Remove this line. You shouldn't mention things that aren't strengths in his strengths section. I mentioned the like section because if you want to...
Fixed :D
That's okay! I'm asking you to break up his academic strength into smaller sections. So as it stands right now you talk about magical lore,...
Break up the academic weakness into more specific strengths. Considering you've kept him above average in dueling, only choose one more field...
I read through all your edits and reasoning behind them and I'm very impressed, I agree with everything you've stated so I'm happy to stamp...
Considering you've described his small man syndrome to cause more aggression, I'm happy to consider it different enough to stand as its own...
Hiya @alpet! I love the concept you’ve created for this character. It’s always good to see more aspiring nobles who are ready to stir the plot and...
Hey there @Blackfish__! You’ve gone beyond the bare minimum in extending upon the points in your application which is lovely to see! So props to...
Howdy @Ddafad! Pardon for the long wait, your application is succinct and well written so I found little faults reading through it. I’ve dropped...
Approved!
Whilst it is possible for the character due to how long they've been studying their craft to reach expert mode, I'm going to say just stick to the...
It is a strength but it's also really similar to one of his personality traits. It seems a bit cheap to have two things that are alike just to...
Hiya @The_Shadow_King3! You have a wonderfully detailed and thought out application - I wouldn’t expect anything less from a staff member. I found...
This is all a-okay. Just tag me when you update it, no need to stress about it now. After the Dakkar re-write sounds good for a over haul.
You're okay haha <3 Approved!
Hello there @Nesstro! It’s always pleasant to sit down and review your applications because they’re always formatted and detailed lovely. I’ve got...
@Nesstro, I'll be reviewing this application!
After doing some more research it's reasonable to have your Orc at the weight listed. In future, even though you did tag me, make sure to make it...
Looked over the change, everything still looks good.