... whoops, I forgot that I made this to be honest. Sorry for vanishing after you made the review Jared, I'll write down your edits and at some...
((I'll add all of the expansions in the indefinite future, but I'd just like to get this out for now. Happy reading!)) Basic Information Full...
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Happy Holidays!
No worries! It's your application after all. If you're going to continue it, just let me know if you want me to check it out again when you've...
In my experience, it has been. I apologize, I'm not familiar with everyone's experiences I suppose. But I would think they'd just lose interest...
@ All the pvpers saying that raids and war is a realistic part of medieval life. This is true. But roleplayers narrate their own story, they don't...
done! @Jared4242
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[IMG] Basic Information Khillan Drazhras is a 41 year old male Dwarf. Khillan was born to Keija and Mehren Drazhras on January 20th in the year...
It's likely a typo. One of the "fathers" has a name that is typically feminine, and is later mentioned as a mother in the life story. And while...
Preface: Hey! I read through your app, and I'm gonna try and provide you some general advice to assist you in taking the first steps into editing....
good luck! I'll provide another wave of feedback once you get more stuff done/revised :)
@xXCarrotSenseiXx My Review: This will have to be a bit sparse, simply because there is still a lot in this application that has not been...
Is the one I made a couple weeks ago still valid? Also, I'm a little confused on what I should be doing IC with this. Do this group of merchants...
Yay :)
* Personal goals updated! *Disloyal weakness added! *Typo! * I have removed creative thinker, and added stealth strength. Both strengths have...
Basic Information Bartholomew Urchin is a 25 year old Ailor Human, born in the large village of Valmorne, Ellador Bartholomew has no known...
I agree with your first point, but I'm afraid I don't get this reference. What do you mean?
I was brought here by general chat. Seems like an interesting idea, I haven't tinkered with redstone since beta and I don't know much about how...
