Link to Artwork Character Information Full Name: Saana Raasaubi Birth Name: Caznarr Ravat Raakeniim Mor-Kiir Raz-Parthanaar Race: Suvial Altalar - Vadyalocaï (Emulating) Was: Kathar, changed in Garden of Everchange. Age: 45 (Appears 27) Sex: Female Gender: She/Her Sexuality: Bisexual Eye Color: Light Beige, Epicanthic folds. Core Concept Estellon - Avinla Conditioned to serve a state she no longer calls home, she now uses her training to be a buffer between friends, family, and empire. Proficiencies Strength: 0 Constitution: 0 Wisdom: 1 Deeplore Pack Dexterity: 1 Disguise Pack Magic: 7 (Void-Exist: Smoke) Breaking Pack (Fire Element, Shadow Element) Displacement Pack (Smoke Element, Heat Immune) Mimicry Pack (Dark Element, Prison Break) Alteration Pack (Evil Tongues, Chain Break) Disruption Pack (Cold Immune, Dream Element) Enchanting Pack (Lightning Immune, Arcane Sight) Casting Pack (Water Element, Altered Voice) Greater Mage Magic Bolt Displacing Breaking Charisma: 5 State Saboteur Pack Western Language Pack Ancient Speech Pack State Dignitary Pack (Exist) Demon Hexlord Pack Abilities If your Character gets any non-Racial Abilities, write down where they get them from. You don't need to list the Abilities themselves. No Other Abilities. Languages All Characters speak Common, as well as the language that they were raised in, by default. More can be bought through Language Skill Buy. Common (Free) Katharic (Native) West Linguist Pack (Linguistics) Ancient Speech Pack (Linguistics - Ancient Altalar) Appearance Information Darker skin tone, reddish-brown hair, light beige eyes. Life Story Born in Paarthalaar, Dread Empire to Razylokh and Cralhidyn Raakenniim Learned language and the occult from mother. Conscripted into Duskeye Syndicate, learned spycraft and wetworks. Came to Regalia to track down failed Loyalists, and ended up turning anti-Dread herself. Spoiler: Current Events Kaeros first son - Fin'ullen, is born (309, age skipped to 2yo, currently 3). Turned Suvial - Gardens of Everchange 10/23/2021 Shäntaëlï, first daughter - second child - Suvial, is born 02/04/310. Spoiler: Aesthetics Spoiler: Short stories https://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/tell-me-mother-cazna.90850/
Heyo! Peer review, not staff. Please label what type of Kathar they are, Shenath, Saivale, etc. I suggest putting the prof cost for Allorn Culture and Nelfin History before it just so we know. Along with you can simply put +8 Void Ritualism instead of 8/8. Also, with my calculations, you have spent 69 Points, you only have access to 60. Please change this. You have +5 more hobby points to spend if you wish. Please put calculations under this to be sure of your math and show us how you got 40. It isn't correct with the points you have but you can re-adjust it once you fix the error above with the 69 points spent when it only should be 60 + Hobby Points Since this is not required, put this as a spoiler please! These answers are extremely short, I suggest expanding them by one or two sentences, go more into depth if possible.
I made the noted changes in my post, switched to option two as I don't feel I know enough about the lore yet to do option 1 on character behavior.
You've only spent 58/60 points here. You are not required to spend them, but I thought I'd point it out. Your physical stat calculation is a little off. It should total 26.5, rounding up to 27, rather than 18. Only characters with Body Care Training can acquire the Sculpted Body Shape. Please include an out-of-ten value for each of these religions. This backstory is rather short for a character of this age. Please expand upon it some more. Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete.
Okay, trying this again - there were other things I overlooked such as my ritualism, etc. All of the changes since you last read are in "purple" (slight color blindness).
@Mollymock Before I do it, the cultural skills I selected for Cazna are not what I originally thought they were and I have not used them. I'd like to switch them both out and put the points into fast-blade - is that allowed?
@Mollymock I removed archery. Removed Stealth Rogue. Added 9 points to fast blade, updated body stat. Cazna has only used archery twice in this month, her stealth rogue ability replaced by Alais Cloak/silence and the bloodline become her primary means of stealth.
@Mollymock In a statement from velstadt, citing Marty; the crimson curse does not work in the way I believed it to. I'm requesting permission to swap out the mutation for Crimson Guile
@Iyyiushi This is fine, but, no further mutation changes will be permitted for the foreseeable future.
@Mollymock just notifying you that the current event section was updated to reflect a break from Cazna and that she IC returned to the Dread Empire. I'm not sure how long I'm taking a pause from her - I need to re-examine her as a character and how best to approach any potential goals. So, the "time home" will be used to justify any changes to the character's personality and goals.
@Mollymock I'm wanting to make a one-time change to Cazna's new ritualist setup as to engage in thematic roleplay given her developments in the Hexenbloods and under Xaella. In that, Ritualist Corruption to be replaced by Ritualist Ghostmutter. The Roleplay concept to be the use of IG divination through spiritualism, but not possession unless otherwise permitted. Wherein, I'll engage with players and their character development whereby such development may include interactions with "Bintaar" and the souls therein. If I need to include backstory changes for Cazna's embrace of "Bintaar" to reflect her character changes I can. tl;dr 1. What: replace Ritualist Corruption with Ritualist Ghostmutter. 2. How: Create community Divination RP. 3. Why: Character Developments. 4. Who: under Xaella.
Only one thing to ask: Remove the descriptions of the abilities. You only need the name, as the wiki is the only place players should look to check up on what things do. If this is for your own reference, feel free to put another list in a spoiler. Make this change, tag me then we're good to go!
@Mollymock I just realized I deleted the wrong ritualist ability; can I please switch out ritualist armor for ritualist blood-mend ?
@Mollymock Not needing review - but letting you know Cazna's crisis of faith is now reflected. I acknowledge this means she has lost access to her ritualism; noted the mutations as removed - saved for Dragon Crown.
In an attempt to make Cazna a character capable of engaging in roleplay outside of CRP and to reflect on things she learned over the year; further to justify my academic ooc interests as knowledge for cazna - I'm requesting the following changes: removing State Command + 5 pts. removing vocal singing + 5 pts removing 5 pts from stealth +5 pts, this is to be held for future pending character development. moved racial boost to theatre arts. moved free points from theatre arts to pathfinding+5 pts adding Arken Pack -3 added essence pack -3 added Middle Altalar -3 added Mythic pack -3 added Allorn pack -3 @Mollymock Retractions marked red, additions marked blue
Your point spending is a bit confusing, please clarify it a bit more or congest it like; +10 blah (+10 Points) +10 bloop (+5 Hobby, +5 Points) +10 bleep (+10 Talent) and so forth.
@Caelamus Made fixes, removed the 5 points that were floating free from my previous edit log and assigned them.
@Mollymock Raprann Infection change: Noted that all Arcane/ritualism under her not-infected list are disabled Added the mutations for raprann under the respective spoiler.
When a character takes Compassionate Magi, these point changes are permanent, following through even after cured. Therefore, there is no need to add this. You need only update your app when infection occurs with the new point spread with this in mind. But for now, approved.
@Mollymock Updated per sorcery update Removed Daggers Invested 20 pts in Sorcery, selected Exist Removed Perception and moved stealth to the free slot- had too many pts.
You shouldn't have active abilities in spoilers. Anyone should be able to see these at a glance. Make this edit, tag me then we should be good to go.