@Katiesc Updated Eric's app. Just his proficiency points. Removed any dead profs and jiggled the balances around a bit. Hope I didn't miss anything, thanks!
@Katiesc Hi! Another few small changes made to his profs as marked in Green. This was old lore I re-established and emphasised in his life story, also in Green. I also updated his faith in reflection of IC events, and added mutations to boot. Hope this is fine. Thanks~
My Review Languages You've an extra language without spending points towards it, please remove Kathar or adjust such. @Ghirko
I was under the impression this language was granted by the ritualism points and didn't require additional language points. Zasta is his parent tongue and sihndar and Kathar fall under the two free slizzar languages. Not a problem if I've misunderstood, and I'll change it as requested.
Oh! I half forgot about the free Slizzar language, utterly my bad. Apologies for the inconvenience. Approved.
@Katiesc All ready for the new system. Did my best at translating his previous profs to the new format so there shouldn't be too much out but do let me know if anything is off, thanks!
@Katiesc Added on two new languages because I wasn't aware Slizzar were still allowed their two free ones. Shouldn't change anything, just letting you know!
@Woodwork Updated points; change religion due to Dragon and Unionism no longer being compatible; changed alignment from Lawful Neutral to Chaotic Good to reflect the way I play him better and updated the life story to include these changes and the Slizzar update details. The last bit has been marked in green. I kept it brief due to how long the life story has been already, but can expand on it all more if desired.
Please cut down on your backstory to fit the bullet point format. You can have the current backstory in spoilers, but the short and concise version is for ease of staff review. Otherwise it's fine! APPROVED
@Yurs I adjusted some of my points. Given I have never used the perception prof and I'm not a rogue, I changed it for +3 engineering (hacking). I put the rest into Theatre Arts, added one from the sword combat and two from Vocal Arts, so that it could use the +5 Slizzar bonus. Last change was that I turned from Diplomat to Sage.
Heyo! There's a few issues with the points section that need to be fixed before I'm able to approve this app: You currently have 12 points invested into Engineering, but it says +9 in the parentheses. You currently have 12 points invested into Linguistics, which is enough for 4 languages, but have 5 languages listed as 'from points' in the Languages section. Additionally, you are only able to have 1 homeland Language. You would need to choose between Zasta and Zarraana, or pay for one with Linguistics. Your Slizzar racial boost is applied to a 5 point hobby investment, but you need a minimum of 10 points in order to apply it. Please add another 5 points into Theatre Arts or remove the racial boost. Your Physical Stat is incorrectly calculated. It should be 5 Sword + 4 Spear + 10/2 Theatre Arts = 14 points. The Slizzar cap for physical stat is also 15. Please go ahead and adjust your app accordingly, then go ahead and tag me once you're ready for a re-review. Thank you!
Made the changes: -Fixed the Engineering to say 12 Points -Removed Sinnayed Language -Removed Zorrana Language -Reverted Theatre back to Perception to use the boost -Fixed Phys Stat back to 14 Thanks =D
Looks great! Thanks for the quick clean-up. Since you removed Theatre Arts the Phys Stat would go back down to 9, since you were getting 5 from that. Go ahead and swap that out and I'll be free to approve, thank you! ^^
@Yurs OKAY THIS IS THE LAST CHANGE I PROMISE!!! Updated his age to fit the new spec perm, and tweaked his backstory to make more sense. Also, put hacking back into linguistics as it didn't make much sense for an old Slizzar not to know his own native tongue but can mess with robots.
@Acosmism Hi! Just added in the 'Other Shifts' tab under appearances but lost my Approved tag in doing so
@MonMarty Hi! Made some changes as I had to remove vandalism. While I was at it I also swapped Healing Alchemy for Dragonic Healing, and removed Medica Engineering as it was only used with the alchemical theme. Used my new points (and one I found uninvested but shoved into Dex) into Draconic Healing, Draconic Adjunctor, Puretek and Affliction Wisdom
@MonMarty Updated my app to the Magic buff. -Removed Parkour from Dex -Added spare point to Magic Invested two Magic points into Mimicry and Casting spell packs Added 6 Specials, found in Proficiency Details-Added art of Eric's Archon form to a spoiler under the Archon section of the details -Added a new shift to the list -Increased their age and added the direct Archon infection to their backstory following a ticket from August. I was waiting until the Dragon Worship update but thought I might as well do it now as I'm updating it anyway. Lemme know if anything's out of whack, ta
