Approved Sheet ⊱ Ysil Yahdga ⊰

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  1. AlphaInsomnia

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  2. AlphaInsomnia

    AlphaInsomnia Inexplicable Explicative

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    Here is my review:
    • Point accrue until age 60, so your total points is equal to 60, not 65.
      • Because of this, your proficiency points will have to be adjusted.
      • If any of your proficiency changes affect body shape, please correct this as well.
    Please fix this issue, and your application should be good to go. Tag me with @AlphaInsomnia when you are ready.
     
  3. HoshiWomp

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    Huh, well I totally misunderstood that change then lol! I've made the change. Just bumped down the medical prof.

    @AlphaInsomnia thanks!
     
  4. AlphaInsomnia

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    Approved.
     
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  5. HoshiWomp

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    @AlphaInsomnia Hello, hello!~ Made some Prof changes with the new guidelines. Thanks!
     
  6. AlphaInsomnia

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    Looks fine, approved.
     
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  7. HoshiWomp

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    Hiya! Used the Society Prof change of one point as an excuse to change up some aesthetics and add some description in the personality section. Thanks!
    @AlphaInsomnia
     
  8. AlphaInsomnia

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    Here is my review:

    The only issue I see are the points. Points are capped at 60 + 10 hobby. You'll have to remove five of your points.

    Tag me when you've made the appropriate edits.
     
  9. HoshiWomp

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    Hello! Sorry, idk what dark energy overtook me but I felt the need to redo her profs. Trying to make a stronger concept I guess. Let me know if anythings amiss or if it just seems complicated. Bless <3
    @AlphaInsomnia
     
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    Alrighty. I don't see anything overtly wrong. Approved.
     
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  11. HoshiWomp

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    Made edits according to the recent Race update. The most pressing thingies are in blue. Thanks!

    @AlphaInsomnia
     
  12. AlphaInsomnia

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    Nothing looks outta wack. Approved.
     
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  13. HoshiWomp

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    Bumped for the new Prof System!
     
  14. FireFan96

    FireFan96 Ghost of the Past Staff Member Lore2
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    @HoshiWomp my review:
    • I'm counting 2 extra free hobby points in Baking art. Either allocate some unspent points or lower it to 5
    make this one change and tag me when complete.
     
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  15. HoshiWomp

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    Hi friend! Thanks for your review! I used my unspent points to fill in the Baking Arts. Sorry I missed that lol. Be well!
    @FireFan96
     
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  16. HoshiWomp

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    Updated for the new application format

    I’ll tag you @FireFan96 as you were my last reviewer. Thanks for your help! :)
     
  17. Acosmism

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    Hello, claimed for review.
    Please list your physical stat calculation; moreover, when it turns out as a decimal, always round up!
     
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  18. HoshiWomp

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    Added!
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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