i have no words to describe how i feel when i trie to understand wich line means what. like srsly it's chaotic, make it less messy and a bit more structurised (or something along tha line, i needed google trans to be able to type this because i couldn't find the right words)
If your referring to the main gene pool being seraph, the humans, dwarves, elves, and Chi'i (which are left out, along with Wulong) should be closer, with the Elves and Chi'i being the closest. And like Arthur said, make it more clean and less clustered so people could actually read and understand it.
Altar are a more uncivilized pre race of Seraph. Dargan are a race of beast apex, thousands of years extinct. Uomo are the bridging "Human" Race that has devolved into the three split Human races hundreds of years ago. Naylar are smaller lizardlike beings, wingless Dragons. Thousands years extinct. Aquar are giant lizard and snake aquatic beings. The only Aquar species left are the Sea Serpents. Meraic is the civilization that existed before the Elven Empire, wiped out by the Demon invasion. They were the bridge race of the insectoid races.
Seems like the orcs got the dwarves missing height! XD Also I had a lore idea, and I wanted to talk to someone about it, can you help me?
wanna see something that does make sense? http://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/siege-weapons.15218/
Also off topic. I don't thing your suggestions are really needed Grim, though I am glad people are taking interest in the lore.
Or you would get eaten by it ... just like it would try to eat every single Maiar (maybe not the Northern Predator Maiar) Crug, I'll bet you 5 Regals the Avarr are gonna be as is their lore, they are decended from Normal-now flightless birds of paradise granted inhuman strength and stamina from devouring a fallen god so they will have their own Genus like the Maiar and Vespid
