Character Information Full Name: Alain Joseph Trentine Race: Ailor, Luetz-vixe Age: 28 Gender: Male Eye Color: Green Core Concept A kind and generous knight with a strong love for his empire and his duty, charitable to a fault and willing to defend those he respects with his life. Alain has been struggling internally after the vampire incursion, becoming distant and thoughtful in his actions and finding a new zealous attitude towards sanguine and their allies Proficiencies Strength: 3 Blades Pack Large blades pack Axes Pack Constitution: 4 Physique Pack Bruteforce Pack Wood Craft Pack Threads Craft Pack Wisdom: 3 Affliction Knowledge Grauwald Wisdom Pack Engineered Biotics (Hallowtech) Dexterity: 0 Magic:0 Charisma: 4 State Leadership Pack State Dignitary Pack Empire Language Pack Mount Husbandry Pack (advanced mount) Abilities N/A Languages Common (Free) Letz (Native) Empire Linguist Pack (Linguistics) Appearance Information All normal save for his left eye which under the patch is merely scar tissue in a socket, remains of a large claw stabbed into his eye and severe burns Alain is a tall muscular man with longer blonde hair, a full beard, and green eyes, his left eye is covered by a golden patch and he is always wearing finely tailored clothing when not in his armor. He has a large tattoo of an ularan lion on his back and a few fresh scars across parts of his body Life Story Born in the capital as the son of a Regalian military officer and a devout unionist baker Alain was raised with a strong sense of nationalism, his mother often took him along to give bread to the poor teaching him to share his excess with those less fortunate. It was at this age that he met a Lion Pelt knight handing out clothing and food to the poor, inspiring him to become a Knight like the one he saw. Alain dedicated himself wholly to his Knightly training, thriving in the disciplined structure of a page and eventually squire. In what little free time he found he often spent time working on his wood crafting skills and stitching any damage he had done to his various outfits while training. Alain spent much of his early adult life serving a patron who traveled the empire for trade, while traveling Alain found himself learning a variety of languages useful for helping his patron as well as combat techniques from many different cultures. Upon leaving the service of his patron he returned to the city where he found employment under House Cadiuex for a time After the Sanguine Incursion and the loss of his eye to the void Urlann Quin Alain was struck by his inability to do anything and his failure as a knight, leaving the city to take time to heal he found himself in Ithania where his family now owned a small estate in their retirement. After time spent recovering, studying his new enemies, and training himself after healing Alain has decided now is the time to return to his true home
@Rose my review: I'm counting 38 points used rather than 35. I think the 3 in Ritualism is where the issue lies. I would suggest aging up by 3 years to solve this issue. capitalize Page in paragraph 2, and change Drexai to Dexai in paragraphs 3 &4. when these changes have been completed, please tag me.
@FireFan96 changes made to align with new Prof updates, backstory reworked to match, changes made in pink
@FireFan96 Made a few edits to his skills, namely got rid of schooling as knights are no longer allowed it and replaced it with linguistics, also allotted his final two points into more body care skill, a new paragraph to reflect recent RP has been made in Green
Edits: Updated to new format, added current events to his story, rest is basically just the old app reworked
