Thank you for the help!
@Eccetra I believe I touched upon everything that was requested and feel that it is ready; thank you for your timely first review!
Thank you! I will let you know when its all set.
Ø Basic Information · Full Name: T’vas Halos (doesn’t remember his surname) · Age: 6 years old · Gender: Male · Race: Lampar · Main Ambition:...
T'vas is an adult. Lamparr reach adulthood by the age of 5.
Your format is well constructed and easy to follow, so I can pinpoint areas easily (thanks)! Physical description seems in-line with lore. The...
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Please tear this apart, I want to know everything that is wrong with this before I bring it to the attention of lore staff. Thanks in advance! Ø...
Thank you! A friend pointed that out to me and I have since been fixing it.
P.S. This is no where near complete; I am just looking for feedback.
[IMG] Character Outline Step One: The Basics Name: Mi’ak Age: 21 Gender: Male Race: Tigran Character archetype: Want-to-be...