☾✧☽alvah Faerondalan☾✧☽

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    ☾✧☽Alvah Faerondalan☾✧☽
    "
    The weak will die, the strong will suffer"


    ❦Basic Info❦


    • Name: Alvah Faerondalan, her common nickname, if not publicly known by all, is "Goat", "Goat Lady", "Goaty", and common nickname among void-possessed is, "Voidling", and "She Demon". When she lived in Daendroc she was often called "Lupous".
    • Age: She is aptly aged 119 years of age.
    • Gender: Female.
    • Race: Full Cielothar.
    • Main Ambition: Her main ambition is mainly survival.
    • Special Permission: N/E
    • Alvah currently lives nowhere, a nomad of the Crown isles. She often went outside of Regalia, or around, after the Queen's ruling she never brought herself the courage to go back to Daendroc. Alvah came to Regalia seeking a new beginning, however she only made a worse life for herself.
    • Alvah came from a low tier noble family in Daendroc, their Northerne Ailor side of the family ran a business consisting of metals, jewelry, and very uncommonly hair dyes. She was born in Daendroc in a Ceilothar village, having one sibling. She was born to a woman named Metalia, Alvah's father died when she was very young, when Alvah was five years of age, her mother married a Northerne Ailor, who was widowed aswell.
    • Alvah, despite having dark morals, and often salty to nearly anyone, she does seek some form of affection, someone willing to care for her despite being demonic. In the midst she does wish to strike fear in people as she did before. A very very small ambition is to rid of her Goat title, she feels it gets annoying, and she's starting to bleat like a goat some times. (Out of joking manner, best to embrace a bad title so no one enjoys calling you it.)


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    ❦Visual Info❦


    Eye Color: Right eye a deep blue with black sclera. The left eye has a lighter shade of blue, the sclera dark and bloodshot. The eye seems a bit more messed up, pupil seems contorted, and the iris seems to be an unhealthy color.

    Hair Color: Dark Brown.


    Hair Style: She will very often keep it cut short, she keeps her hair swayed to one side. It is known in real time world as a Pixy Style Cut.

    Skin Color: Whitish tan

    Clothing: White wolf-skins, with some trousers. Fancy clothing mainly comes in the form of a vest and baggy clothing.

    Height: Four foot eleven inches.

    Body Build: Lanky.


    • Alvah has dented cheeks, it would seem as if the skin was constricting the skull, making any dimple and dip apparent, though the cheeks seem more dented contrary to her eye sockets (Which aren't dipped at all), or under the jaw. Her mouth shame is thinned out, her lips will find themselves with a dark coloring, due to makeup. (Alvah would seem to envy certain noble/fashionable possessions.) She does have tattoos, matching her culture's tattoo formations, there's a green crescent around her right eye, and almost a half crescent below her left eye, seemingly two striped down her lips. She possesses several scars, mostly on the face. One can be found going from her left eye's top to the bottom of it, another is a very noticeable scar on her cheek below her left eye, and a large burn scar surrounds her right eye. Most notable head feature is her ominous goat-like horns, they come up around the back of the head and go down past her cheeks sticking slightly upwards, these seem rather lethal if one were to run into them, at worst impale themselves.
    • Alvah's body is purely an hour glass shape, though the bottom sand deposit would be slightly larger in this figure. Her hips are slightly enlarged due to having conceived a child. It takes a trained eye to see a small bulge behind her, which is an ill hidden tail formation, at times Alva will cut a hole to make the small tail some room, it is no longer than a Pug's tail uncurled. Her nails are elongated and sharpened, taking a claw form, these are very oftenly used for combat. Whether these changes are due to mutation or magic accident is unknown to all, though one known magic accident is the amount of hair growth that appears on her back. Alvah only has one foot, the missing foot is replaced by a metal and wooden leg, which acts as a flask aswell.
    • Alvah's style often follows under a "northern" style, perhaps barbaric. Which includes wearing skins, sometimes parts of animals/animal-like races such as teeth. A style such as a vest, and a baggy white shirt with trousers is a rare sight, but mainly saved for at the most formal. Alvah wears jewlery, mainly piercings. Located in the brow, nose, and lips, ears of course.

    • Weapon/Magic: Ellon Magic Caster, knowing Ellon Form, Ellon Communion, and Ellon Projection. Alvah has been studying Ellon Magic for eight and a half years. She uses A bo-staff as a sidearm.
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    ❦Personality❦


    Brusque: Lacking many civil traits, rudeness and abruptness can be seen in her many times. This is favored by other demonic kin yet frowned upon by anyone with civil personality. This comes out due to her high potency to be careless and not thinking her actions through. For example, a man/woman asks a simple question, Alvah says her answer in a very insulting and brusque manner. This can apply to anything.


    Sly: She may appear innocent and happy on the outside, but this usually hides inner traits she wouldn't want people knowing of. This not being a primary personality, it still applies to persuading, and foolery. When told not to, unless from a authority of the emperor, she tends to go against it, mainly because she doesn't like being bossed around. Not always she goes against people's word, she's happy to listen if it's a loved one, or a good friend. This can also pertain to looking like one thing, but feeling another, example, she is sad but looks happy on the outside, this mainly being because she doesn't want people to know her emotions.


    Malicious: This coming from her vice. This can come out as being bloodthirsty, troublesome, and argumentative. This also causing violence over small things. Many people have fallen to Alvah because of this trait that makes her driven to kill, or injure. When it comes to be troublesome, it can vary between causing brawls or being a trickster. Malice is often triggered when threatened, insulted, or even bumped accidentally, she will with no second thought challenge, if not accepted, brutally maim anyway. Passively she will act very rude and prideful. The longevity of the vice has brought her mind to imminent corruption, so she will act in almost any way violent, and trigger happy. In short, and a more vivid description, the resort to any problem or discipline is through violence. When someone argue against the answer of violence, she will almost always say (She will say it all the time), "A punishment to the mind fades, and they forget and become arrogant and disrespectful like before. Though, if you slice and arm off, pierce their side, they will look upon that scar, and remember it until their last breath is stroke."


    Narcissistic: Her arrogance often pertains to what she knows, and her bias drives all her beliefs, and often sticks to the bias lest a source stronger than her will overcomes her. This has evolved due to how she perceives her intellect. Alvah been studying many things for many years, however, some things aren't always true, and Alvah had grown habit to stick to this knowledge. Often at first glance of any said person or thing, she will come up with an assumption, and stick to it. An example follows, she sees a dakkar as being aggressive, and irrational, she will treat them as such, and anything proving her wrong, can, and most likely will be ignored. This is described as being intuitive, or Arrogant.

    Brave: Even if in the face of imminent danger, she will laugh, and throw caution to the wind, if it is within any kind of reason that is. Alvah after years, seeing many things, and feeling many pains, she will play hero, and jump in when no one else does. Though, it is not rare to see Alvah ignore reason, and fight nonetheless. A scale of really how insane she gets is facing multiple mages or a mutant, a big mutant anyway. This trait was born of, well her intent of violence, usually danger has to do with something trying to kill you, hence, trying to kill it in return.

    Observant: She is very observant. Mainly because she can take clues in a room, and lead it to one variable. She's not very observant in a sense of spotting things easily, just putting puzzle pieces together. She gets this trait from her brother, he always encouraged her to put puzzle pieces together to make a conclusion. Her brother was quite smart. Being observant also pertains to a skill of knowing someone's thought by looking at a given expression, or to tell by their balance of voice.


    Creative: She can usually make out-of-the-box ideas. Whether it be songs, writing, or even painting. She has many ideas in her head that will change a lot of things, but she doesn't have the tools, or the guts to do them. She tends to do projects in private. Every once in a while, she'll write a book, she just tossed them out as soon as she is done. She never shows her work, mainly because she has nowhere to put them. This can support the following skills, weapon combat, speech, trade, and other activities requiring given skill.


    Quirky: Best described as, "random". This trait comes out either mischievous or positive, more so positive altogether. How I can describe is very hard, since it comes out in sudden words, motions, or just being passive aggressive to someone. I guess all I can say about her is... Well... Awkward and goofy. Altogether you don't see this until a given mood is afoot.

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    ❦Strengths❦

    Environmental Use: Alvah is very quick to think on her feet and hands, using her environment to take down foes. For an example. Alva will use the metal bar to stick into the wall, to either cloths line her enemy or use it to swing into her enemy. There are many examples, more of a mcguiver of sorts.


    Intellect: Years of life caused her to study certain subjects of history and literature, fantasy books, intellectual books. This has lead to a vast amount of wisdom her way, not that she's wiser than elders, but it defiantly helped her along her journey as a wandered. Alvah rarely teaches people when she isn't trying to hurt people out of anger, and this skills seems to be now reflected as she has picked a career as a scholar. Certain pursuits she invested in pursuits such as history, literature, magic, and cultures. Mainly the history of said subjects. Logic and philosophy seems to be a widely seen pursuit of hers.


    Magical Capabilities: Only right to add as a strength due to it's use compared to people who haven't any. Alvah uses her ellon as a main way of combat, using what her ellon gives her. This is of course until her ellon might change to something harmless. She will use communion very rarely, but can help. Ellon form is often used as a disguise, or fitting into small places. The Ellon of which she uses is a Mountain Wolf, originating from the Northerne lands. This Ellon is of brown fur, and is rather small compared to any other Mountain Wolf.

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    ❦Weaknesses❦

    Narrow Minded: Alva will be very unaware when it comes to a given situation. This will oftenly appear when a goal is clearly in reach, any other thing can disturb her feats, when this doesn't is dominantly when everything to be aware of is there. So typically this means "unaware of what thy aren't aware of" or "lack of future moment prediction". This can cause large problems when they are being attacked from behind, or stealth missions with many things to track for.


    Aches: Through many years of life, she had been injured in many areas. Most areas of pain had been easily overcome and seem nonexistent despite the pain. However, after one of the worse incidents (A mace taken the the forearms, and ribcage), her left forearm aches, as well as the joint, this is due to mis-healing of the left arm. A few ribs experience some pain aswell, making it rather hard to perform actions regarding the pelvic region.


    Cardio: With little experience to run, and the wrong body, running is relatively difficult. She can keep up a steady pace for about 10 minutes, but a full sprint for 5 minutes. After that limit is reached her lungs gasp for air desperately, and her leg muscles buckle and tighten. Reasons for this are often perceived as the lack of body mass, and the ill bone structure that gets to her. The fact she tires easily, doesn't effect magical fatigue oddly enough.

    Mage-Body: The study of magic deteriorates any physical build up. With the mix of studying as a child, and practicing magic, and the Nelfin body mixed into it, it's practically useless to use any sort of physical activity. Lifting anything ninety lbs or 40823.3133 g if you are a metric system person, might as well not try, otherwise, she will have an exceedingly hard time lifting it above mid thigh.

    One Foot: Alvah, although replaced by a metal and wooden leg, she has only one foot, and it's really hard to function with. Running is lowered substantially, balance is off, and if she loses the leg, it's not good. Really the weakness that takes place is really obvious, she has one foot, and the peg leg only helps her stand on her feet.



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    ❦Life Story❦


    (Ages 1-19)

    Alvah was born in Daendroc in a Ceilothar village. Her father died after an orc attack on their village, along with four other people in the village, however, the local Avanthar were quick enough to drive them away. Alvah was three at this time, the experience permanently burned in her mind, seeing that the orc killed her father in front of her.


    When Alvah was ten years old, her mother met a Northerne Ailor named Bulrick, who also was widowed, and with a single son. The two fell in love and sought to be wed. It was rather shocking to see that they were low tier nobility (owning a small barony) of the Northern Countries. Alvah’s new father said that he would stay in Daendroc until Alvah was mature enough to take such a change. The Northerner’s son was named Flokee, which as the name’s background in culture states, he was a trickster. This family was a mage family, and practiced certain magics, Alvah’s father, however, was a shadow mage and taught his son this aswell. Bulrick sought out, after talking to her mother, to teach Alvah this art aswell, which took a lot of convincing due to Ceilothar peacefulness. When Alvah was thirteen she began her training.


    The small Ceilothar was very hesitant to learn Shadow Magic, her mother eventually convinced her that it would help her when in danger, and it isn’t considered worshiping the void. Alvah agreed with it, and worked hard at it to appease her new father. Her brother seemed rather arrogant and didn’t enjoy his sister all too much, but he promised to deal with her, and protect her. It wasn’t rare to see Flokee to pull a trick by dropping an object above Alvah, Alvah did retaliate a lot and often gave physical punishment, which didn’t do much, until Alvah at one point broke Flokee’s nose.


    When Alvah turned sixteen, she became overcondifdent in her casting abilities, and completely overworked herself, she almost got trapped inside the void being in there for far too long, as soon as she pulled herself out she completely subjected herself vulnerable to the void, she used her magic to escape her parents and brother when under a time of stress, surprisingly her last thought was to hurt them, and maybe kill them and run, this was a side thought, but affected her overall possession, being Malice.


    No noticeable change happened until a year later. Her brother noticed two stubs on her skull, aswell as her excessive teeth licking, and bloodshot eyes. The family seemed concerned, none of them knew about what was happening. At this time Alvah’s family moved to Northerne.


    (Age 19-97)

    The trip to Northern countries was rather long, a lot did happen along the way, they stopped in certain places like Ithania. Alvah shown erratic behavior, her mother would describe it as, “She isn’t my daughter, a mirror.”, i was a direct mirror, Alvah would be generally sweet and forgiving, also very pacifist, though, now she was obsessed with violence, and further in time when Alvah was around thirty, (They left when she was 23, and the voyage with stops was severely long.) she killed one of the ship’s men, as well as a few injured, this was a sneak attack in the middle of the night, one was killed, two woke up to retaliate, ended up losing each an eye. Alvah was immediately restrained and put into a solitary area, which surprisingly had strong wood in it, as well as iron bars in any window outlet.


    The family’s plan was to keep her in a state of solitary until she seemed to come to her senses, maybe find what was going on with the once pure-of-heart nelfin. The voyage to the Regalian port, to get supplies and food, and stay for a few days. Flokee very often spoke to Alvah through the door, he described it as, “Discomforting”, and “Unholy”. Though, Flokee still talked to her, since he did promise to stay by her. Flokee was brave enough to visit her physically past the door, to his extreme shock, Alvah changed substantially, horns, black scleras, and she seemed severely pale. Flokee told his parents about what he saw, Alvah’s mother said, “I had given birth to a demon, I wanted a gift from Estel.”, During the night, Alvah escaped, how was rather unknown, all that was recorded was the door had a large hole in it, a many scratch marks.


    Alvah wandered the Regalian city for many years, she eventually became rather well known as a monster of the under city, and sometimes on the surface.


    (Ages 97-Present day)

    This was what she called in her time, “Advocate’s Emerge” (Alva was convinced she was a demon, not possessed, this wasn’t found until later.). She seemed to quickly form enemies and friends. There was a time when she was presumed dead, due to being beaten senselessly by a mace, she played dead and hid. She hid for a long time until she emerged again.


    She eventually found out the cause of her malice, the cause is unknown to her, but she comprehended why she was this way. In time she fell for an Altalar named Lucas (The Amalao), and she conceived his child. After a few months she quickly ran away, finding too much stress, and she didn’t want her daughter to know who she is, being too ashamed. She came back when Freya Lo emerged, she wanted to make sure her daughter was okay, and Lucas, but she found favor in coming back, she plans on permanently staying unhidden.

    Walking aimlessly a blood mage cult captivated her and used touch of the void on her, which put her already mutated appearance a bit worse. This mainly affected her left eye, the other small mutations include strange bone deformation on her elbows, and a few bone deformations around her left shin. Her knuckle bones aswell seemed contorted as her right knuckle seemed to sprout small sharp slivers, this probably complimented her already lethally mutated hand.

    Many nights crippling depression overcame her with the constant thoughts of malice, often loneliness, and more often confusion. She scouted out for few individuals that can possibly help her.. To her luck/bad luck Lucas and a vilitatei Penelope seemed to be there for her, even in the small amounts. She spent most time caring for her child, which was around nine months old during this time, maybe ten. She taken up a career as a scholar in the sewers after talking extensively with Penelope and Lucas who seemed to be planning to run a group like this, she accepted the offer.

    After a few months she wandered the surface and got caught, thus being exorcised. She lost her magic, and her malicious nature wasn't completely gone, there is most definitely some aggression towards people, it would almost seem it never was removed, but this makes leeway for compassion, and other positive emotions. After some time, she couldn't seem to live without magic. After three months, she found tutor in Ellon. Alvah choose this for the main reason of how much meditation is needed, thus able to calming the body, and she loved the idea of Ellons. After a couple of years, she reached caster, thus the present. Nowadays no much happened in her life, other than squabbles here and there. To the now present.
     
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    This is my third, and probably finale, time I have updated Alva, (Alvah now), to be more compliant as far as racial aspects and the sheer complication of her possession, as well as accurate magic(s) that caused her corruption. And @SpamanoTomato we need Pen and Alvah the dream team back. That is if you didn't kill Pen off...
     
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    weeelll ic Penny is presumed dead, but Cynny is a rewritten Penelope, much like this is a rewritten Alva.
    i'll peer review in a few.~
     
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    I'll be assigning this sheet to @MantaRey
     
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    I will be reviewing this character sheet.

    Add a few more sentences for this trait. Go into detail how she can act or what can spark her into becoming violent.

    These two are very similar to each other, going off of what you described. Summarize these two into one new negative trait, then add in a different positive trait.

    Add another physical oriented weakness to go in tandem with her magical capabilities.

    Make your changes in blue, then tag me when you're done. @DockedRelic
     
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    Changes made @MantaRey Thank you for the review/re-review.
     
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    Great work. Approved!
     
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    Change Log
    I will be recording insignificant changes here, anythign worth mentioning will be tagged to staff.

    2/2/2017
    • Height adjusted, to be rather small.
    • Skin color is augmented to fit the Ceilothar tan, meanwhile still paled due to infestation.
    • Tattoo edits.
    • Clothing edits.
    • Eye color change, to a more darker blue to fit a Ceilothar eye color.
     
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    So who the hell wins?! The Middle Class???
     
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    Changelog 3/11/2017

    • Minor physical edits in expansion and main appearances.
    • Slight backstory additions.
    • Changed a strength from speech to intellect. I don't see speech being rped out as much on my part.
     
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    Changelog 3/19/2017

    • Last edits. Change in magic and physical appearance.
     
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    You should probably set it to Needs Reviewer and tag @MantaRey
     
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    And set the tag yep.
     
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    Can you highlight in another text color where specifically the changes are?
     
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    Staff Review
    Visual Info

    • There’s a small typo in eye colour. You describe her right eye twice. I’m not sure if this is supposed to imply she’s missing one, or if it’s merely a type. Please fix this to fit.
    • In the weapon of choice section, I’d add in how many years she’s actually trained in her magic. This makes the correct skill level easy to identify.
    Strengths
    • As a small edit, I’d like you to specify if Alvah has any specific field she studies in intellect. Is it magic, history, literature, or just general knowledge?
    • Mention what her Ellon form (animal) is in magical capabilities.
    Colour your edits and tag me when you're done!
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    Looks like you've filled in all of the edits I've listed. Wait for @TheOverseer__ to give it another look over, and then we'll see about approval!

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    After Recent Events Adding new Weakness "One Foot". @TheOverseer__
     
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