Approved Sheet Ailred Drulviirn

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    "Each gravestone is more than a failure - it is a promise to do better."
    THANKS TO @Rowet FOR THE AESTHETICS
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    《 BASIC INFORMATION || to note one's identity. 》
    « BY CHOICE » Ailred Drulviirn
    ↬ [ Nicknames: Ail, Ails, Huntie. ]
    « AGE » Thirty-five years exactly.
    « GENDER » Male
    « RACE » Maquixtl
    « PREFERRED WEAPON. » Dual Ulba Axes
    « BELIEF. » Jaded from past interactions with god-like entities, Ailred has come to believe at least some form of existence in all faiths, but remaining faithless. He believes all god-like entities have a part to play in a concept he calls the Eternal War that spans reality.
    « CORE CONCEPT. » Ailred was at one point a Champion of the Undercity now drowning in the regret of his past actions; a broken Maquixtl. He searches for a purpose, taking up learning more and more about the occult to fill the empty void of purpose inside of him. He now fights for anything he believe to be morally right, but being sanguine for so long chokes out morality.

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    “He’s right… We are the last of the real ones. The ones willing to push ourselves beyond the limits of the Gods.”
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    《 SKILL INFORMATION || to harness one's skillset. 》
    « TOTAL POINTS TO SPEND » - Fifty points spent alongside ten hobby points.
    « POINTS ALLOCATION »

    «STRENGTH» 6
    ↬ Axe Pack
    ↬ Unarmed Pack
    ↬ Polearm Pack
    ↬ Short Blade Pack
    ↬ Blunt Pack
    ↬ Flexible Pack
    «CONSTITUTION» 3
    ↬ Bruteforce Pack
    ↬ Light Shielding Pack
    ↬ Heavy Shielding Pack
    «WISDOM» 4
    ↬ Affliction Wisdom Pack
    ↬ Dimemthist Wisdom Pack
    ↬ Volacorum Wisdom Pack
    ↬ Healing Alchemy Pack
    «DEXTERITY» 0
    «MAGIC» 0
    «CHARISMA» 1
    ↬ West Linguist Pack
    ↬ Pet Husbandry (Free for Maquixtl)

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    “What is better- to be born good, or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?”
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    《 VISUAL INFORMATION || to show one's self. 》
    « DESCRIPTION » Ailred is a muscular 6’6 Maquixtl with small bits of scarring indicating a warriors lifestyle. most noticeable are the massive ramhorns emitting from his skull as a sign of his Genos. Assorted brandings from time to jail as well as a plume of feathers are hidden beneath clothing with tribal tattoos peeking their way out from under

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    “I’m lost. I want more, and I know I shouldn’t.”
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    《 PERSONALITY & ABILITIES || to know one's nature. 》
    « OBSERVER PERCEPTION »
    From the perspective of an outsider Ailred typically seems quiet and reserved for the most part. Around those he cares about he can take on a more jovial manner, and around those he can learn from he takes on a naturally curious nature. Unlike his time under the curse in combat Ailred shows to be a reserved combatant where in larger conflicts he’ll lurk around before trying to find the most vulnerable place to strike.
    « SELF EVALUATION »
    Ailred seeks to further himself: to evolve. This includes the physical aspects of himself, but he truly wants to develop the mental. Relying on the stereotypes of Avantl as his cover for pulling the strings while under the curse, he seeks to disprove those who find him mentally lesser while learning all that he can.
    « RELATIONSHIP HANDLING »
    Ailred struggles with relationships. Starting with early life isolation and the Maquixtl philosophy behind relationships, to harming those he once called ‘Brother’ in the recent occupation of the city. He’s slowly drifted away to comprehend what he’s done while still trying to be present enough let them know he’s sorry- even if it’s nothing but empty words.
    « MORAL ALLEGIANCE »
    Ailreds sense of morality is very skewed. His best reference points being either sanguine or the Maquixtl elders, but he’s slowly began to develop a moral code for himself.
    « INTRINSIC IDEOLOGY »
    Ailred is lost in what to believe currently, taking each day one at a time. He’s begun to read even more than he used to, simply trying to pass the hours while his body still craves to return to the curse.

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    “Strength lies in knowing oneself.”
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    《 LIFE STORY || to know one's background. 》

    • Ailred’s childhood was spent in a Maquixtl tribe, learning the culture of the tribe. He was born to an arranged marriage for the sake of strong Genos. Most of his time wasn't spent with his parents, but rather the Elders of the tribe, beginning his training as an Maquixtl.
    • At a young age the traditions of the School of Avant were instilled within Ailred, adopting the Avant axes also known to be Ulba axes as his weapon of choice, declaring his Patron god to be Ulbannor. He then began to begin hunts and raids against the surrounding Ailor and Eronidas peoples, spending time as an Avantl ambusher on the Ularen plains.
    • During one raid Ailred was taken as a slave for a local community of Eronidas. Here he served as somewhat of a gladiator as the position weakened his mental state, serving in such a dehumanizing position.
    • One night Ailred was able to break free from the slave encampment running into the woods where he was set upon by sanguine, only being saved by a young Xieloth that was his closest friend in childhood who had now given in to the curse.
    • Ailred became Wutienda Champion of the coven in due time. He served as Alethia’s personal bodyguard and right-hand. He followed her to Regalia, where his story truly began.
     
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    @KrakenLord01 Season 2 Ailred just dropped B).
    Reworked proficiencies to show him attempting to learn Sorcery Icly. These spells aren't learned yet- rather an outline of what I want him to learn going forward as to not continue tagging for updates for every spell.
    Other than that the boy is cured.
    Also moved to a new thread to clean up
     
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    Hi, I will be claiming this application for review. Expect one shortly.
     
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    Basic Information
    • This is fine
    Skill Information
    • Your physical stat calculation is incorrect. Your pathfinding would be divided by two before being invested into your stat calculation, making it 7.5. This would make your outcome 30.5, which would round to 31 in total.
    Visual Information
    • This is fine
    Personality
    • This is fine
    Life Story
    • Some of your wording is outdated. Orc doesn't exist anymore, use Eronidas. Doughall also do not exist, please use Wyrden.
    Mark these changes in GREEN and tag me when you are done. @war
     
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    @Acosmism Im done mom. This is why I need to not copy paste backstories after a lot of lore changes
     
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    @War_pig Approved. Also, please do not call me mom.
     
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    @Acosmism
    App updated o7 changed some prof points around. All marked in Blu
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @Acosmism
    I stopped being lazy, are you proud? Everything is updated to the best of my knowledge.
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @Acosmism I'm back, I know this might have to change again sometime soon, but Pathfinding got thanos snapped.
    Element Control 2 is gone. It didn't make sense for Ailred to just all of a sudden learn so many sorcery spells
    Hunting moved up to replace Pathfinding like ye olden days on Ailred. Extra hunting moved to fist
    Added Rogue Gift 4! I thought it would make sense for him to be stealthy to keep up the scout/huntsman vibe.
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @Acosmism I caved to the pressure, Ailred is now a Body Silven and I added a couple of new mutations that are a little more complex :D All marked in Red
     
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    Claimed for review!

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    @Yurs
    Sorry for the change again! I was recommended that I wait for the Avanthar update before I have Ailred be a Silven to ensure everything fits how I'd want it o7
     
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    Tbqh I think waiting for updates is a bad habit to get into, since there's no ETA on when that rewrite will be done. If you'd like to swap off Body Silven for the time being I'll approve it 100%, but don't feel like you NEED to wait for an update to pursue things you're interested in.

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    @Yurs Updated! I think I got all mentions of Avanthar and did the skill table right
     
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    @Yurs
    One thing I noticed was that Resilience Pack did the exact same thing as one of the Maquixtl racials, so I decided to change that to something more useful! Resilience -> Heavy Shielding. The Edit is in red
     
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    Approved.
     
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    Moved my single Dex point over to Strength to better fit how I play him. Edited in this color green
     
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