Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Unric Dak-Hammovich Age: 35 Gender: Male Race: Green Bac Orc Sexuality: Straight Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 35 +20 Unarmed Combat Skill (Racial and Prof. Points) +10 Siege Combat Skill (Racial) +10 Metallurgy Arts (Racial) +15 Extra Heavy Combat Skill (Prof. Points) +10 Athletic Training (Prof. Points) Body Shape 35+(10*2)= 55(Total) Musclegod Built Body Fat Languages Common (10/10)-Learned from Childhood Vashkularr (10/10) -Learned from Childhood Spoiler: Basic Information Basic Information (Expansion) Unrics position in Regalia is generally viewed as a common citizen within the Orcish community. He only recently arrived in Regalia from his time under the services of the Warlord in search of a life he wants to live himself. He is known presently for being a Warcaller in the Narggoth Goor. He’s been here for around four months with the whole moving and immigration process taking up a heap of time, as well as scrounging enough regals together to afford a corner house of his own near the mainstreet of the City. Unric was born and raised in Daendroc in a small border clan towards the Northern portion of the region. His mother and father were relatively peaceful within their small village, his father being a teacher for the younger Orcs, teaching them how to grow crops and tend animals, as well as teaching them how to fight and wrestle and so on. His mother was a proficient hunter whose skill with the bow was unmatched within the surrounding area. His mother, whose name is Grisha, and his father who was named Lothar, raised him in the usual Orcish fashion within the small Border village. A secondary ambition of Unrics is to open and maintain a Fam that couples as a Zoo for children and so on to come in and see the animals he keeps, petting them learning how to feed and care for them and so on. Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Brown with Grey Sclera Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Depending on if he lets his hair down, Free flowing, or if he has it tied up which would be the single braid. Skin Color: Baq Green Clothing: Imperial robes Height: 6’11 Spoiler: Visual Expansion Visual Information (Expansion) Unrics face is symmetrical with a normal sized nose, his eyebrows are especially long and he curls them upward to the sides for his own style to them as a show of his length of remaining Honorable. His tusks are quite large and riddled with markings and drawings of his Life's history upon them. His hair is Black with the singular braid style and the expression he generally carries his an unusually intimidating glare, which in all actuality is his resting face which doesn’t change much when he does eventually scowl or glare or something of the like. Unric is a large Orc by any means, he is 6’11 with a heavily refined Musclegod physique that is spread evenly across the entirety of his body. His skin is a dulled green much like that of the Green Baq tribe far off in Daendroc. He tends to keep himself cleaned through shaving the unnecessary hairs on his body as he feels they just become to high maintenance for him to have to constantly care for it as he would rather not like to waste time doing things without reason. Unric adorns himself with Imperial style robes with a purple coloring, he has two small gold earrings on the upper part of his ears. The only weapons Unric normally carries on him when not at war are his fists usually. Unrics tone is a deep baritone of a voice, with a smooth flow of speech he is a fairly well spoken Orc in his own right. There is a tendency to slur words together just out of ease of the sentence. He speaks and understands Common fairly well, and is fluent in Vashkulaar. Personality and Abilities (Required) First Paragraph: Unric is perceived by those closest to him as very Brotherly, choosing to view those who he believes are worthy of his kindness and respect as extensions of his family, he can be seen making jokes, conversing and generally doing normal things with those around him. Those who see him at first glance however would view him as intimidating despite his overall positive outlook on most things simply due in part to his size, and the way that he carries himself in public settings. Second Paragraph: Internally Unric has very clear cut goals as to what he is and what he wants to do. Knowing where his strengths lie and his underlying love of creating new strategies and tactics he tends to work heavily in that format. Unric sees himself as an alternative stereotype for how Orcs are seen by the populace, though in times of great anger or stress he will slip back into that racial stereotype of absolute carnage and rage machine despite his own heartfelt wish not to have to do so. Somedays just aren't good days. Third Paragraph: With friends, it’s all fun and games until the wrong words are said. Unric is a boisterous Orc who gets along with his peers just fine, often instigating civil conversation. Though, with this, the Green Baq is self-reflective on his values to his Goor, and his people. Once something is said, Unric is either quick to pay heed or even easier to deflect, and correct. Its been noted that in times of difficult decision making, he would place more burden on himself than risk the lives of others that are around him. Fourth Paragraph: Unric believes in the Necessary Good. You do what must be done in order to do the best for your people. However on the off occasions in which he has found himself extremely attached to the situation such as if harm were to come towards loved ones and people who he cares for deeply, his entire focus and soul would be put in to making even the score that had been rote onto him by the circumstances. On occasion he has been known to showcase a unique morality view where, despite the hatred and violence done unto his people, he will work to protect those who have made it a point in dedicating their lives to protect others. He draws a strong sense of strength from knowing that his actions could potentially save a life down the road. Life Story (Required) 匚卄丨ㄥᗪ卄ㄖㄖᗪ Born to Lothar and and Grisha, two Orcs that were separated from their clan ages ago, and had settled down in the port town of Málaga, Daendroc. His father took to intellectual work, aiding the government and knowledge societies in majors like Orken history, while his mother was a local guardswoman. Unric grew in both the shadow of a warrior, and someone of intellect, which in their both separate fashions introduced a middle ground between pacifism and protecting. His father and mother regularly trained Unric, like any other child Orc though his mother always told him before she went off to do her job, "Be smarter, and if you can't, take the brains out of others so they can't out think you." Soon, at the age of fifteen, Málaga was raided by a band of Varran, and Songsakian who successfully took Unric into slavery for about three years until a local Warlord pillaged and raided the band of pirates while they made footing on Daendroc. Unric was under this Warlord’s wing for awhile before isolating himself, not knowing if his parents were still alive or not-- Unric’s vision depleted into worry, and fear. Though through this, Unric moved to hunting, and working with animals which he became fascinated with. He gained a deep affinity with the animals that he encountered in the woods and soon after made a home there, though as food grew scares, so did his main source of companionship. After the dreadful stalemate within Unric’s life, he made headway for the Crown City with the ambition to make something of himself unlike his family, and to prove that he has not broken himself to this scenario, that everything happens for a reason. Early on Unric joined with Kalmar Lok-Guthrain( @WrongChat ), and the Lok clan as a whole. Acting as the primary advisor to his clan, and close friends with the Tol. After much discussion and movement within Regalia over the few short weeks he had been around, Unric made it his task to unearth the hiding Orcs of Regalia and to unite them within the Narggoth Goor, successfully retrieving around twenty Orken brethren thus far.
Hey! Let's get to work: Formatting: First things first, your formatting is a little spacious. If that's what you were going for, that's perfectly fine. To me there seems to be a lot of empty space that you may want to cut down on, but that is only a suggestion and will not affect the review process. Expansions: Your expasions do need to be in spoilers. Spoilers can be added using the [ spoiler ] Text here [ /spoiler ] or by highlighting the text and pressing the little plus button on your textbox toolbar. Personality: Your personality paragraphs are a bit slim, I'm going to ask you to bulk them up a bit. Life Story: Your life story is also fairly short, a few more sentences should do.
