╔•════════•༺༻•════════•╗ ╚•════════•༺༻•════════•╝ “Loneliness adds beauty to life.” “It puts a special burn on sunsets and makes night air smell better.” Spoiler: Zhaleh's Theme Art <3 Character Information ☠ Full Name | Zhaleh Dilshad ☣Nickname | Zambezi Zurka, Mutant☠ Race | Wylathar (Predominant Wylathar, Wolathar) ☠ Age | 88 ☣Birthday | April 30, 252 A.C.☠ Sex | Female ☠ Gender | TBD ☠ Sexuality | Themselves. ☠ Eye Color | Teal Core Concept ☠ Zhaleh, once a devout follower of Nirualla and Abbagellon, has found themselves now believing more so in the Warped Woods itself rather than the Dark Ancients who may have “created it.” ☠ Zhaleh is a always changing, confused overly-mutated Wylathar who’s trying to figure out how they came to be while also protecting those who are like them. Proficiency Information Total Points | 50 Prof Points + 10 Hobby Points 1 Fist Combat 20 Caster Ranged Combat 2 Gardening Art 5 Hunting Art (5 Hobby) 5 Horticulture Art (5 Hobby) 18 Sorcery 3 Linguistics 3 Arcanology 3 Roguery 4 Physical Stat Ability Information ☠ Sorcery: (Sorcery Skill 1) ☣ Wall Climb 3 ☣ True Path 1 ☣ Light Mend 2 ☣ Darkness 3 ☣ Element Control 1 ☣ Element Control 2 ☣ Element Control 3 ☠ Arcanology: ☣ Volacorum Knowledge ☠ Roguery: ☣ Rogue Gift 4 ☠ Kathar Ability Pool ☣ Empath Sense 1 ☣ Vile Vine 1 ☠ Dimensional Power X Languages Common (Free) Katharic (Parent) Daendroque (Linguistics) Appearance Information ☠ Zhaleh is a everchanging overly-mutated Wylathar. ☠ Zhaleh is 5’8” and has a slim body, their hair color is brownish-grey and usually looks wild and unkept. ☠ Being a mutated being, Zhaleh’s looks are always shifting, their recent one having two sets of arms, the first being a set of humanoid brownish-grey wolverine arms with hedgehog quills sticking out. The other set of arms was a longer pair of rat arms emerging from the back. Facially, the Wylathar's eyes are a teal with no eye whites and goat pupils, a squirrel nose, and a set of antlers. The mutant's legs are replaced with brownish-grey rabbit legs with black claws, and they have a long brownish-grey squirrel tail. Across the mutant's skin were several small bumps, similar to a toad, glistening a dull grey color. Life Story ☠ Zhaleh was born in Ellar-Rokhara in the city Paärthalaär to a Wolathar named Katayn and a Wylathar named Tahmineh. ☠ Zhaleh spent most of her years living within the Warped Wood with their fathers friend Kourosh. In the forest they spent most of their time learning how to adapt to the ways of the forest, gaining the skills of growing food and fighting off creatures from a distance. ☠ After decades of living within the Warped Woods, Zhaleh found themselves being blessed by someone or something within it, giving them the powers of the forest itself. ☠ Wanting to find answers of who they met in the forest, Zhaleh set off to adventure to Regalia where they heard is the place where dreams come true. Zhaleh also hopes to find other warped creatures like themselves and set up a place where they may feel safe within the city. Progression Information Sorcery Level 2 (Forced), Rogue Level 1
My sole point of review is to ask for an identification of the Hobby Points you've added. If you haven't added them, then your math on Proficiencies needs to be adjusted to make sure it's only 60, and not more than that. Tag me once your edits have been done @GamingLeopurred
Remains Approved as I can see no issues but be aware that I could be wrong as this kind of thing, especially with how much new stuff the Kathar have, may require future edits/corrected on the part of other staff which I have missed as problems on this app.
Wouldn't that melt? You appear to have done a Racial Boost twice, though I don't quite know how. Please fix this, or your terminology, because all of the short forms are not helpful on my eyes.