Qalhata -= Cal =- Dzekh'aar

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    • ʙᴀsɪᴄ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to note one's identity.
      • « CHOSEN NAME » Qalhata Dzekh'aar, formerly Sarnai.
        • "Call me Cal."
      • « BIRTH NAME » Linëllacaránthe Hellorávanath.
        • "Caranthe Helvath works just fine."
      • « AGE » Twenty.
        • « BIRTHDAY » July 31st, 288 A.C.
        • « ZODIAC » Leo.
      • « GENDER » Male.
      • « RACE » Saivalathar Kathar.
        • Void Silven of Valor {Corrupted by the Scarlet Scourge}.
        • Formerly Half-Asha, half-Altalar {Feka}.
      • « PREFERRED WEAPON » Unabashed violence.
    • sᴋɪʟʟ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to harness one's skillset.
      • « TOTAL POINTS TO SPEND » - Twenty-Five points to spend alongside ten hobby points.
      • « POINTS ALLOCATION »
        • +10 Magespark Points. { +10 invested. }
        • +12 Spirit Sorcery { +12 invested. }
        • +3 Strength Training { +3 invested. }
        • +10 Statecraft Command { +5 talent, Boosted. }
        • +5 Frontline Command { +5 talent. }
        • +5 Dancing Arts { +5 hobby. }
        • +5 Circus Arts { +5 hobby. }
      • « PHYSICAL STAT » 15.
        • 3 Strength + 2.5 Dancing + 2.5 Circus = 8.
      • « BODY SHAPE » Variable.
      • « BODY FAT » Variable.
      • « LANGUAGES »
        • Common.
        • Modern Altalar.
        • Kathar Altalar.
    • sᴘᴇᴄɪᴀʟ ᴛʀᴀɪᴛs || to utilize one's abilities.
      • « MAGESPARK » Void Spirit. ( x )
        • Blood-Lord's Arsenal
          • Ornifex, Breaker of Bodies {Worldbreaker}.
          • Vhullos, Woldemar's Fury {Blood-drinker}.
          • Signir, Devotion of Blood {Demonic Intervention}.
          • Ghuun'ar, Rain of Terror {Hookshot}.
          • Khuraak, Heart-Render {Descend into Darkness}.
      • « SILVENISM » Child of Valor.
        • Starfallen Arena.
        • Mutations listed on document.
      • « RACIAL » Saivalathar Caste.
        • Secret's Masks.
        • Power's Reach.
      • « VOID SORCERY » Investment.
        • Magic Bolt I
        • Magic Sight I
        • Darkness I
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    • ᴠɪsᴜᴀʟ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ || to mask one's self.
      • « EYE COLOR » Gold and scarlet red, crowned by a red limbus and molten sclera.
      • « HAIR COLOR » Muddy black.
      • « HAIR STYLE » Messy and windswept, flowing any which way with little rhyme or reason.
      • « SKIN TONE » Ashen gray, marred by a sanguine tint.
      • « CLOTHING » A veritable brigand accented with accessories far finer than they deserve.
      • « HEIGHT » Six foot four. || 193 cm.
    • ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ & ᴀʙɪʟɪᴛɪᴇs || to know one's nature.
      • « ALIGNMENT » Neutral Evil.
        • "Whatever it takes."
      • « MBTI PERSONALITY TYPE » The Commander. || ENTJ-A.
        • Role | Analyst
        • Strategy | Confident Individualism.
      • « FAITH » Adherent to the Mortal Impetus (modified Woldemar worship).
        • After having their soul warped by the Scarlet Scourge, Cal undertook a form of piety that borders on self-worship, staunchly advocating for the tenants of Woldermar's Divine Chosen: themself.
    • ʟɪғᴇ sᴛᴏʀʏ || to know one's background.
      • Childhood.
        • Though it was probably obvious from first appearances, Cal’s birth came alongside several complications. Originating from the brief interloping of an unlikely duo, her existence was noted immediately and misattributed to an Altalar plantation owner and one of their Varran slaves. Hesitant to outright dispose of a Silven child, her birth was instead quickly swept under the rug in hopes of saving face and preventing the scandal from reaching the public eye. Sent off to a separate property, Cal was instead intended to be raised as though she were any other Varran - though of course, her distinguished status as both a half-breed and of magic descent gave the others enough of a hint to understand that she most definitely wasn’t one of them. Because of this she suffered exclusion from nearly all social circles, and Cal grew up maladjusted and socially inept - in essence, lacking a great deal in both force of personality and people-sense.
      • Adolescence.
        • Life went on as normal for some time, until a woman named Bast - a fellow half-breed - came upon the property during one of her travels and took note of Cal. Likely out of both an empathetic pity and interest in the creature that was Cal, Bast struck a deal with the property owner and offered to pay the Silven’s way out of servitude. Though the girl initially had reservations about travelling outside the walls of the plantation, Bast’s infectious confidence kept her reassured that it was ultimately for the best. Quickly, Cal came to agree and explored all the freedoms that her newfound life allowed.
      • Young adult -- Present.
        • Though her time with Bast was somewhat brief, Cal wasted no time in adopting her new path in life with a burning desire driving her towards self-improvement. In the years that followed her departure the Silven voraciously pursued any means of betterment she could find, beginning with her common, then world knowledge, and continuing on and on until she had taken on more subjects than she could reasonably handle. Despite this her enthusiasm hardly waned, and to this day she seeks out new subjects to tackle both to increase the quality of her own life and the lives of those who struggled like she did.
     
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    @Arendan Requesting a re-review whenever you get the chance, aged up the character by the year and made the appropriate changes. Thanks very much in advance.
    EDIT: Also updated to fit the new Halfling stats, just highlighted the Body Shape and Proficiency category rather than making the entire thing orange.
     
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    @Arendan Requesting re-review whenever you've got time.
    Completely changed proficiency section to fill a different role as a martial fighter. I know that changes on the new system aren't final but I wanted to get the go-ahead to swap things around before we make the jump.
     
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    @Arendan Updates made to comply with new prof system!
    Also bumping
     
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    @Arendan Made some small changes to proficiency, character has also been infected with Vampirism!

    Edit: Just kidding about the vampirism.
     
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    @Arendan Character underwent an IC Race Change, updated some basic info, traits, and proficiency. Thanks in advance!
     
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    @Arendan
    This many pings on one thread is gonna require a trip to the confessionals, I'm so sorry.
    Completely retooled traits and proficiencies following Altalar rework, also requesting a thread clean-up if possible.
    God bless you Greg.
     
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    Approved! Same again with writing in the background where she gets her magical magic from. @Chief
    (I can't do anything about the cleanup, so continue tagging away in the hopes of one if you'd like.)
     
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    Hey I dunno how it happened but my Approved title got removed when I revamped the app.
    I didn't actually change anything besides formatting, just need to get the Approved back.
     
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    Went ahead and swapped primary school of Sorcery following development and alignment change. No points altered, 3 spells traded.
     
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    New Sorcery Spells Approved @Chief
     
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    @Lord_Immortal Updated Page to reflect new Silven Abilities, changed pretty much all the prof points.
     
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    Oh lordy. Why Cal whyy. Approved!
     
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    @Chief
    5'9 is 175cm, not 173
    just a little heads up
     
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    Bumping for a new reviewer, as well as some major changes to Proficiency and Race. The character has undergone a Dread Rebirth and is now a Shenath Kathar!
     
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    I MISS OLD CAL >:'(
     
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    @Optimalfriskies Updated the aesthetics of the app, thank you to @Qoll for formatting it and making it look AWESOME
     
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    Obligatory point update, as well as requesting a new reviewer. Bump o7
     
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    Updated in accordance with Kathar rewrite. Also need new reviewer o7
     
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    Finished off the Core spread with a 3 point dip into Ritualism. Abilities are under Magespark stuff, and the Faith section has been clarified to explain. lmk if anything needs changing o7
     
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