Basic Information Full Name: Zsriel Maz-Solano Nicknames: Zsri Aliases: Masked Cultist I Age: 50 Visual Age: 25 Gender: Male Sexuality: Why you wanna know? No Seriously, why? Race: Allar Subspecies: Maz Affliction: Raprann-Scorrico Soul-Line Preferred Weapon: Crossbows Skill Information Total Points: 75 (+45 Spending Points +5 Birth Points +10 Talent Points +10 Hobby Points +5 Racial Boost) Leaving 11 unspent spending points for learning IC abilities/Knowledge Ranged Combat Proficiency +12 Crossbow Combat (+12 Spending Points) +20 Unarmed Combat (+15 Spending Points +5 Racial Boost) Ritualism Proficiency +12 (+7 Spending Points +5 Birth Point) Rogue Skill Proficiency +10 Stealth Rogue (+10 Talent Points) Art Skill Proficiency +7 Fortification Arts (+7 Hobby Points) +3 Hunting Arts (+3 Hobby Points) Body Shape (Body Capped at 25) Physical stat: =25 (+12 Crossbow Combat + Combat +20 Fist Combat) Debuffed by 10 due to Werebeast affliction when in Normal Form, Five in Halfform, and 0 in full form. Body Shape: Ripped Body Fat: Low Languages Common Free Language Learned later in life 10/10 Free parent Language Zasta Learned from parents 10/10 Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Racial Powers Maz-Allar abilities Maz-Allar Appearance Maz-Allar Body Physical Adaptation Maz Tracking Maz Recovery Werebeast Soul-line Werebeast Passives Soul Drain Normal Shift Half beast Shift Beastmode Shift Raprann Soul-Line Wisdom of the Raprann Long Aging Long Draining Raprann Strenght Sharpsight of the Hawk Glass Gaze Crawl of the Centipede Arthro Spit Grace of the Moth Dustful Damage Moth to Flame Spoiler: Werebeast Forms Descriptions! Middle Form: On his arms grow an array of bright blue/purple-colored feathers while the legs deform. Becoming that more like a mixture between a raptor and birds with sharpened white talons and claws on their hands and feet (Which were there prior cause of Maz-Allar). From the end of their blue tail appears a beautiful puff of blue/purple feathers. His head turns into a raptor like skull with feathers popping out of it. Having glowing sickly blue/silver eyes with extended sharpened teeth. Full Form: The raptor's legs deform even furthermore, becoming a complete bird and thin like with their talons, hands, and upper arms becoming pitch black with blue/purple feathers popping out of their garments. Their arms lose most of the feathers on them as two pairs of two blue/purple feathered wings appear out of their back. However one of these pairs looks more ghostly and translucent then the other pair. Their head transforms into that of a bare bird skull from of a raptors. Also keeping their tail which becomes covered in even more feathers. Note: Only one pair of wings can be used to glind/catch falls from 20 blocks or less due to Ritualist Shroud/Phasewing being activated. (Phasewings make up the second pair of wings while the beastshift gives the second, which cannot be used at all. The phasewings are only given function however by [Ritualist Shroud] Note: Tail can only be used combat wise due to [Ritualist Beastwarp] Note: Claws and teeth can only be used combat wise due to race. [*] Ritualism Abilities Ritualist Shroud Ritualist Beastwarp > Beast Tail, three feet long with a puff of blue/purple feathers at the end of it. Ritualist Brightflash Ritualist Armor Aesthetics Ritualist Shine Ritualist Ghostmutter Ritualist Phasewings Ritualist Beast-Speak Spoiler: Ritualist Mutations Exist Category Exist Sight Exist Purify Exist Bite Exist Glow Exist Touch Exist Crown Exist Oscular Exist Tears [*] Visual Information Eye Color: Slit black pupils with a yellow iris and white sclera Feathers Color: Green Feathers Style: Short Skin Color: Blue/Purple Shades Clothing: Tbd Height: 6’0 The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Good Choose your Character Personality Type Architect Choose your Character's Religion Estel 7/10 Spoiler: Weaknesses Sweets: God help this man. He cannot resist being given a sweet by someone. Lavender: The scent of lavender makes him really calm. [*] Life Story Younger Years 5-12 Zsriel was raised in an Allar Exist Cult in a secluded area in a forest, from a young age Zsriel was taught the way of the Estel and how to use a bow to hunt. Along with making traps and other things. He grew up alongside his brother. His brother was always far more outgoing and bouncy than he was growing up. Often when the two got the chance to spend time together. He let his brother experiment with his feathers and just get 'makeovers' from him. They bonded much as younger kids this way. He was taught how to make traps and track down animals to eat. Teen years-And more 13-29 While wanting to focus more on his bow combat his mentors deemed it best for him to master his unarmed combat should he ever be found unarmed and needed a way to protect himself. As well how to use his claws more properly. Around the age of 17, the young Maz-Allar became infected with Werebeastism of the bird soul-line. When transformed he becomes a bright bird after the birds of paradise. But a little bit less vibrant. His parents who were Werebeast themselves often helped him through the turning process of his mentality, but so did his brother. This is when they began getting much closer than ever. Learning to hunt and survive together with the other Cult members. Zsriel spent even more time studying unarmed combat, studying with both a mentor and his brother in order to perfect his techniques. And when they had some time, often play pranks on others via Zsriels great knowledge in the creation of fortifications and traps. And just causing general trouble and some chaos. Released 30-50 After reaching the age of 30, the two brothers set out into the world on their own. Which after it became them against the world in their own right. Creating their own smaller pack in the process. Over the years they became more and more daring, only ever keeping to the smaller scale of often just giving guard patrols some trouble and doing general nuisance stuff. Within this time, he learned the art of stealth and used it to his advantage greatly. Which they then travel to the capital city of Regalia.
@Mollymock I threw out alchemy in favor of fists combat and more Ritualism abilities. Followed by adding a section for descriptions of Zsriel half transformed form and fully transformed form. I hope this is a-ok with you and you can re-approve my application. I also changed the backstory to follow through with the new skillset given. So more unarmed focused and not Alchemy focused.
In future, tag your application as Needs Reviewer when you shift around this many points. If it happens again in the future, we may have to result in rejecting this application. I feel as though these proficiency changes go back on what the character was initially, and have begun to feel a little bit minmaxed in nature. Please look at your proficiencies again, settle on a list for the foreseeable future (that fits the flavour of the character), and we can go forwards. Mark this app as Needs Reviewer when a decision is made, and one of our new Aspirants will look at the application and give you a full new review.
Thanks Molly! I'll keep it in mind for the future. Incase you missed it, I removed the Light Bow combat to even it out more.
@midnight_moon123 Alright! Preferred weapon is currently out of date, listing a weapon he has no profs in. You also have 11 points unallocated rather than 12. I also would recommend you take a look at Life Story again, as a few things seem incongruous. Primarily, you have a reference to his learning alchemy despite having no alchemical proficiency. "Zsriel spent even more time studying Alchemy..." Secondary is the fact that he has maxed unarmed proficiency - his highest combat stat - despite it being framed as something he learned fairly casually, as a secondary combat skill. Maybe consider making it more central to his backstory to justify why he is a high-tier expert at it. And more of a personal recommendation, I might go into detail about why he and his brother were separate in their early lives, despite his brother often grooming him in childhood. Make the appropriate edits in a bright colour of your choosing and tag me when you are done!
Okay! Still going to want to change "Preferred Weapon" to remove Light Bow since he has no proficiency in it.
