Kinda spontaneous... I think the main ideas presented are great, though. Do try to stick to the format if you're planning on staff review. I...
I think this was a great idea. Stupid lore writers. Who wouldn't love a klein flying about on caffeine AND the wind? In all seriousness, this...
Aherm! I hope I don't burst the roleplay blimp for this character, but they seem way too... volatile? Especially since the hub of rp is Regalia......
You obviously put a bit of work into this. One suggestion I feel obliged to make is that you could replace the "bored" personality trait with...
Edits: 10-18-2015 Added to the Adventures In Regalia section. She revealed her love to Theodore Artiemus (@Zombiel3ait ) , and is becoming an...
Basic Information Victoria Cerdici is a 24 year old female ailor. Born to Lucrezia and Ottavio Cerdici, Victoria has three siblings: Veronica,...
You need to work on this. lol
Heh... looks nice. I remember the peer review for Theo (this looks totes better). Also, I noticed in rp when you added that mischievous trait,...
Or, it would refer to his appearance, or the fact that he's fictional. It could also be speaking of the character as more of a story, to say...
Wow... you put a lot of work into this. Just a few pieces of advice and things to work on: Grammar Formatting (make it easier to read (bold...
EDITS: 10-16-2015 added all the way down to the Clothing and Accessories section, and edited some of the information provided earlier. 10-18-2015...
Basic Information Riguardatta Rebecca Cerdici is a 36 year old Female Ailor She was born to Adelaide Cerdici, and Pietro Cerdici, who have both...
Yep. In my experience, though, if it doesn't make it through, do a complete redo of the app, even if the character stays mostly the same.
What?!?!? I'll have to go over the tigran lore again, then. When did that happen?
Holy macaroni! He can run a four minute mile?!? You know that's like world record speed, right (for women, anyways)? Wait a minute!! Whoa, whoa,...
Hm... Cool! The grammar needs some help, but I like the amount of description! Some people will say to describe your character like in one of...
I found this rather interesting to read through. Although the grammar was a bit iffy and you could definitely add more details, I'd respond to...
Remember to go into description of about four sentences per personality trait, and two to three for likes, dislikes, strengths, and weaknesses....
This character app is barely started, but I'm working on it. Basic Information Basic information has 4 main bullet list points, follow the...
Okay. I think I fixed most of it. What do you think, @Jared4242 ?
