Oh gosh, I think I'm finally good. @Nastynick The edits made since you last looked are made in this color. I'm so sorry for how long the life...
I've made changes in this color. Thank you for the patience with this app. Shoryu is a character I've had for several years, and inactivity has...
Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Shoryu Tsatsu Sinclair Age: 20 Gender: Female Race: Half Ch’ien-ji, half Shendar. Main Ambition:...
@StevenWeen The edits make her much more well-rounded, I think. I truly enjoyed the read, and there's nothing else I can really find to...
Revieeeewwwww: It's not entirely necessary, it seems, since other apps have been approved like this, but it'd probably be helpful to have your...
@Louby65 You're doing great! Also, I'm glad you took the suggestion of roleplaying it out. That's awesome that so many people took you up for the...
So sorry for delay! For the goal, I meant more how she aims to achieve it. This would help you as a roleplayer more, so you know how to go about...
Review: Try adding a sentence or two to your goal, just so you have some aim for your character. That weight is a lot. At that point, he'd be...
@Squeaker555 @Naerishi @Zyo Please do not post in staff review unless you are staff, or the person who posted the character application.
Review (again!): That's much better. I'm not sure what sort of information he could keep in this journal, but I'll allow it. Just make sure not...
Review (again!): The only difference in your body description is that you added in a small blurb under skin about his scar. Please put more...
I will be reviewing this introduction! @vidivo
Review (again!): You're missing the full name on the first bullet point. No middle name is fine if he doesn't have one, but I'd like you to put...
Please do not tag staff. We go in order, and there are other people who need reviewed too. You will get reviewed in time. :) @Winterclaw12
Review: I like that you chose for your character just to look average. Not many people do. Even if he goes by only a first name, I'd like you to...
I will be reviewing this character introduction! @Mr_Jigglesworth
@Jj2482 Sorry that I'm so incredibly terrible and missed this, omg. Approved!
@Jj2482 Teled Methen is incredibly wartorn. A wealthy Ithanian family would have been murdered or raided to pieces. If you really want influence...
Review: Teled Methen is a continent filled mainly with Elves. I'd suggest saying she was from Ithania; especially because all of the names you've...
I will be reviewing this introduction! @Jj2482
