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[- Nicole Lyous -] ------------»〚⤄〛«------------ ════════════》- ‹⋅ ❂ ⋅› -《════════════ [ T U N E S ] 〖 Religion - Can't Pretend - We Must Be Killers 〗 Dream - Take Control - Stone 〖 Dancing in the Grey - Three - All the King's Horses 〗 «------═══════║⇹║═══════------» 〘 BASIC INFORMATION 〙 〖 Full Name 〗 Nesrin Beatrix Van den Berg ⇾ Previously Known as Fiorella Vicieux and Nesrin Peirgarten〖 Nicknames 〗 Fio, Ella, Fi, Nes, Nessie 〖 Race 〗 Hinterland Ailor 〖 Culture 〗2/4 Anglian, 1/4 Leutz-Vixe, 1/4 Ithanian 〖 Age 〗 23 ⇾ 〖 Day of Birth 〗 June 12, 287 A.C.〖 Sex 〗 Female 〖 Sexuality 〗 Demisexual 〖 Eye Colour 〗Emerald Green 〘 CORE CONCEPT 〙 An adventurous enforcer who goes through life with a sharp tongue, Nesrin pushes herself to do what she believes must be done, with the intention of defending her values and family at all costs. Filling in the role of a wanderer alongside such, her desire for more grows every day, where she maintains regular combat training. She places immense belief in the Unionist ways, and keeps to her practices daily. «------═════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《═════════════════------» ████████████████████████████████████████████████ ████████████████████████████████████████████████ «------═════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《═════════════════------» -[ « SONG » ]- "You're like an imprint, You've got fire up and down your cheeks, You burn everything you see." «------═══════║⇹║═══════------» 〘 SKILL INFORMATION 〙 ❂ Proficiency: 14 Total 〖 STRENGTH 〗6 Duelist Pack Demolisher Pack Bruiser Slam Pack Bruiser Flurry Pack Bruiser Agony Pack Bruiser Ruin Pack 〖 CONSTITUTION 〗3 Counterplay Pack Bruteforce Pack Heavyweight Pack 〖 WISDOM 〗0 〖 DEXTERITY 〗3 Parkour Pack [Free] Purity Pack Buster Pack Sniper Pack 〖 MAGIC 〗0 〖 CHARISMA 〗1 State Leadership Pack 〖 FAITH 〗1 Rebuke Faith Pack ❂ Languages: 〖 Common | 9/10 〗Learned throughout her childhood. 〖 High-Anglian | 9/10 〗Parental tongue. 〖 Empire Linguist Pack | 7/13 Learned 〗 Calem | 5/10 Skodje | 5/10 d'Ithanie | 8/10 Letz | 8/10 «------═══════║⇹║═══════------» 〚 SPECIAL ABILITIES 〛 〖 RACIAL ABILITIES 〗 Manifest Familiar Dark Empathy Practiced Mockery Manifest Destiny Destiny Stressors Job Opportunities 〖 POINT-BUY ABILITIES 〗 Heavy Pack - [Knockback Sweep] Hunter Pack - [Concussive Strike] Unyielding Pack - [Steady Body] Demolisher Pack - [Force Smash] Frenzy Pack - [Berserker Fury] Fisticuffs Pack - [Unarmed Expert] Counterplay Pack - [Rage Counter] Blunt-Tip Pack - [Knocking Shot] Buster Pack - [Piercing Shot] «------═════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《═════════════════------» ██████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████ «------═════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《═════════════════------» -[ « SONG » ]- "Gold are your fingers, Leaving traces everywhere you go, Diamonds in your skin, my flood flows." 〘 APPEARANCE INFORMATION 〙 Nesrin has no abnormal physical qualities as of right now. Nesrin has developed the tendencies of sly grins and sharp looks, her mannerisms being that of a calmer mind. Her appearance is well looked after, with her long, medium blonde hair braided down her back. She stands in the mid range of seven feet, levelled at 7’6", and has muscle definition along her arms and legs. She sticks to darker tones, for the most part, her love of blue and red shining through in many of her outfits, which she often pairs with gold jewelry. Although comfortable in gowns, she has a preference for trousers and boots, the part Anglian adding a pelt to her style whenever possible. «------══════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《══════════════════------» ████████████████████████████████████████████████ ████████████████████████████████████████████████ «------══════════════════》 - ‹⋅ ♞ ⋅› - 《══════════════════------» -[ « SONG » ]- "Bring the lion out, Bring the, bring the lion out." «------═══════║⇹║═══════------» 〚 LIFE STORY〛 |》Born to Julius Peirgarten and his Delmotte counterpart, she spent her earlier years close to her father and her siblings, where she was raised in Regalia, only to be situated in Anglia in coming years, the place of her birth. |》Nesrin's early life consisted of plenty of adventure, but the lack of a mother. She lived the farm life with comfort and ease, placing her full admiration in her father, whose love for combat she inherited. |》She was welcomed into the Aristocratic community, allowing for her to remain in the Holy City, much to her enjoyment. Her interests settled on the Old Guard, and then the Sendrassian War, in which she began her journey as a soldier. She beared the Peirgarten name, for a time, before resuming a life independent of Aristocracy with the chosen name Van den Berg, in honour of her Anglian roots. |》The city that counts as a beginning for all is not what drew her in, but is what convinced her to stay. With only her sister left at her side, and a legacy she has yet to decide upon.
@CanadianNeighbor Here's my review: Basic Information - No issuesSkill Information - Please include a physical stat calculation next to the physical stat number - Please include your racial spells under the skill sectionVisual Information - No issuesPersonality - No issuesLife Story - No issues Please make the changes in another color then tag me!
@Lizmun Just finished updating her proficiencies and adjusting her backstory to fit the changes. All edits made in red!
Howdy! App looks solid for the most part, there's just a minor proficiency error that needs to be fixed before I can approve: Honed Skill 2 can only be used to boost Hobby Category proficiencies, which does not include combat profs. An easy fix would be taking 5 points out of Dancing Art and putting it into Spear Combat, then having Honed Skill 2 apply to Dancing Arts. Up to you! Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary edits so I can review again. Thank you!
@Yurs Hey! Just made some edits due to racial changes. The points gained from linguistics are now placed in hunting art
@Yurs After playing the character some more, I decided to change around just a few of her points! I switched the dancing out for drawing, took away any points invested into rogue, and added to strength training!
@Yurs Hi! I decided that the strength training didn’t suit the character as much, so I placed any points into heavy bow instead! Just a minor change