Victane De Piedmont

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    《 Victane de Piedmont | The Eye of Judgment》
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    Full name: Victane de Piedmont
    ∘› Childhood nicknames: Vic

    Age: 31
    ∘› ʙɪʀᴛʜᴅᴀʏ ||October 21st ,274 AC
    ∘› ᴢᴏᴅɪᴀᴄ || Libra

    Gender: Male
    Race: Ailor
    ∘› ᴄᴜʟᴛᴜʀᴇ || Imperial
    ∘› ʟɪɴᴇᴀɢᴇ || Nautilaan

    Preferred Weapon: -


    - Reidane Valitorp’s Bracelet, family heirloom
    -Regal Pouch, about 100 regals.
    - Knapsack full of medical supplies
    -Thigh straps full of wrappings and needles.
    -Medical knife.

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    63 Points || 50 points + 10 Hobby + Honed Skill III

    ∘› 20 Medical Science (20 age)
    ∘› 3 Admiral Command (Honed Skill III)
    ∘› 9 Linguistics Knowledge (9 age)
    ∘› 3 Arcanology (3 age)
    《Curing Knowledge》
    ∘› 15 Strings Instrument (10 Hobby, 5 age)
    ∘› 3 Statesman Schooling
    ∘› 3 Diplomacy Schooling
    ∘› 3 Natural Sciences Schooling
    《Medical Sciences》
    ∘› 3 Financial Schooling
    1 point left, and unused.


    Body Stat ||
    ∘› Physical stat: 2/5 = 3 Body Stat
    ∘› Body Shape: Slim
    ∘› Body Fat: Average


    Languages ||
    ∘› Common | Learned
    ∘› Picaron| Father tongue
    ∘› d'Ithanian | Mother tongue
    ∘› Leutz vixe | Childhood
    ∘› New Regalian | Learned
    ∘› Modern Altalar | Learned

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    《 Victane de Piedmont | Son and Brother 》
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    ∘›Eye Color: Green
    ∘›Hair Color: Dark Brown
    ∘›Hair Style: Short, rugged hair.
    ∘›Skin Color: Pale
    ∘›Clothing: A breathable shirt that shows a bit of chest, and leather pants that goes together with a pair of boots.
    ∘›Height: 5’11


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    ∘› Character Alignment:
    A lawful neutral character acts as law, tradition, or a personal code directshim. Order and organization are paramount to him. He may believe in personal order and live by a code or standard, or he may believe in order for all and favor a strong, organized government
    ∘› Character Personality:
    Logician, as Victane often finds himself introverted but has a sharp sense for curiosity and interest in knowledge. While he doesn’t go out of his way to deliberately interact with others, it doesn’t mean he doesn’t have anything to provide in conversations, always willing to present his own opinion if someone asks for it.
    ∘› Religion: Unionism 5/10
    ∘›Racial abilities.

    Super Self II
    Mind Wall II
    Honed Skill III

    Vampire - Alais Bloodline: Inactive.

    Vampiric Shift:
    Black eyewhites, red fake lacerations across his body in red. Paler skin, pitch black eyes. A tail that stretches down the floor, thick and and long. A third eye rests in the middle of his forehead, providing no immediate use.

    • Crimson Guiding
    • Crimson Lies
    • Crimson Guile
    • Crimson Cloaking
    • Crimson Silence


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    ∘›Victane de Piedmont was born mere minutes after his twin, Victoria, to Bella de Piedmont and Reidane Valitorp in a comfortably sized home in Ithania. The two children were spoiled with love and affection from their unwed parents, their father taking a particular liking to Victane while their mother took to Victoria. However, when the children were at the age of two, Reidane disappeared abruptly, leaving behind his young children and their mother on their own. This did not have much effect on Victane’s childhood, as he could barely recall what his father was like as he grew older. In his youth, Victane developed a stutter that prevented him from conversing much with anyone besides his mother and sister.
    Without a second pair of hands in the household, Bella de Piedmont heavily relied on her brother, Maximilien, and his family for support while she worked during the day. Although Victane and his sister were under the care of their uncle and aunt’s care for the majority of the time, Victane felt that they still lacked a much needed parental figure. He was quick to realize that if someone was going to take care of him, it would be himself. Victane became an efficient young man and a quick learner, catching on to the language his cousins spoke frequently, Alt-Regalian, and later developing a deep passion for music, particularly strings. He brought this up to his uncle, who then purchased him a specially crafted violin, which Victane eagerly took up, and thus began his passion for music. On his tenth birthday he was sent off to Osteiermark to learn next to his other cousins for a few years about how to handle business and to learn how to fight for himself by his uncle, Pierre.
    Victane was often picked on by his relatives for his speech impediment, particularly his sister and female cousins, seldom for his cousin, Anne, who he rarely saw. While Victoria did not hesitate to pester her brother, she frequently stood up for him against their cousins, most frequently Violetta, though this did not mean that she was as kind behind closed doors. Victoria often instigated arguments and fights with Victane, who, in return, would attempt to negotiate and diffuse the situations- which was only successful half of the time.
    ∘› When Victane was thirteen years of age, he grew ill with a terrible fever. As no one in his family knew how to heal him, he was sent to the town medic. The boy would spend a week here, where he’d witness many things throughout his recovery. Some people would come in having been impaled, others inflicted with a disease, some even required surgery. While the sights were enough to make anyone’s stomach churn, Victane was fascinated by the possibility of saving a human life through the means of science. Over the next couple of years, Victane would often volunteer to help the town’s medic, acting as a sort of apprentice. His uncle, however, began to see this as an unfit and improper education, and decided to send him off to the Halctus Academy to study medicine.
    While Victane excelled in almost every subject, he found a particular interest in arcanology, the process of curing vampires and werebeasts. The professor of the subject took a liking to him, taking him under his wing and encouraging his interest on the topic. While under the instruction of his professor, both Victane’s grades and confidence improved, and he found himself becoming more outgoing around his peers. However, he was quick to realize that not many others were interested in arcanology in the way that he was. In fact, many people retracted at the subject, often giving him an odd look before walking away. As a result, Victane decided he would simply keep his mouth closed in social situations.
    ∘› He continued his studies quietly for the next few years until he was twenty-three, and he received a letter from his relatives in the City of Regalia, requesting he join them after the passing of his uncle.
    In Regalia, Victane found it difficult to adjust to the fast paced social scene of the city. He often kept to himself, remaining as a bystander rather than getting involved in any social affairs. While he often felt himself longing for the comfort of his academy, he decided to enjoy the company of his relatives, with the intentions of possibly going back to Halctus to finish his schooling in the future.

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    《 Victane de Piedmont | More than just a trickster. 》
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    《 Victane de Piedmont | Its in his blood 》
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    You can only have one racial bonus in your proficiencies.

    You only used 27 points of your total of 28 points from age.

    Please mark all edits in VIOLET and tag me when done!
     
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    5 Captain Command is for the culture racial boost, while the 5 is for the Nautillean boost! (I specified this in in the changes, and put my last point in Rapier combat.)

    Tell me if this is sufficient or not.
     
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    yeah, i like this guy
     
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    Minor changes in title, all changes are outlined in Red.

    Reworked point spread, got rid of Statecraft entirely.

    Changed racial boost and put it towards sword combat.

    Do tell me if I did my math wrong.
     
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    Points reworked, removed fineweave and replaced with needlework due to confusion
    Sword combat removed completely
    Sailing art decreased from 10 to 5
    Strings instruments increased from 5 to 7

    Tell me if I did my math wrong this time.

    Changes marked in Green.
     
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    Changed Captain Command to Admiral Command
    Updated new Ailor racials to show correctly, reformatted points
    Needlework reduced to 7
    Extra Linguistics, unused Racial boost is intentional.

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    @festiveCorvid Point spread updated to comply with proficiency update
     
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    You no longer receive 10 talent points. It is a flat 50 points with 10 for hobbies. Amend and tag when finished.
     
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    @HorizonCythulu You still have 10 HOBBY points, just not talent. Please mark which proficiencies are hobbies and reinvest accordingly. Apologies for any misinterpretation of what I said, I wasnt exactly precise about it. Just tag me when you're all good to go.

    50 Points from age, 10 free points to invest into hobbt skills.
     
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    @festiveCorvid I had no idea I had 10 hobby points but I fixed that now, thanks for reminding me.
     
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