Varszira Zzazsei - The Priestess

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    to be made of sea salt and ruin,
    to be able to lose yourself in the depths of the oceans,
    was a gift not granted to most

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    Basic Information

    Full Name: Varszira Zzazsei
    Race: Slizzar
    Age: 82
    Sex: Female
    Pronouns: She/They
    Sexuality: Thalassophile
    Eye Color: Silver

    Religion ⊱ Varszira’s religion is the basis of everything she stands for, colouring her view of everything around her. Without a primary Ssepston, they struggle to hold each of their gods equally.

    Core Concept ⊱ A short-tempered, devout Nessrassian follower struggling to come to terms with the price of her actions; past, present and future.


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    she swore vengeance on all men with dark hearts
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    Skill Information

    ⊰ ᴛᴏᴛᴀʟ ᴘᴏɪɴᴛꜱ ᴛᴏ ꜱᴘᴇɴᴅ ⊱ 50 Points, 10 Hobby,

    ⊰ ᴘᴏɪɴᴛꜱ ᴀʟʟᴏᴄᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ⊱

    ⊱ Core Group Proficiencies
    2 Dagger Combat
    12 Ranged Caster Combat

    ⊱ Point Buy Proficiencies
    9 Linguistics
    12 Sorcery
    15 Roguery

    ⊱ Hobby Group Proficiencies
    10 Sailing Arts [Hobby Points]

    ⊰ ᴘʜʏꜱɪᴄᴀʟ ꜱᴛᴀᴛ ⊱ 7 Points


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    let me tell you what I am: scales and
    gills and smiles made of sharp teeth

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    Ability Information


    Slizzar Racial Kit

    Ranged Caster [ Exist ]
    ⊱ Spell Shot
    ⊱ Beam Focus
    ⊱ Magic Nova

    Sorcery [ Exist ]
    ⊱ True Path 1
    ⊱ Wall Climb 3
    ⊱ Element Control 1
    ⊱ Arcane Mastery 1

    Roguery
    ⊱ Rogue Gift 3
    ⊱ Rogue Gift 4
    ⊱ Guard Forgery Pack
    ⊱ Burglary Pack
    ⊱ Sleight of Hand Pack

    Languages
    ⊱ Common
    ⊱ Zasta
    ⊱ Daendroque
    ⊱ Altalar
    ⊱ Katharic


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    she that was so proud and wild,
    flippant, arrogant and free,
    she that had no need of me,

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    Appearance Information

    From head to toe, Varszira is covered in scales of gold and blue; with the prior forming patterns along the majority of her body. Their eyes are a striking icy silver, with their hair forming into long kelp-like tendrils.


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    she weeps and laughs like water.
    water is not wounded. there is no trace of the blood
    that flowed in the night.

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    Life Story

    ⊱ Varszira Zzazsei was born within the walls of Sassrakkand, the eldest of many children to two devout Nessrassian worshippers.

    ⊱ Her adolescence was spent in the halls of the temples of Sassrakkand, taught all there was to know about the Ssepston, their worship, and their plans for the world. Here she learn to act as a Slizzar should, before being assigned a mentor.

    ⊱ After finishing her training in the temples, Varszira and their mentor travelled into the wide world for more practical experience. Along the road, she found an affinity for the arcane, as well as easing into the natural path for any Slizzar.

    ⊱ Soon they were forced to return home to aid in fighting against the Regalia Empire during the Chrysant War. Moving on her own path after many years, Varszira took up with a thieves guild in Hallonq where she met her husband and future partner in crime.

    ⊱ After the destruction of their guild during the bone horror crisis, both Varszira and her partner picked up and moved to the city of Regalia to start anew.
     
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    she weeps and laughs like water.
    water is not wounded. there is no trace of the blood
    that flowed in the night.

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    RELATIONSHIPS

    « FAMILY »
    A link to the past

    ⊰ ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡᴍᴀɴ ⊱ I wish you were here, or I was there, or we were together anywhere.
    [Lover] Her husband and first partner in crime, Shadowman will always hold a place in her heart. Despite his shortcomings and faults, there is little in this world that would truly turn Varszira against him.​

    « FRIENDSHIPS & ACQUAINTANCES » A bridge to the future

    ⊰ ᴀʙɪɢᴀɪʟ ᴛᴜᴄᴋᴇʀ ⊱ Fool of hearts; laughter incarnate.
    [Companion] The squeaky, stretching Existling never fails to entertain. A chaotic force with middling intentions, Abigail is always a welcome companion.
    ⊰ ᴀʜꜱᴏᴢʜᴇʟ ⊱ Healing doesn’t mean the damage never existed. It means it no longer controls our life.
    [Mentee] A child lead astray, in desperate need of guidance. The progress they make still warms her heart. Her affection for Ahsozhel is matched only by the pity she feels for the Slizzar fallen astray.
    ⊰ ᴀɴᴀᴛʜᴇᴍᴀ ⊱ Life is about balance. Be kind, but don’t let people abuse you. Trust, but don’t be deceived. Be content, but never stop improving yourself.
    [Friend] Over the course of their interactions, Anathema has earned the Slizzar’s respect and affection. Her admiration for Anathema’s dedication to their beliefs and compassion for aberrants is rare.
    ⊰ ᴀʀᴡᴇɴ’ᴇʟᴅᴀ ᴛᴏʀᴅᴏᴠᴇ ⊱ The problem is not the problem. The problem is your attitude about the problem.
    [Companion] Irritating, in the best way possible. A new feature in Varszira’s life, evidently one likely to cause more headaches and entertainment in future than may be healthy.
    ⊰ ɢᴡᴇɴʏᴛʜ ᴢʏʟᴍᴏɪʀᴀ ⊱ The ones who notice the storm in your eyes, the silence in your voice and the heaviness in your heart are the ones you need to let in.
    [Dear Friend] Over time, Varszira has come to care deeply for Gwenyth. A true friend, and confidant, the Isldar's endearing mannerisms and caring nature has earned a deep fondness from the Slizzar.
    ⊰ ʜᴀʀʟᴏᴡ ᴋᴇᴛᴄʜ ⊱ Will you do better than your father, or fall to the same fate?
    [Companion] Harlow has earnt the Slizzar’s interest, for better or for worse. Without a doubt, she looks forward to seeing how far he’ll fly before he falls.
    ⊰ ᴋʜᴀʟɪᴅ ⊱ Don’t expect me to always be good and kind and loving. There are times when I will be cold and thoughtless and hard to understand.
    [Friend] A traitor, a friend, a student. Varszira’s opinion of Khalid is muddled at best, yet she still holds some fondness for him.
    ⊰ ᴠᴀʟᴀʀᴏꜱᴛᴀ ɪɴᴏ-ꜰᴇʀᴍᴜɴɴ ⊱ If ever there is a tomorrow when we’re not together, there is something you must always remember. You are braver than you believe, stronger than you know and smarter than you think.
    [Dear Friend] Valarosta is a sister to Varszira in all but blood. From the streets to sewers to nobility, for each stage of their lives, Valarosta has been a dear confidant and stable presence. There are few people Varszira holds as dear to her heart as the mage.
    ⊰ ᴢᴀᴍʙᴇᴢɪ ᴢᴜʀᴋᴀ ⊱ When you can’t look on the bright side, I will sit with you in the dark.
    [Friend] A staple in from early on Varszira’s time in Regalia, the chaotic cryptid never fails to bring a smile to her face.
     
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    literal sneaky fiend
     
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    Hi there, I'm claiming this app for review! @BiBiBirdie
     
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    Okay,

    Reading through your character sheet I would first comment that it is very well written and detailed. I was, however, reading through the life story and noticed that there is quite a mysticism around the father of Ciel. Could you write in the lifestory what it was that he did? Was he a vampire? As you mentioned that Ciel followed him in his bloody footsteps at the end of the third paragraph - please clarify this as I believe having it cemented will provide a good foundation for your more personal roleplay scenes.


    I would like to see what her dreams and aspirations are at the end of the life story also, to see what it is she intends to accomplish once reaching Regalia. Or if she is only intent on being entertained - then where she intends to experience this a little more specifically.

    Please perform these edits in DARK BLUE! Thank you!

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    Hi there Birdie,
    Approved and ready to go! @BiBiBirdie
     
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    Heya @Lord_Immortal ! Made more than a few changes in this red because I’m really indecisive and love the new aesthetic…
    • Aged her up to 48, and added the new profs for it.
    • Changed her race to full Altalar for the new Altalar sub-races.
    • Changed her height slightly to make her shorter.
    • Added the Altalar Proficiencies in a spoiler, since she can’t use them as a sanguine.
    • Changed her backstory to fit the changes.
     
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    Her age still says 42! Change this; and it's approved. @BiBiBirdie
     
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    @Lord_Immortal Completely re-did the character, race change and everything. The backstory is largely the same but edited to fit her new race. Needs a complete re-review.
     
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    Re-review:
    • Honestly the app remains beautifully written, the proficiency points are all added up correctly and the abilities are carefully laid out. Whilst the lifestory seems to reflect the character well.
    Approved! @BiBiBirdie
     
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    Forgot to mention adding her Slizzar Bonding here, so I'm mentioning it now for reference.
    Also added her Hobby Points!
     
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    @Lord_Immortal Hi Lovely! I've switched her Profs around a little bit, and changed her spells with the new sorcery update! Changes have been made in This Colour!
     
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    Heya Birdie, thank you for laying it out in such an easy to read manner! The app looks beautiful as ever, and the profs all add up. Approved! @BiBiBirdie
     
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    Played around with her backstory, switched her name, aesthetics and hobby points! No major changes.
     
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    Updated Prof Points for her new spell!
     
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    Hey there! Claiming this app as old reviewer is no longer on the team. Expect a reply shortly!
     
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    Approved!
     
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    @Mollymock finally redid her backstory and aesthetics... after all this time
     
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    @Mollymock Changed her points to fit the new spread! Everything else is still the same.
     
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    Shh,,, Sneaky bringing-her-back update...
     
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