Rejected Sheet ☾ Lyarra Andeiilles ☽

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    Character Information

    Full Name: Lyarra Andeiilles
    Alias: Siann
    Race: Isldar/Cielothar Mix ; Predominantly Cielothar
    Age: 67
    Sex: Female
    Gender: Genderqueer - She/they
    Sexuality: Pansexual
    Eye Color: Sage Green

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    Core Concept
    ⤠ Lyarra was born and raised a slave, ripped from her Cielothar mother when she was only an infant, yet raised by an Isldar father to revere dragons- and yet, as an adult, her loyalty returned to the Cielothar, and she found faith in Estel. Later, however, she found faith in the Colossi- particularly Salmaar and Calaan-Toraan.
    ⤠ Lyarra is a witch of the Cahal, made of glass and yet an eternal survivor, raised in slavery and having escaped the shackles of her masters for the shackles of her own sickness.

    Proficiency Information
    ✢ 16 Caster Ranged Combat {She uses a lantern, made from wrought silver and bright red glass.}
    ✢ 15 Dancing Art

    ↪ {+10 Invested, +5 Racial Boost}
    ✢ 10 Dagger Combat
    ✢ 10 Drawing Art
    ✢ 4 Circus Art

    ↪ 18 Physical Stat
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    Ability Information
    Aphar Cahal Kit
    ↪ World Shift 1
    ↪ Afflicted Life 1
    ↪ Sacrifice Curse 1
    ↪ Cursed Soul 1
    ↪ Blood Eyes 5
    ↪ Cahalic Form 2
    ↪ Exist Gift 1
    ↪ Cahalic Familiar 1
    ↪ Arcane Mastery 1
    ↪ Casting Light 1
    ↪ True Path 1
    ↪ Light Mend 2
    ↪ Mind Wall 1
    ↪ Dravinda Gift 2
    ↪ Shrewd Insight 1
    ↪ Memory Sense 1
    Sorcery
    ↪Home Enchant 4
    ➵ Exist Gift 1
    Half-Cielothar Kit
    ↪ Spirit Familiar 1
    ↪ Empath Sense 2
    ↪ Element Control 2
    ↪ Light Mend 3
    ↪ Arcane Mastery 1
    ↪ Shrewd Insight 1
    Caster Ranged Combat
    ↪ Spell Shot
    ↪ Beam Focus
    ↪ Magic Nova
    ↪ No Passage
    Languages
    ⤠ Common {7/10} {Learned as a secondary language. Illiterate.}
    ⤠ Altalar {9/10} {The primary language of her slavers and thusly her.}

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    Appearance Information
    ⤠ She is petitely built and slender, with an almost delicate look. Lyarra's hair is bright snowy white, yet she is tan and freckly with green eyes, possessing a unique racial ambiguity. She has a long scar across her cheek from a whip.
    ⤠ Lyarra's Cahalic Form is much like stained glass- her skin and body becomes translucent and crystalline, her face losing most of its' definition. Her joints are seemingly attached with silvery metal between pieces of glass. Her skin itself is a variety of colors, but mostly shades of blue and green.
    Life Story
    ⤠ Lyarra was born to enslaved parents under a traveling performer's troupe; her mother was a Cielothar and her father an Isldar. Her mother was sold to another master only months later, and so Lyarra was raised almost entirely by her father. She was treated as an oddity from a young age, and Lyarra did not know much of a life outside of the circus.
    Lyarra spent most of her time either working or lurking around Ainur, her only friend in the circus despite the age difference between the two. She began to dance for the circus, a shockingly talented entertainer with a charm that earned her a great deal of coin.
    ⤠ Devastated by the loss of her closest friend, Lyarra ran away from the circus. The first time she was caught quickly and beaten. The second she was caught after weeks, and beaten half-dead as a punishment. But Lyarra was too valuable to lose, and as her beauty grew with her maturity, so did her ability to make her masters money. It was another seven years before she escaped for the third time. This time, however, she managed to stay free.
    ⤠ Lyarra met a Cahal alpha later, and the pair fell deeply in love. He turned her in a ritual and she joined him and his clan, their Aphar. The clan was like family, and all incredibly close. Much to her pain, however, the relationship ended when he reunited with a woman he had been searching for for nearly a century. She set out on her own, independent for the first time in her sixty-six years of life.
    ⤠ By coincidence, however, Lyarra reunited with her long-lost friend Ainur, and joined his clan with a quiet satisfaction. She joined him in Regalia, happy simply to be in familiar circles.

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    Relationships
    Ainur Luthien
    Her closest living friend. She grew up with him and feels incredibly fond of him. He is one of the very few people in this world that Lyarra truly trusts.
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    Inventory
    ↪ A few regals, stored in a small and worn leather pouch.
    ↪ A dagger, made from simple steel, though the pommel is the head of a dragon. At the base of the blade, there are letters inscribed- S&A, for Siann and Arine, her parents. It is her only inheritance from her father.
    ↪ A locket in the shape of a simple circle. It possesses a portrait of a pretty Cielothar woman on one side and a drawing of Ainur on the other.
    ↪ Various ribbons.
    ↪ A lantern, the conduit she uses for casting. It is elaborate and made of silver and a rosy pink glass, emanating a pale reddish light when lit and in use. She keeps it on her hip, tied with ribbon to her belt.
     
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  3. Jouster

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    I will be reviewing this application!
    • Languages
      • You can only have one additional, free language after Common. Therefore, choose either Altalar or Sulvaley, or move 3 points into the Linguistics Point-Buy.
    Once you have fixed this issue, tag me in a reply.
     
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    fixed
     
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  6. milkdudders_

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    @Jouster retag for aesthetics, fiddled with points (cooking and baking to drawing and circus)
     
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    Looks fine. Re-approved!
     

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