, Alannah immediately returned to Ériu-Innis. While she was there, her mother had given her a present for graduating, the gift being two snowdog pups to train and raise as her own. She stayed on Ériu-Innis for a year,living off the land like a true Ériunin. But, she had grown tired of this and decided to return to Regalia once more. In the span of four months, Alannah has reunited with her father and plans to keep him as a constant figure in her life.


    The sweet hereafter ― { Now }

    But now, she has found the love of a man named Ignis. She has been infected with the Shilôt bloodline and has changed her appearance to avoid detection by those she once knew.


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    Edit Log!

    5/20 : Made changes to points, personality and life story.
     
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    Hello! I will be claiming this for staff review!
     
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    @Caelamus Hey hey, Cael. I made some changes to her app. I've adjusted her points, making her more medical and sneaky centric. I've also changed her personality a bit and added more to her life story.

    These changes were made in this color! If anything needs... well... changed, lemme know!
     
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    @Caelamus

    I've made more changes to her app. I've changed her proficiency points around, changed the personality to the Core template and made some edits to her life story. This will be the last change for a long while. The changes are in this color.
     
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    Sorry @Caelamus

    I changed some more stuff. It's all in this color. Mainly it's points, languages and life story.
     
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    @Caelamus

    Hey. I made some more changes. (Sorry! xD) I fleshed out her personality more and changed one of her languages. They're in this color. :3
     
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    Hey @Caelamus

    Distributed her points a bit, made her combat more even and such. Changes made in this color.
     
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    Hey there @Caelamus .

    I made some more changes to this app. Mainly a point shift, added a new language and personality shift, nothing too major. Changes made in this color.
     
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    @Caelamus

    I'm sorry for so quickly updating this. It's the usual points shift, language shift. But, I've added more to her life story. It might not really need a re-review, but I don't want to update it this much without at least tagging you. The changes were made in this color.
     
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    @Caelamus

    Last time I'm updating this for a while. I'm really sorry. Changes were made in this color.
     
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    @Caelamus I did a complete overhaul, so requesting to be re-reviewed. Thank you.
     
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    Quietly feels concerned in background.
     
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    @Caelamus Since I haven't used Alannah's abilities as an Alais, I have changed her bloodline. I've also added an alias and added more to her life story. I made these changes in a lovely dark teal.
     
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