Seems pretty good so far! Not much else I can spot.
PEER REVIEW. Basic Information How exactly is he going to achieve honour and knowledge? I recommend expanding on this at least a sentence or so....
big brother
pronounced anya lmao
whatever.
then he's a jacobinist. which is illegal. most ailors are arrogant and treat any other races/halfbreeds like scum.
jacobinism is when you want everyone to be equal.
@Scriihbe wiggles eyebrows
one dead girl
a jacobinist
tfw the incompliant version of her
where amm i
where am i
dank.
hhahhahaha
more like a fairy cake because of her imagination
I think it should be more like.. 10-20 seconds? Because in situations such as torture and getting kidnapped, it's kinda necessary.
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