@Jared4242 Fixed! I decided to re-implement the "charred hand" idea. Hopefully thats enough of a weakness :P Was too lazy to put in the new...
Basic Information Brom Dalendür is a 43 year old male dwarf. Brom was born to Balhof Dalendür and Erna Zharr'kvinn on the 9th day of December,...
You're not bothering me, the more descriptive people are, the more help people give me, the better Brom will be. So actually, thanks :D Fixed the...
I'm just going to change some stuff around, and he'll be a "regular old dwarf". Therefor, no need for the ring, and wouldn't possibly be able to...
Ill keep it in mind, but I was set on it being related to a dakkar.
*Cries* Ok, got to change that then...
(That was fast)To the best of my abilities after looking it up, I couldn't find anything on the wiki saying they cant breed, even if it is...
A Steel, or even iron, Ring won't ever melt at 200 degrees since its melting point is way above it. But the ring won't matter if I can't be...
I removed one positive trait, and added 2 more negative ones, would you mind re-evaluating some of the stuff? Thanks :)
Made the changes to the Life Story that you recommended, fixed the "gender problems" you saw, as well. Another Note about the ring: It is crafted...
Its not hot to only some people. Its just so hot, that no one would dare wear it unless related to dakkars. For the first part, thats what I was...
@Jared4242 Ok, changed the age, while he was meant to be old, but I didn't know he was edge of death old. I changed all the minor things, and...
Thanks, working on the edits!
Well, mages themselves, I thought they are allowed, its just the practice of magic.
NOTE: Thanion Faeldar is an Mage that does Novice Alchemy on the side. Basic Information Thanion Faeldar is a 93 year old Male Eldar Unqualë...
@billy_dont_rage Good question. I do role-play and play RPG's a lot, I think so. It will get some time to get used to, but I'll be able to do it....
Made some changes you recommended, but leaving the Alchemy for now. The idea is that he wants to be an all-around High Sorcerer, and he tries any...
@billy_dont_rage Hey, If you read the beginning of the lore, he grew up learning battle-league archery, so even though he doesn't do it much, he...
NOTE: Thanion Faeldar is an Expert Mage that does Alchemy on the side. Basic Information Thanion Faeldar is a 157 year old Male Eldar Unqualë...
