Esmee Liesbeth Bancroft

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Esmee Liesbeth Hermina Bancroft.
      • Birth: Esmee Lisebth Hermina Kade.
      • Nickname(s): N/A.
    • Age: 24 Years.
      • Born: December 11th, 284 A.C.
    • Gender: Female.
    • Race: Anglian Ailor - Lexxon Lineage
    • Sexuality: Closeted Bisexual.
    • Prefered Weapon: N/A.
    Skill Information
    Total Points: 20 + 5 = 25 Points

    • Core Group
      • +6 Linguistic Science [+6 from Age Points]
    • Talent Group
      • +10 Statecraft Command [+5 from Talent Points, +5 from Racial Boost]
      • +5 Bodycare Training [+5 from Talent Points]
    • Hobby Group
      • +15 Writing Art [+10 from Hobby Points, +5 from Age Points]
      • +9 Husbandry Art [+9 from Age Points]
      • +5 Gardening Art [+5 from Age Points]
    Body Shape
    • 5/2 + 5/2 = 5 Body Stat
    • Slim Body Shape
    • Low Body Fat.
    Languages
    • Anglian (Door-Inner Dialect - Fluent)
    • Regalisch (From Father - Fluent)
    • Common (Fluent)
    • d'Ithanie (Linguistics)
    • Leutz-Vixe (Linguistics)
    Visual Information (Required)
    • Eye Color: Dark Blue.
    • Hair Color: Black.
    • Hair Style: Intricate Ponytails, Buns, or Pigtails.
    • Skin Color: Pale Ivory.
    • Clothing: Fashionable Dressage.
    • Height: 5ft 10in.
    Personality and Abilities
    Option Two: The Core List

    • Character Alignment
      • Neutral Good.
    • Character Personality Type
      • The Mediator / INFP-A
    • Character's Religion
      • Unionist [Sanchellist] - 9/10.

    Life Story
    Childhood
    • Esmee (Born as Emmett) was born on December 11th, 284 AC to an Anglian father and a Regalian mother. She was the youngest of her pack of siblings, and female, so she was born with very little mind paid to her.
    • As a child, Esmee was left to nurses and nannies more often than perhaps she should have. Her parents didn't dislike her per say, but being so far down the offspring line didn't exactly buy Esmee much in the way of attention.
    • Esmee was afforded a great education, as befitting her family name and wealth, but it was nothing extremely intricate or special. But still, corners weren't cut with Esmee's learning.
    • She was tutored by a local Knight of the Viridian Order, who had experience teaching trainees, but since moved into teaching young nobles general education, as well as protecting them. This knight, Ser Broos of Dorrin, took special charge of educating young Esmee, and filled in as an early father figure where her biological father didn't quite fit the bill.
    • Esmee was never entirely open with how she felt about effectively being ignored much of the time, and not to mention the constant dysphoric feelings she felt in near every life situation.. However, her elder brother, Laurent, made attempts to look after the growing Esmee more, as well as futile attempts at comforting her, yet she never told him the nature and sources of her struggles. This was something she appreciated.
    Teenage Years
    • An aging Esmee took a steep interest in literary artistry, as well as general politics and other affairs of state.
    • Interestingly enough, Esmee's interest in the politics and other related matters that her father partook in caused the pair to grow close. He would end up mentoring Esmee in various matters of conversative ideology.
    • Esmee had issues combatting depressive thoughts during her teenage years, far more than she ever had before. She would spend as much time away from people as possible, sleeping most of the day away and eating very little. This was by far her darkest years. Conflicts with her gender began reaching a boiling point, where hiding her problems became almost impossible.
    Adulthood/Recent Years
    • After turning 20, Esmee decided to confront her feelings about herself, confiding in her immediate family about conflictions with her then male gender and presentation. Surprisingly, most of her family took it better than expected. A weight was lifted off of her chest, and she was free to change aspects of herself and presentation to suit her preferred gender.
    • Esmee found a discreet alchemist to concoct her vials containing Ash of Cielothar Hair, allowing her to take on visually female traits to better suit her new identity. To this day, she retains the same contact to keep up her weekly dosage.
    • Outside of that conflict, as an adult, Esmee didn't possess a career. In turn, she found herself freelancing poetry of all subject matter, making spending money from it alongside her general Kade allowance.
    • Animal husbandry became a secondary interest in her adult years, becoming asutute in the matters of breeding horses and hounds alike alongside her father, partaking in races, shows, and other such events.
    • Esmee would eventually come to live with her siblings in the capital, hoping to expand upon her interests and find intruiging situations to dabble her fingers in.
     
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    @Mooffins here we go:
    • So the main issue that I see is the entire Viridian Education. Even for a Shieldmaiden, or a Kade, they would have to enter the Frauenhaus at the age of 10, and graduate at 20. I can allow her to still be in training at 19 years old and be free to rp (have some NPC mentor to justify it in rp), but Esmee has to have gone to the Viridian Order at 10.
    • Elders are rarely outside the Kurtenwald Castle unless on an extremely important mission that would require the Emperor to direct the Primae. It would also be unheard of for an Elder to reduce their status into a general noble tutor. I would change Ser Broos to another type of instructor, though if you insist on making him a Viridian, make him a Man-at-Arms.
    Once these inconsistencies are fixed, please let me know. I am happy that someone has finally gone the Shieldmaiden route after years of its absence from lore, so I look forward to what you have in store.
     
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    In fairness I didn't know if Shieldmaidens had different education times than normal Viridians, so I took a stab in the dark at time framing. I addressed the problems you mentioned. @FireFan96
     
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    Updated with character art.
     
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