Well if you still see some errors then please tell me.
I have fixed the problems now.
OK thanks.
Well OK I guess and thanks.
Thanks that would be great, but I don't want to waste any of your time.
Ok thanks again.
OK I will fix it. But what is wrong with Clime?
I'm going to be adding more to the Life Story.
K thanks. I changed it and if you see anything else like that please tell me.
I changed the age and will be adding a little bit more with the life story. I also will change it some.
I edited Likes, Dislikes, and personality traits. I may add some more later.
Alright.
Please tell me how I can improve this. I think the hardest part was the head description.
Basic Information Trent Smith is a 17 year old male elf...
Sorry but my computer loaded slowly and I didn't see the changed you made too it so some of this might be repeat.
It's good. But you need to add some to the life story. Also you should add how she felt about finding out that they were vampires. Plus why did...
Ok.
Nice job.
I didn't see the race in the basic info section.
Ok I didn't see the name and age I guess I read over it.