Approved Sheet Émilienne Di Civita

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    Basic Information
    • Name: Émilienne Lindara du Sauvelle di Civita
      • Modern Altalar Name: Epona'llianna Qiuallai du Saullevé Iefyr du Ostieremark
      • Nicknames: Emi, Emilie, Darling, Rhouzelle
    • Race: Solvaan Altalar
      • Culture: Leutz-Vixe
    • Age: 45
      • Birthday: December 14, AC 252
      • Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius
    • Sex: Female
      • Pronouns: she/her
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Eye-Color: Minted Jade
    Core Concept
    • Faith~ A woman who had trouble finding a good footing in religion, but has recently found foundation within Unionism, particularly the Vultragon Sect. Émilienne has abandoned her worship in Vallea in the Faith of Estel after a crisis of faith, now shows finds solace in God Empress Ness who she gives praises after a divine intervention during the Vampire Incursion.
    • Concept- Eccentric but humble-hearted, Émilienne is a studious Solvaan who takes up the steel of the bardiche from being a Lion Pelt Knight, but also the fan of a Fineland Baroq. She wishes to see the best in others and to help their growth, but all the while adding a spark of fun to it all.
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    Proficiency Points
    • Strength | 5
      • Melee Weapon Point Buy
        • Unarmed Pack
        • Thin Blades Pack
        • Large Blades Pack
        • Axe Pack
        • Polearm Pack
    • Constitution | 2
      • Training Point Buy
        • Physique Pack
        • Bruteforce Pack
    • Wisdom | 4
      • Arcanology Point Buy
        • Hôterie Wisdom Pack
      • Alchemy Point Buy
        • Common Alchemy Pack
        • Morphing Alchemy Pack
        • Healing Alchemy Pack
    • Dexterity | 0
    • Magic | 0
    • Charisma | 3
      • State Point Buy
        • State Commander Pack
        • State Diplomat Pack
      • Language Point Buy
        • Empire Linguist Pack
    Ability Information
    • Solvaan Altalar Racials
      • Weapon Summon
      • Arcane Ranged
      • Arcane Detection
    • Solvaan Specials
      • Ageless
      • Arcane Mastery
      • Magnificent Hands
      • Magnificent Tools
      • Elder Voice
    • Melee Weapon Abilities
      • Unarmed Dodge
      • Crippling Strike
      • Knockback Sweep
      • Counter Rage
      • Polearm Leap
    Languages
    • Common {Free}
    • Lëtz {Parental}
    • Empire Linguist Pack
      • Ithanian
      • Dressolini
      • Altalar
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    • Émilienne is a purely mundane Solvaan with only some minor marring. Her figure showing the years of her knighthood with old and faded scars litter about, but usually covered up by makeup save for two standing out on the crook of her neck and midsection. Around the collar of her neck is a matching tattoo, a ring of laurels similar to the one around her lover's neck. A recent addition is a glowing tattoo of the unionist eye on her palm, given to her by Mother Alexi during her Sanktism of Conversion through Holy Scriptures.
    • Émilienne has a stature of 6'2 and a stockier/athletic figure, but mainly in her shoulders. Her sleek hairs that is always done up on some intricate Leutz braid or bun, and having one side shaved that has some flowery pattern detailed into it. Her normal attire follows after conservative Ostieremark dresses or pants depending on the day, but always having some sort of flair to it.
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    • Childhood|Émilienne Lindara du Saullevé was born in the province of Morzaria to a Solvaan couple who had laid roots in Brissaud during its founding years. With her fraternal twin sister, they were the fifth and final children to be born in the aristocratic family.
    • Adolescence|Once she was old enough, her militaristic natured father found her to be competent enough to follow in her family traditions, serving in a line of duty which in her case was becoming a knight of the Order of the Lion Pelt. Émilienne would be sent off to Emprizais du Lion in Ivenna, Ostieremark at the age of seven, becomig a page with the backing of her family. The rowdy child would be put under the tutelage of another Solvaan Altalaar. Slowly but surely, the older nelfin would begin to reign in Émilienne's temper, and train and educate her into becoming a proper knight.
    • Adulthood|The years would pass by until Émilienne reached her graduation ceremony, becoming a full fledged Dame-At-Arms. After her graduation, the Solvaan would bounce between contracts before taking on a permanent position as a guard to a diplomat in the Ithanian Sovereignty. She become well acquainted there with the courts, and even meeting and having a brief relationship with a courtesan. She would become wrapped up in the t'Hôterie Circle and their wisdom before being sent off to Eisul-Solleria with the diplomat. Being considered a race-traitor, her time spent there was not pleasant and often spent isolated outside of work. This visit was before before she was sent off to fight in wars back to back. Émilienne would begin fighting in the Bone Horror Crisis in Hadaria, participating in the Altalar-Regalian War, and then finally shifting into the Dread War.
    • Regalia|Once returning after the slew of wars, she would find half of her family deceased due to an illness sweeping through the city. Devasted and heart-broken she shuts herself away for months until finally heeding the call of her sister to come join them their family after gaining nobility in the Holy City of Regalia. Once there, Émilienne would find herself becoming the matriarch of her remaining family in a night, and taking over her sister's titles and becoming duchess. She would lead the house for several months until ultimately stepping down and merging with the Reinard family through an arranged marriage . Though she soon found herself leaving the family with her now wife, being given the the title and barony of Civita and Fogiatina in Vultaro by the Emperor.
    • Current| After the tortuous months during the Vampire Incursion, she adjusts to a life of normalcy with her wife and children in their ever growing family. Some past mistakes coming to life that she is ammending for and finding peace within herself.
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    Heyo! I updated Eponia to fit with the new Altalar app! @Mollymock

    Here are the updates:
    • I made her into a Solvaan Altalar to fit more into the Lion-pelt order
    • I added more description to her Beorl-Axe
      • Axe was made by aurelian30k (Humaira Reinard)
    • Fixed her proficiency to match the Solvaan's limits to match
      • Heavy-Weapon Combat dimmed down to 25
    • I switched around her combat proficiencies, removing +5 from heavy-weapon combat and added to fast-blades.
      • So, +25 Heavy-weapon combat & +10 Fast Blades
    • Fixed her physical stat to be 35.
    • Fixed her racial abilities to give her Sinavaal's Aura and Vallea's Guard.
    • Changed her eye & hair color, hair style, and shortened her height to 6'5.
    • Switched her birth place to Solleria instead of being born in Ithania
    Changes were made in red.
     
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    @Mollymock Hello! Fixed up her proficiencies to match the new system, and gave her frontline command.
    All changes made in piink.
     
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    @Mollymock Hiya! With the permission of @Souled, Eponia became apart of the Eledhwen family. So some changes were made with it.
    • Changed her last name to Eledhwen
    • Bumped up her age to 79 and fixed with DOB to fit
    • Major change was a complete rehaul of her backstory, reworked it to fit into the family and tried my best to keep with the previous version. As well, fit with the Knight order update especially with the Lion Pelt Order a bit.
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    @Mollymock Hello! Updated the gal to the new Altalar and Knight Update, as well spent the rest and changed around some of her points. Also, lil update to the lifestory.

    All changes marked in this color!
     
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    @Mollymock Hiiiiiii, updated le french elf to the new proficiency points along with some other things.

    • Updated name and aged her down to 57
    • Proficiency update and changed body type to athletic
    • Big one, but I redid Eponia's backstory again to change some things and to reflect the update. I tried to shorten it as much as possible, but still long ;-;
    Updates mark in rose! Also fairwarning, aesthetic update coming soontm.
     
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    @Mollymock Slight aesthetic update, tag got removed during the process. ;-;
     
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    Tag fixed per request.
     
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    @Mollymock

    Hiya! With the new updates and the impending knight update, I decided to completely rehaul Eponia who is now named Émilienne due to focusing more into the Leutz-Vixe culture and becoming half-altalar. Since a lot was changed, can she be completely reviewed again please. As well, her lifestory may be changed up again as a lot was condensed and I wrote this at 5 am in the morning so just a heads up.
     
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    @Yurs PROFICIENCY UPDATE TIME! Also switched her back to full Solvaan because wasn't having fun with the race change. All changes done in this color. Tagging @FireFan96 for theme check.
     
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