Approved Sheet Akurgal Gishkim

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  1. NoctisUmbra

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    Basic Information (Required)
    • Shortened Name: Akurgal Gishkim
    • Full Name: Akurgal Nesrum-Gishkim
    • Age: 35
    • Gender: Male
    • Race: Eronidas
    • Culture:Polon with the appearance of Imperial
    • Sexuality: Pansexual, leans towards male-presenting
    Core Concept
    • Akurgal is a devotee to Dragon Worship but understands that they don't seek worship, so he seeks to use their mission. The Call still has a hold on him. He seeks to better the world and himself with the experiences he has come across in this lifetime.
    • Akurgal is an experienced admiral seeking to strengthen the empire and orchestrate cooperation with the Eronidas population in Regalia. He tries to appear protective, strong, and kind but he is tactful with his words which come off as being quiet despite finding small talk awkward.

    A bag of 50 regals.
    Cigar tin
    Steamtek Cube Weapon

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    Skill Information (Required)
    Total Points: 46/50 spent + 10/10 spent Hobby - 4 Unspent

    • +10 BP Invested to Fist Combat
      • Heavyweight Palattu
    • +5BP One-hand Blunt Combat
    • +15BP+5RB Invested in Shielding Combat
    • +2BP Cooking Art
    • +2BP Dancing
    • +10HP invested into Sailing
    • Honed Skill 1
      • Goedlaic
    • Point-buy
      • Genetics
        • Voluism
      • +6 Engineering (Steamtech)
        • Weapon
        • Biotic
      • +3 Linguistic
        • Skodje
    Body Shape
    • 10+5+5+20-5= 35+(35/2)[Brawn Power 2]= 53 Physical Stat
    • Strongman Body
    • Built body fat
    Languages
    • Common
    • Vasar
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations
    • Eronidas Racial
    • 10 Sailing Art
      • Nau - A graduation gift from his father.
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    Appearance Information
    • Akurgal has a Crystaltech left arm made of emerald from a lover of his.
    • Akurgal is 8'2 Eronidas with a brawny figure, usually contained in Imperial inspired garbs or his Admiral uniform that take into account the Eronidas clothing style of accentuating his build. He keeps his neck covered with a blacksteel gorget
    Visual Information (Expansion)
    • Akurgal’s upbringing has given him a defined jawline, his forehead is a fair size. His hair is naturally curly, but he usually straightens it out and shaves the side of his head into a fade.
    • Akurgal has spent most of his early years working as a mercenary while subjected to his father’s continuous regiment, so he has packed some muscle. Akurgal stands at 8'2 feet tall, his height allowing him to garner quite a bit of attention in a room usually.
    • Akurgal usually wears a deep v-cut shirt and pants with some fitted boots, a blue sash across his chest, and around his neck is a blacksteel gorget covering his neck. The ensemble looks plain but it makes Akurgal look quite handsome with his physique.
    • Akurgal voice is deep and raspy, it’s like James Earl Jones's voice, even though it’s raspy with his measured tone and slower pace allows it to come off as commanding, but a bit soothing.
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    Progression Talents:
    • 2 Warrior(Forced), 1 Admiral
    Life Story
    • Akurgal was born on the outskirts of a Polon in Merredweg before he was adopted by Hadad into the Gishkim family.
    • Akurgal spent his teenage years doing his military training in the Polon, becoming a short-term guard for the polon before venturing into Regalia to attend the Naval and Marshlry academy.
    • The Eronidas served in the Imperial Army between 293-299 and the Imperial Navy in 302-present.
    • They came to Regalia after their deployment to the vampiric crisis, now they have entered the Marshal Cabinet.
    Born on the outskirts of an Eronidas city in Merredweg, Akurgal’s birth was supposed to be celebrated, but instead secretive. His mother looked at him for the first time with hate, she didn’t want this child. The woman raised Akurgal, hoping one day make money off of him by selling him to a mercenary or someone. When he was seven. His mother took him into the city and sold him to a mercenary captain that was visiting the city, he made the boy a trainee under him for the duration of his stay, teaching skills of his bloodline, how to handle weapons, and hand-to-hand combat. His father figure also taught him Palattu, going down to the city’s Kretōn to spar with members.

    By age 18, Akurgalhad grown physically and mentally, he had developed a lust for blood and entertainment often with his father figure in taverns drinking and in houses of entertainment. Akurgalwanted more than a life in the city. Mentioning it to his father, who was happy that the kid he had adopted was going to accomplish something, he used an old contact he had to get him into Regalia as well as giving him some money.

    Arriving in the Regalia took a month of travel, his father’s friend told him that he should get started with applying for an Imperial Academy, so he got directions to the Marshal Academy that allowed him in, three years of training, he graduated high, known for his fearless heart and an iron fist. Akurgal was put into the army, he enjoyed his squad and commander even fighting in some wars at the time.

    By the end of his service, he was a Soldier with a blacksteel arm. When Akurgal's service ended, instead of signing to another enlistment, he decided to enroll at the age of 28 at the Imperial Naval Academy to complete his quinella schooling. His father sent a congratulations letter, saying when he returns him he'll have a present for his achievement.

    Graduating, he signed with the Navy next, riding on his Marshal discipline and experience, He had a successful career and an eventful one. Serving in the naval, only made his dream of one day sitting in the cabinet more desirable, the Eronidas is currently in Regalia off duty, looking for more work.

    • Akurgal had an interesting encounter with Jared Bancroft Kade, who asked him to escort His Grace to the Princely Estate.
    • The Eronidas had a discussion of Dragon Worship with His Grace and The Matron
    • Akurgal has helped take back Greygate from the Sanguines.
    • Joins the Military Cabinet.
     
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    #1 NoctisUmbra, Sep 8, 2021
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  2. Caelamus

    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved, though the total should be clarified as 10 from investment and 5 from Racial. You had to of invested 10 into something to receive the racial.
     
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    A few changes, all in red.
    Cliff note:
    Swapped out whip combat for Shield combat and booped it up to 11 .
    The physical stat hit and became capped at 60.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved.
     
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    Updated for language and engineering, changes marked in red.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    These two do not align, why does someone who isn't very religious practicing a more unionist and religion guarded form of tech?
     
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    Switched to Steamtek instead
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    While I'm not going to outright put it into re-review because it doesn't need a full re-review, I will clarify that you shouldn't really be putting that the character is a general or admiral in a character's backstory. This was mostly an error on my part not being aware of the membership of the cabinet IG, but that is rank you should be attaining IG via joining the Marshalry Cabinet and being stationed as that role.

    While schooling implies the character can serve as a captain or an admiral it does not necessarily make them one by default, you still have to join the Marshalry Cabinet IG and participate in roleplay there. If you want to reach out and do roleplay with the military, you should get in touch with Athelois or find her IG.
     
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    Alright fixed the backstory with those notes.
     
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    Double pings, I was doing some calculating with my points, I had 10 so with bad math. I decided to put them into things and focus more on being a bulwark.
    Updated in red. Incredibly sorry, my friend.
     
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    Remains approved.
     
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    Heya Cael, I decided to move things around with the arc ending and entering the cabinet. Below is a summary.

    Summary of changes
    To commit fully to being a defender character, moved my RB to shield combat
    Realized I could get a boat from sailing and didn't realize it, edited the backstory to include it.
    Began learning about the dragon temples.
     
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    Reserved a point in Skodje for IC learning
     
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    Moved some points around to move his focus of fist to Bardiche
    Giving him a slight hobby of cooking
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @Acosmism
    I don't want to be basic Eronidas with 60 phys
    I added Voluism cause big boy and less phys
    Bardiche for one-handed for synergy with shield
    Sorry
     
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    Updated for the new update changes in red as I shift some points but will keep 6 points on the side for something. Talent points assigned as well.
     
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    You can take this out of your app or put it in a separate spoiler. Personality is no longer required on apps. You can say what you need to say about the character under Core Concept.
     
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    Fixed it
     
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    @Acosmism Aged Sargon up by a year and has gotten himself a Crystaltech arm so Steamtech isn't needed since he's rich with a emerald arm
     
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    Please keep the Steamtech invested for your character's arm -- Crystaltech also cannot be literal Emerald, or appear as any color other than blue/green/purple/pink. I also don't understand why this character is all of a sudden "super rich."
     
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    More so a joke that he has green crystal arm now. The reason he had steamtech biotic was to maintain his arm to avoid the prices of other engineers.
     
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    I’m still asking you to keep steamtech biotics.
     
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    To clarify, you can have a crystal tech arm made by someone else (that aesthetically complies), but you need to keep the biotics proficiency regardless.
     
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    Edited with biotic again.
     
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    I changed Sargon's name to be a bit more unique to Akurgal.
     
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