Shelved Character Revna Hjortsund

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  1. Iyyiushi

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Revna Hjortsund
      • Titles:
        • Knight-Captain Valldal-Reliquary Order (ex Cult of Bard Skagger)
        • Countess of Fornhavn, Drixagh
    • Race: North Clad Urlan, Cold Weather Bovine
    • Age: 34
    • Sex: Female
    • Gender: She/Her
    • Sexuality: Heterosexual
    • Eye Color: Green iris, with gray eye-whites.
    • Occult: Fornoss God Magic (Ice)
    Core Concept
    • A follower of Elkonur and Bard Fornoss.
    • A fervent adherent to the Fornoss and the Velheim Way, Revna is a once Skagger turned Reliquary-Valldal Knight - those who trespass against the will of the Empire and her gods will accept mercy or suffer justice.
    Proficiencies
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    • Strength: 7
      • Bruiser Stance (Free)
      • Bruiser Slam (Icy strike)
      • Bruiser Tackle (Icy blast)
      • Bruiser Flurry (Ice storm)
      • Bruiser Agony (Frost build-up)
      • Bruiser Ruin (Kick imparting ice-stalactite)
      • Bruiser Feint
      • Brawl Stampede Pack (Free Racial) (Horns glow short-term)
      • Building Smash Pack (Ice pillars erupt from strike point)
    • Constitution:0
      • Interception Pack (Free Racial)
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 0
    • Faith: 7
      • Shaman Defense (Frost growing on her armor or hide)
      • Shaman Earth (Wall of Ice / a rune in the shape of a snowflake on forehead)
      • Shaman Darkness (Snowblindness)
      • Shaman Aura (Plunging Temperatures in the presence of Spirits)
      • Shaman Synergy (Frost on horns in the appearance of glowing/refactoring light)
      • Cleric Talent (Free, numbing healing)
      • Cleric Exorcism (Freeze blasting the enemy)
      • Shaman Puppet (?, depends on ability)


    Abilities
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    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Skodje(Native)
    • Gallovian (Learned in Reliquary)
    • Dwarven (Learned In Reliquary)
    • Rannok (Urlan Tongues)
    • Rollok (Urlan Tongues)
    Appearance Information
    • She has a cold-weather bovine head, hooves, digitigrade legs, and a bovine tail. She is 6'7". She is highly built.
    • Revna has black hair, a mohawk, a pair of lower tusks, and horns that pull away from them and jut forward on her head. Below the waist, she has the same texture and colored hair covering her legs.
    Hooks
    • Blood and Snow
      • Revna was force-turned Urlan during the Drixagh Rebellion.
    • Knighthood
      • Revna is a Valldal Knight.
    • Additional Oath
      • Revna has an Oath of Chastity; her dedication to life is to keep it safe and educate future Hjortsund heirs from her siblings for generations.
    • Fornoss Faithful
      • She is an Eilirik. Any offerings left to the Vola are out of appeasement.
    Life Story
    • (277-289)Born in the region of her namesake, a set of fjords resembling antlers with their waterways. She spent her early childhood in Drixagh until she was old enough for education in Nordskag. She attends the Skagger Order.

    • (290-300) She spends her early teens raiding nearby posts and amassing coin and fame for her house. Eventually named second in command on her ship, she starts learning Command Fundamentals. Once back to shore, she is sent through Skol Militair Nordskag to refine her education in controlling soldiers.

    • (301-309) With rising tensions between the North and Regalia - Revna returns to Drixagh. This was until The Burning. She waited with her soldiers in the forests of Drixagh, the Wirtem-Regalian ships would land soon, and the battles come. By the end, Regalians and her units collided. By the end, she was struck down. She was lying there dying with the Halls calling her name. Yet this would be denied - an Urlan forcefully turned her, and the maim that was to claim her was healed. War after war, skirmish after skirmish in Drixagh and the wider world under the Empire, the Skagger, now Urlan, kept her calling and protected her people by enlisting in the Valldal order.

    • From the vampire occupation to the Bralona invasion, the Urlan would struggle to adapt to a life as an Urlan, from Mercenary and military service to learning how to fulfill the needs of her family in a multicultural melting pot.

    Revna identifies as a Progressive

    - The Occult should be allowed to use their magics to benefit the empire, but nothing dangerous to the public.
    - The gem of Regalia should be open to foreigners.
    - The standing armies should be prepared to defend the Empire and her allies.
    - Believes in following the spirit of the law but will bend it in the state's or her people's interest.
    • MCU Thor
    • Thusnelda, TV Show Barbarians.
     
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    Claimed for review
     
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    Everything seems to be in order here. Approved.
     
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    fixed a prof in phys that was mistitled; additionally replacing Pagan Mutationism with Ritualist Fearsmith. As Baal-Url would not engage in mutationism. @Woodwork
     
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    @Woodwork

    the fortification art was axed by staff announcements.

    Moved free points to hunting

    Replaced with General and Frontline command.
     
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    @Woodwork Given Ritualism update - Revna's points in ritualism have moved to Command prof - colored Green; I don't see her adopting "Imperfect" religions from the Url perspective.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay

    My reviewer is no longer staff - the application was updated to the new format and to allow her to engage in criminal investigations.
     
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    @Acosmism Needs review, plox lmk if I need to drop fist further per discussion!
    Changes:
    • Fist from 20 to 15, 10 invest, 5 race.
    • Leatherworking Art 5 invest.
     
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    Claimed for review! App looks good for the most part, however you currently have 15 points invested. Specifically, the Dexterity section has 3 points listed but 4 abilities selected. Please shuffle your points around to accommodate or remove the extra pack.

    Go ahead and tag me for another review once this change has been made, thank you!
     
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    @Yurs Fixed, I forgot to remove it from the template xD.
     
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    No problemo!

    APPROVED
     
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    @Yurs

    Just notifying you, not sure you wanted a review just for it, Thin Blades was replaced with Flexible Blades. The changes to the melee combat system and the niche use for thin blades ultimately made it incompatible with her setup. Also, lul flying bovines.
     
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    @microwavemmm I'm assuming since you're the last to review and still staff to ping you.

    Changes are marked in purple.

    Also updated to Urlan update.
     
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    Last edited: Nov 7, 2022
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    @RunicScrawl Prog mount ability go yeet update. Moved to wisdom, old gods archive
     
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