Alright! I think I have made the needed changes! Thanks for the pointers everyone! @LumosJared @Jack_Castle
*derp* Completely forgot about that thank you!!
Basic Information Full Name: Wren Lufir Age: 57 Gender: Male Race: Altalar Main Ambition: Wren aspires to open a business that revolves...
Thanks for the Peer Review! Moving this to Staff Review! @Parz1vol
Alright, Thankyou! I appreciate your concerns!
Added Life Story. Probably has lots of typos! I'm gonna proofread it tomorrow with a fresh mind. Feel free to look over it if you'd like! :)
Thanks for your time! Made the suggested changes. @Parz1vol
Got new interests as I worked on my previous character sheet, and made an altogether completely new character. Just gonna tag you as you...
Basic Information Full Name: Wren Lufir Age: 57 Gender: Male Race: Talar Main Ambition: Wren aspires to open a business that revolves...
Hey there! So here are some things that you should consider If he was thirteen years old he wouldn't be able to teach magic, and would most...
-Embraces chilly hug- That was actually a miscommunication, I described what he wanted to do rather vaguely so I fixed that It must've been...
Make sure once you finish your character application, you take out the template for creating a character. It will clean up your application...
Raphael seems like quite an intersting character! Not sure if you have already taken this to staff reveiw, but here are some things that I noticed...
Basic Information Dimitri Aeglosslim is an 80 year old Isldar Male. Dimitri Aeglosslim was born to Christoph Aeglosslim and Aleena Aeglosslim on...
@Furry_Panda Thanks so much! I keep forgetting to add to the behaviour section. Don't worry you don't seem harsh at all, I know first hand how...
I have completed Dimitri's life story! @Furry_Panda
@Furry_Panda Thanks so much for reveiwing this! I have changed the things you suggested, Although I want to keep Dimitri an expert ice mage, it's...
Seems like an intersting character you are creating here! When I was reading through your character I noticed some things that you should take...
Please settle this somewhere else PM eachother... Thanks =)