Played Character Gwilym Arnyn

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  1. Winterless

    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    (Number indicates strength of feeling, not its polarity.)

    Alaire Arnyn
    90
    "You taught me how to stand."


    Lilianne Arnyn
    90
    "..And you taught me how to fall."


    Aubrianne Arnyn
    80
    "I dread to think of where I would be without your teasing, and your kindness."


    Adhémair Arnyn
    80
    "The golden child- and for good reason, I think. Though you'll never hear me say it."

    Cilian
    90
    "I wish I was a little more like you."

    Eira Eldevik
    100
    "Always."


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    Valkari Lothgard
    67
    "One day we'll meet, and figure out where it all went wrong. ..Or we won't. Perhaps that's alright, too.


    Chengis
    80
    "Your sacrifice was not for nothing. I swear it."


    Marisa Solisti
    80
    "I've wished you nothing but happiness, from the first moment."


    Sabarielle Caeosei
    35
    "A good friend. Though with how Regalia has become, perhaps it is better you vanished from the city."


    Julius Peirgarten
    55
    "For the man I remember you as. And the man you will be again, some day."


    Cyprien Bongrante
    45
    "You had good intentions, I am sure."


    Vulmar
    50
    "A good man, beneath it all. ..Bloody funny, too."


    Lucille de Monette
    80
    "Somehow, you're always there when I need you."


    Merith
    20
    "Unexplained mercies. Perhaps I will learn why, one day."


    Julian Keymorne
    25
    "Odd fellow. Fun to drink with."


    Caedric Westryn
    20
    "How my father would weep, if he saw the kind of Viridian you were."


    Fen'nan Solaveira
    70
    "Don't turn into a problem that I have to solve. Please."
    OLD: "One of us should be happy. That seems only fair."
    OLD: "Different paths."


    William Howlester
    45
    "Efficient. Stalwart. Corrupt. But I suppose we are all that last one, in some way."

    Cal
    50
    "I hope you found your peace, in the end. For your sister's sake."


    Leufred du Triege
    55
    "Perhaps some things can be forgotten. Or at the very least, forgiven."
    OLD: "I haven't forgotten the blackmailing. Or the Thorn Company."


    Cieli Le'vilja
    65
    "..Mm. Seems we're good friends, after all."
    OLD: "I think we would be good friends, if I were.. less Ailor."


    Vivana Avalorn
    83
    "I suspect it is our shared fate to dwell beneath fading trees, bound by past and duty until the world's ending."


    Bel-Gyarbrin Tibaerthus
    70
    "Loyalty, until the end. If there were a list of those I wished found peace, you would be high amongst them."


    Tirioc Mionther
    45
    "You did far more than heal my spine, I can promise you that."

    Avaineiral Rilynnlues
    40
    "At least we understand each other, now."


    Sae'viir
    60
    "I'd have stabbed me, too. My cowardice led to what you are today."


    Lorelei Morgan
    40
    "Good whiskey. Better company."


    Palina de Pierre
    70
    "Another apology. I wish I could do better."
    OLD: "I miss our talks, and the friendship you provided after everything."


    Erwin Braunschweiger
    50
    "I don't envy you, having that sword in your head."
    OLD: "You're halfway there."

    Lynmar Lomstedt
    50
    "Hah. And cracked on, you certainly have."
    OLD: "You know what you did wrong. You know what you must do. ..So crack on with it."


    Cordenia Zylmoira
    80
    "Ah. You could do better than me."
    OLD: "Maybe. Hopefully."
    OLD: "You remarked once on the likeness of our souls. I will try to prove you right, for as long as I can."


    Valarosta Ino-Femunn
    50
    "Living proof that anyone can change."


    Anathema
    75
    "Dying's a little easier, if you're the first face I see when I wake."
    OLD: "It's not fair that I have to choose. Praying I get away with not having to."
    OLD: "Monsters are rare. Often it is just the broken, and those who wish to mend them. I know now that you are the latter."

    OLD: "I can't say I trust you, fully. But I trust the cause you claim to serve."


    Nerissa
    45
    "Funny to think I used to chase you down, as a bounty hunter. How things change."


    Abigail Tucker
    40
    "..Sometimes I almost forget that you nearly killed me, once."


    Xilthruum
    80
    "Maybe you should've read more books."
    OLD: "Your life may not be mine to take. But I will be there to help bring you to justice."

    Lyonel Deceres
    50
    "How would you see me, if you knew?"


    Elaena Solisti
    60
    "I'm sorry."

    Leuthien
    60
    "There is goodness in you. I know it."


    Eponia Eledhwen
    55
    "Certainly my favourite Lion Pelt, so far."

    OLD: "Yeah. You're alright."

    Bellaire Raphellia
    65
    "Don't change."
    OLD: "Flowers. Books. Pens. Harrowing reminders."


    Marie-Paule Delmotte
    35
    "I wish I'd been there to stop what happened. Poor kid."


    Howland von Schwarzkrau
    65
    "I know you're trying your best. Just wish it wasn't in a way that was so damned annoying, sometimes."
    OLD: "Don't throw your life away. That's my job."
    OLD: "The knight I realised I couldn't be."


    Rowena
    60
    "Mean. Sarcastic. Entirely untrustworthy. I'm sure we'll be fine."


    Lhoris
    50
    "I can't help you, in loneliness. Any more than I can help myself. Maybe I shouldn't try."

    Therese Braunschweiger
    70
    "I'm almost thankful it was the ocean that took her, instead of a vampire. Maybe I would have become like you."
    OLD: "I wish you could see."

    Cadwyn
    70
    "Your turn for the hero act."
    OLD: "Sorry for letting the side down."

    Carmen
    60
    "Good pasta. Weird paintings."

    Maiyusa
    70
    "I'm your friend. Please remember that."
    OLD: "Always needed a wingman."


    Noor
    75

    "Don't want you to leave. But you will."

    Argo Drresal
    55
    "World needs more soldiers like you."

    Haqet
    55
    "There's nothing I can do to you that will be worse than the guilt you will feel. I'm sorry
    ."

    Kelemvor
    40

    "No, no. Just plain old murderous."
    OLD: "Misunderstood, or murderous? Or both?"


    Sempronia
    25
    "I've seen worse hats. But you'll never hear me say it."

    Necratos
    35
    "Lunatic."

    Astrid
    25
    "Nice eyes."

    Imogen
    55
    "We could use your kind touch, when you return to duty."


    Signe
    65
    "Thank the Gods there's another person from Nordskag in this city."

    Rhain
    65
    "Steadfast. Reliable. I couldn't ask for anything more."

    Lisbeth
    65
    "You've got stuff, kid. As Cillian would say."


    Kaija Ragnvor
    50
    "It's nice to meet someone who might've had a similar, mundane time with Aelrrigan training."

    Gabrielle von Caldrin
    70
    "Why can't every person from Calemburg be like you?"

    Katriane Faulkner
    65
    "You're the one good thing that came out of proximity to the Howlesters, for so long."


    Zenya
    40
    "One of these days, we'll have dinner."


    Gyrivenn
    55
    "There's a good man, beneath the burden placed upon you."


    Necalli
    50
    "True aim, true heart. I wish I had an Archon friend like you when I was in training."


    Ailred
    60
    "Keep away from the whispers of Caius. Please."


    Auriane Belrose
    65
    "You're my favourite Ithanian."


    Reyna
    45
    "I haven't forgotten who you were. Even if you have."


    Markus Delmotte
    45
    "I can't tell if you actually like me, or if you need me for one of your schemes. Suppose we'll find out."

    Rayne
    65
    "Live by the sword.."


    Rosalleia
    70
    "I couldn't have come back without you."


    Cedromar
    75
    "Don't lead me astray."


    Nym'vrae Helvath
    90
    "We had forever to go."
     
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  2. DrDrago

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    Peer review
    All I can see from a speed read is that you need to put your expansions into spoilers
     
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    Aespair Am I the only one here?

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    Aespair Am I the only one here?

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    Here's my review.
    • Please put the expansions into spoilers. It makes it pretty difficult to review when there's a lot of padding around the sheet, but I commend you on filling out all of the expansions.
    • Unfortunately you cannot be born into nobility unless you are a part of a registered, played noble family.
    Make the edits in red and tag me when you're done.
     
  5. Winterless

    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    Aespair Am I the only one here?

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  7. Winterless

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    Bump for re-review, made changes in accordance to the recent updates (body build, proficiency etc.)
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    ty
     
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    @Winterless

    Hi, sunshine!
    • You have one too many languages - Common is no longer a free language and, at ten years per language, the character would only have access to two languages.
    Make this lil' change and tag me when you're done!
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    papa bless
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    @Athelois Needs re-review I changed some of the personality bits and changed the culture of my character, as well as some of the proficiency.
     
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    Arendan didn't see graphite

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    Hello Winterless, here is my review for your character:

    Body Shape:
    Racial boosted proficiency points do not contribute to body stat, either alter the body shape or change the stat allocation accordingly.

    Once you've made the necessary edits, please tag me and I'll take another look.
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    Done @Arendan
     
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    william aryn.....
     
  20. Winterless

    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    @Arendan Redid my proficiency stuff and changed some of the dates on my life story to account for recent changes to School of Knights tuition length.
     
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    My apologies, tags did not apply.

    Approved.
     
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    Thank you father
     
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    @Arendan added some nicknames that he's acquired that I forgot about on the sheet, changed my proficiencies to reflect Violet Order membership, and put a number on his agnosticism to take advantage of Allfaiths bonus.
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    @Arendan Adjusted character to adjust for Aleia Soul Shard.
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    @Arendan Fixed up the proficiencies in accordance with the new Ailor boost, and changed up some info that was out of date on the sheet, as well as adding a Breizh name in parallel with his Common name.
     
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    Your medical points should be proficiency points, not boost.
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    Yeah sorry I'm very very stupid - fixed
     
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    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    @Arendan
    Increased his height to 6'6 and dropped his body shape to Ripped, more in-line with the "tall and wiry" aesthetic I want for him, and because the elves were making me feel emasculated and that's not good :(

    Oh yeah also redid his profs since Violet Order boosts are being removed soon so might as well get it done tbh
     
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    absolute unit
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl

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    PVP God.
     
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