Yo Matey! Heres some advice. Don't start every sentence with Maxwell. You might also want to throw in some more detail for Maxwell's friends....
I appreciate any help thanks.
Really? That seems a bit heavy for an Elf.
I really appreciate your criticism and help. I'll get to work on bumping up my characters traits and other points noted. Thanks for the help.
Not really the constructive criticism I was looking for but thanks.
Basic Information Sylgorn Silverleaf is a 20 year old Talar Male. He was born in the Ithanian countryside to Sebastian Silverleaf and Sylvia...