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yeah all right that's fair enough, sozzer's right i reckon
Sup man, gonna take a look and see if I can find a few things you can improve on. Big things: First and foremost, you're going to want to extend...
REST IN PEACE VILUT GURDS THE MEMES WILL BE REMEMBERED
Just taking a glance over this, I may as well point a few things out. Could help to get it approved, eh? Things In General Keep an eye on your...
Hmm, that seems a bit odd. I just had a peek at @Unzu's application, and from what I can see, it's all there. [spoiler] Do you think it might be...
I'm finding some points I agree with on both sides of the argument here, but I believe it all really falls down to those two things: the...
I'm also doubting that this would happen, but hear me out for a moment. A place such as this could actually be very cohesive and work quite well...
A few edits have been made: Added a like for cooking. Added information about his jobs. Now, I'm fairly sure these don't call for a re-review,...
@0romir Hi! Thanks for the quick review. I've made the following changes: I'll readily accept that. I've changed this weakness to 'Slow...
Basic Information Steven “Steve” Estrada is a 35 year old male Ailor, infected with the Dra’lonais Bloodline of vampirism. Steven was a lone...
@SunShineRainbows Woah. In-depth. I'll sort through this and correct up some things. Thanks!
Thank you for the very quick review. A few of those were silly mistakes, and I've corrected them as following: I'm aware of the permit system,...
@Goldzillaa There's no 'top notch' rating. I'm not sure what else to rate it.
Basic Information Ludvig Jakob Kardos is a 43 year old male Northerne Ailor (Pronounced Lewd-vik Jay-kob Kar-doss). He is a bartender for the...
Top notch, lad. I'm stealing some of the life story if that's okay with you.
@SunShineRainbows review her, lad
Basic Information Ludvig Jakob Jaeger is a 43 year old male Northerne Ailor. He was born on the 4th of October, 260 AC, to his parents Fredrik...
Pop Kalti into the relationships, yo.
Basic Information Alba Eloise Monataigu is a 32 year old female Ailor. Alba was born to Esteve Monataigu and Francesca Amador on the 3rd of...
