Approved Sheet ❀ Amelina Peirgarten - The Pink Duchess ❀

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  1. seoulmate

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    “In the lands of Gods and Monsters, I was an angel, living in the Garden of Evil.”

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    Full Name: Amelina Célia Peirgarten
    Nicknames: Ame, Little Dove, and Lina.
    Age: 30 years old.
    Date of Birth: September 28th 278 A.C
    Star Sign: Libra
    Gender: Female
    Race: Pure-blood Ailor

    Race: Leutz-Vixe
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Religion: Agnostic
    Titles: Duchess of Lorhauser, 17th Lord Chancellor of the Empire

    - Ornate rose dagger
    - A few hundred regals
    - Ruby Earrings
    - Ruby Necklace
    - Various rings

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    Proficiency and Skills: 50 Points + 10 Hobby
    ✽ 15 Alchemy Sciences
    ✽ 10 Bodycare Training
    ✽ 8 Gardening (5 Hobby, 3 Age)
    ✽ 7 Horticulture Arts (5 Hobby, 2 Age)
    ✽ 9 Schooling

    ♕ Diplomacy School
    ♕ Natural Sciences School
    ♕ Statesman School
    3 Linguistics:
    ♕ Ithanian
    ✽ 5 Perception Training
    ✽ 3 Roguery: Rogue Gift 3
    Body Shape
    ✽ 8 (Gardening) x 0.5 = 4 + 7 (Horticulture) x 0.5 = 3.5 + 10 (Bodycare Training) x 0.5 = 5. 14 Physical Stat.
    ✽ Average Body Shape
    ✽ Moderate Body Fat
    Languages
    ✽ Leutz-Vixe (From Parents)
    ✽ Ithanian (Learned)
    ✽ Common (Learned)
    Mutations
    ✽ Exist Carry: Smells of Roses and Honey
    The individual naturally carries a pleasant scent of their own choosing, and is incapable of any negative odors.
    Milôt Mutations (Active)
    Milôt Vampire Form (Active)
    ✽ When in her Milôt Form, Amelina's skin takes on the quality of pink lace, covering her head to toe so that not a spot of her skin is left uncovered. Atop her head situates a tall and pointy magenta crown that reaches high up. As she walks, a trail of blood follows behind her though quickly dissipates as she moves. While in this form drops of blood made of rubies adorn the crown and also form around her neck to create a shimmering necklace. When in this form she is able to change the quantities of the pink lace to change where it covers. This will never cover less than 75% of her body. While in this form she is still able to speak should her mouth be uncovered by the lace. When in her Milôt form, Amelina's height raises up to that of six foot tall and her body becomes thin and lithe, opposite to her non-vampiric form.
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    “If we die like trampled flowers, I refuse to be forgotten.”

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    Eye Color: Emerald Green
    Hair Color: Golden Blonde, Currently colored light pink
    Hair Style: Long curls, half pulled up into an elegant bun around a circlet.
    Skin Color: Rosy Pale
    Clothing: Elegant gowns with short heels.
    Height: 5’1”
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    “You are the sky and everything else is just weather.”

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    Character Alignment:
    Chaotic Neutral: A chaotic neutral character is an individualist who follows their own heart and generally shirks rules and traditions. Although chaotic neutral characters promote the ideals of freedom, it is their own freedom that comes first; good and evil come second to their need to be free.
    Character Personality Type:
    ENTJ- The Commander: Bold, imaginative, and strong-willed leaders, always finding a way, or making one.
    Religion:
    Unionist: Mildly Devout (5/10)
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    "I don't feel safe unless I know you're nearby."

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    Childhood Years:

    Amelina was born to her parents, Etienne and Noémie Peirgarten on September 28th, 278 AC. She is the oldest child of five and the oldest girl in the family. At the time of her birth, her father was still the patriarch of the family and had been fully expecting a son to be able to pass down the heir of the Peirgarten name. After having three daughters and no sons, Etienne began to grow angry and resent his daughters in a way that Amelina would never fully understand. She was raised in the Peirgarten ancestral home, Goldflower Castle. Her mother doted over her and her children, building Amelina to raise her children and family members with love rather than harsh cruelty.
    Amelina's younger brother Emmon was killed while away at school. They don't have a definite answer as to why he died, but they believe that he was killed out of jealousy from the other students. Amelina's father took the death rather hard as his only son was killed, this in turn made him become a husk of the man he once used to be. Falling ill and gaining the nickname "The Lame Vannhestia," Amelina's mother did the only thing she thought to do and that was usurp her husband, taking his titles from him and switching the family from patriarchal to matriarchal values. This caused an estrangement between the husband and wife, who never divorced, but lived in separate quarters of the Goldflower castle until the death of Amelina's father.
    Younger Years:
    ✽ During her younger years, Amelina first attended the school of Natural Sciences in neighboring Vultaro before she was whisked away to the College of Diplomacy in Ithania, here is where she was also taught how to speak Ithanian. During these years she would regularly come back to Lorenthaus and would do schoolwork while in her own lands, citing the need to be closer to home. She was still able to graduate from these schools during this.
    ✽ After she graduated from her schooling, is when Amelina's mom saw fit to pass the titles down to her daughter, no longer having to worry about the stress of her schooling and giving her the chance to roam the world before she would be tied down in Lorenthaus. At the age of sixteen, Amelina would become the ruling Countess of Lorenthaus, much to the disdain of the lands around her, one for being a woman and two for being so young at that. Her first few years were met with anger which boiled over when at the age of eighteen, Amelina married a common born bastard named Rodrigo Gray, who was later discovered to be born of an Anahera, only adding to the distrust.
    ✽ As the Bone Horror crisis raged on, Amelina's guidance was needed in the city of Regalia. Travelling there on her own, she became trapped there as the dead Queen Freya Lo rose to power and took over the city. Amelina worked with her friends to undermine the Queen, swearing fake loyalty to her so that she would be able to assist in her downfall later on.
    Recent Years:
    ✽ After the occupation, Rodrigo was still stuck in Lorenthaus and unable to come to the city, during this time the anger that the lands around Lorhauser felt finally boiled over and Lorhauser was invaded by Ravenstad. Saved by the Crown, Amelina became bitter towards them until a second invasion quickly came to her door by du Pont. Du Pont took over her home capital of Lorhauser, forcing her and her family out of the lands to temporarily rule over another area. It wouldn't be until the fall of du Pont, that Amelina would be able to rule over her ancestral lands, making sure to hold tight to her claim.
    ✽ After the occupation, Amelina's husband Rodrigo was finally able to be brought into the city. With the love of her life back in the city the two began taking over Essalonia together, bringing the Peirgarten name to great status before the supposed death of Rodrigo. In her deep depression, she nearly withered away, cutting her hair short and forcing herself to stand tall. After the reveal of her husband still being alive the two worked towards mending the anger that had taken over.
    Current Years:
    With the two lovers coming together again, Amelina began to climb higher and higher until she sat as the 17th Lord Chancellor of the Empire. Making scandalous choices and ultimately bringing the ire of Nobility, Amelina was removed as Chancellor by the Emperor of Regalia. After dealing with betrayals from her own family members, Amelina currently sits as Countess of Lorhauser and is the Mistress of Ceremonies, being the woman in charge of running the Imperial Court. She and Rodrigo currently have six children and are continuing to work towards bettering the families name in any way possible.

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  3. seoulmate

    seoulmate Little Dove Staff Member PR2

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    this is incredibly well written, you did a great job! keep it up!
     
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  5. seoulmate

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    Thank you so much!
     
  6. HodlinG

    HodlinG Sir whines-a-lot

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    Your Application looks great! Just fantastically written. I hope you get her approved very soon!
     
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    I believe she was referring to her family at one point treating her and her sisters like slaves. She is not saying her resentment is not done anymore, but the treatment from her family isn't done anymore.

    I love this app and can't wait to RP with Amelina some more! Beautifully written.
     
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    HodlinG Sir whines-a-lot

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    Oh! Oops! Right, I can see that now. Not sure how I might have missed that-- Ahah! I'm much too tired for this right now.
     
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    My Review:
    • Where was she born? Given how she is Ithanian-cultured, the way her family treated her given their generally matriarchal and female-based society is odd.
    • What was her family's status? You mention an estate in Regalia but it sounds like you mean out in the countryside, which I think is most rural with the estates there occupied by major Regalian noble families.
    • How did the dead Alexandre who was going to Jorrhildr somehow come back as a Deathling despite the fact that "Only characters with a valid grave either in the church, or the graveyard, can rise as a Deathling. Characters that died outside Regalia also cannot rise, but the base line is that any character that died at the hands of the authorities as a criminal cannot rise."
    Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @seoulmate
     
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  10. seoulmate

    seoulmate Little Dove Staff Member PR2

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    I believe all of the edits have been done! The families sheet is undergoing a massive rewrite, so I can link that whenever it is finished if you would like! I also believe I lost the 'Review in Progress' tag, but since I'm tagging you I assume that is okay?

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    Approved.
     
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    that was fast.... took me like 3 weeks
     
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    OOOOOOOOH MY GOD, how am I just now noticing this lol
     
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    seoulmate Little Dove Staff Member PR2

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    I've updated this to fit the new format and make changes as she is no longer a Celyreos.
    Figured I would tag it as "Needs Reviewer" as I want to make sure it is all good to go!
    @HydraLana
     
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    Remains approved.
     
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    Updated for the proficiency system!
     
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    My Review:
    • I ask you reexamine your Cultural Points to ensure everything is allocated properly and the way you want it.
    • Please add a Languages section where it is appropriate in the Character Application format.
    • Please delete the Talents section as it is no longer part of the template.
    Tag me once this has been done in green @seoulmate
     
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    Changes fixed in green and areas deleted. @HydraLana
     
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    @HydraLana Updated with the new proficiency system!
     
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    @HydraLana Did a pretty hefty face-lift so asking for a re-review to make sure!
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    @HydraLana HELLO! She has been updated with the new proficiency update!
     
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    Hey there! I'mma steal this so Approved!
     
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    @Katiesc Requesting Re-Review for vampy stuff added
     
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    Bump for new Profs!
     
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