☾☼☽raymond Render☾☼☽

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  1. NetXeroVT

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    Name: Raymond Render

    Nicknames: Blondie, Ray

    Age: 18

    Gender: Male

    Race: Feka Asha

    Sexuality: Bisexual

    Preferred Weapon: Short sword and Forearm shield

    Religion and Concept
    1/10 Thousand Eyes worship
    He's not very devout, but he keeps the thousand eyes with him should he feel he needs help.

    Concept
    A brood son with a conflict internally on if what he does is good or bad, trying to do good by everyone and getting the bite from it. The result of a crumbled family.

    Inventory Information

    -A drawn portrait of himself at age 7, his father (Lock Render), and his mother (Alexandria Render).

    -A shortsword that belonged to his father, given to him by his mother.

    -30 Regals (For emergency).

    -A small sewing kit to repair any clothes that may get damaged.

    -A tattered, well-loved jacket that once belonged to his father. He has it tied to his belt if it’s not being worn.

    -A small roll of bandages his mother advised him to keep with him at all times.

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    Total Points

    50(Free)+10(Hobby)

    14 Unused


    Core group Proficiencies

    +10 Sword Combat

    +10 Shield Combat

    +5 Fist Combat

    +3 Roguery

    +3 Linguistics
    Hobby Group Proficiencies

    +5 Dancing Art

    +5 Needlework Art

    Physical Information

    Phys Stat: 20 (Feka cap 20)

    Build: Ripped

    Body fat: Average

    Languages

    Common (Free Language)

    Dressolini (Parental language)

    Sofaal (Taught by Myriil. Points)
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    Racial Abilities


    Body Claws 1

    Body Tail 1

    Asha Agility 1

    Living Metal 1

    Living Metal 2

    Living Metal 3

    Living Metal 4


    Roguery Abilities


    Rogue gift 4


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    Option Two:


    Character Alignment


    Neutral Good


    Raymond will help anyone and everyone, if he thought it would better them. He’d fight to defend a stranger, with little to no information truly. If one needed help, he would do his best. His friends and family are ones he would do absolutely anything for.


    Personality Type


    The Entertainer


    Raymond is always one to come up with new ideas on the spot and carry them through without another thought. This could include spontaneously taking up new friends, finding a new hobby in the span of 5 minutes, or having the inability to really hold his tongue when he believes something.


    Religion


    1/10



    He was raised in a unionist household after the passing of his father, learning the ways of Unionism as well as his mothers ideologies in one. He is currently learning more of The Thousand Eyes, finding more comfort in that rather than the religion he was raised in.


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    Eyes: Seafoam blue-green from afar. A green ring outlines his pupil and mixes with a dull blue.
    However have to be red due to broodism

    Hair Color: Strawberry-Blonde, fading into pink.

    Hair Style: Messy and unkempt, fluffy, and semi-long

    Skin Color: Lightly Tanned

    Clothing: A grey T-Shirt, Black pants, brown leather boots, and a faded blue, well-loved, and tattered jacket.

    Height: 6 foot 2 inches

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    0-7

    Raymond was born to Lock Render and Alexandria Render, shortly after Lock had died for the first time. Born a Cratos brood, his mother decided to have his grandmother perform the Orange Dragon Birthing Ritual on him, hiding his broodism. This allowed him to grow up slightly normally. He was an imaginable and excitable child, finding interest in the little things. He would chase bugs, butterflies, make up imaginary friends, etc. His favorite thing to do was be able to see his Father, since he wasn’t able to as often as he saw his mother. He spent most of his time exploring, playing, and learning as much as he could from his parents. His Father taught him bits of Dressolini as he grew while his mother began from a young age teaching him how to defend himself with his fists.

    7-Present

    When he turned 7, his life took a turn. His Father died for the second time, this reason still unknown to him. His Mother took him away from the rest of his family, leaving to find a new life with the assistance of a friend, Aldüir Stormblade. Raymond’s life officially had taken a turn. He continued his language study of what his father taught him via books he found around the home he was in. He was also told stories about his Father. How good a man he was, how he was incredibly brave, and how inspiring he was to other people if not a little bit, well, stupid. He also learned about The Collective, now knowing it as a place where other family resides and where his parents met. He learned different Unionist ideologies from the knight he stayed with alongside Mother, and as such didn’t go outside very often. At age 12, he was given a drawing of himself, his Mother, and his Father. It wasn’t until he was 14 that he was allowed to go outside, as his Mother was horrified by the idea of what could happen to him. He spent a lot of his time outside trying to find out how to become like his Father that he’d heard of. Here is where he met his best friend, Myriil Faren. Eventually, he worked up the courage to finally go to The Collective, where he met his grandparents, Sivo Sagh and Rhys Sagh. Sivo began to train him on how to use a sword and shield after he showed interest in such, eventually giving him his first sword. Upon seeing this, his mother replaced the shortsword given to him from Sivo and gave him, instead, the one that used to belong to his Father.

    Born to Lock and Alexandria Render as a Milot brood due to his mothers sanguinism.

    Was taken to Aldair Tempetyr when he was 7 alongside his mother when Lock died for the final time. He studied around as he wasn't allowed outside much due to his mothers paranoia

    Was allowed outside when he was 14, meeting his best friend and now lover Myriil Faren. He went to the collective and learned to fight under Sivo Sagh for a short time while also learning under the Tempetyr's.

    Received his fathers sword from his mother after seeing the blade given to him by Sivo.

    Currently 18, trying to find a way to make himself proud while doing good by people in the sewers and above the surface.​
     
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    @ghosta_babes Hello, I've claimed this app for review and will get back to you within 48 hours.
     
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    NetXeroVT Relearning, looking for rp ppl

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    Need a new reviewer as Follower doesn't seem to be staff anymore! I just updated him to fit the new format as well as redoing parts due to lack of a ritual.
     
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    Claimed for review
     
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    This is actually 14 unused, not 13.
    Thirty points in combat alone is pushing; Please take away at least five points from one of these categories.
     
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    NetXeroVT Relearning, looking for rp ppl

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    @Acosmism fixed! Edits should be in brown!
     
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  9. NetXeroVT

    NetXeroVT Relearning, looking for rp ppl

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    @Acosmism Please mark this sheet as rejected! I'm giving the character to my friend @DuchBargollo as he played the other parent and he should have the sheet up tomorrow :)
     

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