Salvia Haaven

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    "The Tiniest Haaven | The Brightest Star"
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    ★★★★★★Full Name: Salvia Ianthia Heiwynn/Haaven
    ★★★★★★Imperialized: Sabienne Femke Haaven
    ★★★★★★Nickname(s): Sally, Flower, Sunshine, River Blossom
    ★★★★★★Age: 22
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Birthday: May 24nd, - Regalian Born
    ★★★★★★Gender: Female
    ★★★★★★Race: Yanar - Cielothar, Ailor Essences
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Culture: Anglian
    ★★★★★★Main Ambition: Aide her family in their case.
    ★★★★★★(20/05/18) Current Goal: Find a good balance in her life.

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    ★★★★★★Proficiency Points (12/22 - Cap: 55)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+12 Medicine (+10 School of Medcine, +2 Free points)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+5 Herbology (+5 Free points)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+1 Alchemy (+1 Free points )
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+4 Agility (+4 Free points)

    ★★★★★★Cultural Points (20/22 - Cap: 60)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+20 Horticulture (+20 Yanar boost)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+13 Tailoring (+13 Free points)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+5 Drawing (+5 Free points)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+2 Pasty Baking (+2 Free points)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦+2 Performance (+2 Freepoints)

    ★★★★★★Languages (2.7/3)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Common (Original)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Modern Elven (Childhood)
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Alt-Anglian (Almost fully learned)

    ★★★★★★Magic ()
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦Visage Mirage (6 Months)

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    Basic Information
    Full Elven Name: Sállendiëvia Iántha’llenaë Hallevándëia
    Citizenship: First class citizen.
    Wealth: Wealthy merchant class.
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    ★★★★★★Eye Color: Toffee Brown.
    ★★★★★★Hair Color: Dark green leaves.
    ★★★★★★Hair Style: Long hanging hair rested over her shoulders.
    ★★★★★★Skin Color: Stem light green, oak green
    ★★★★★★Clothing: Elven garbs of a green, cyan and brown variety. Flowing and almost always dresses.
    ★★★★★★Height: 5ft 6”
    ★★★★★★Body Build: Athletic
    ★★★★★★Weapons of Choice: Words, She swore an Oath not to hurt others
    ౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦౦She carries medical scissors with her just in case.



    Salvia's Through the years.
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    1. External || Outgoing, Salvia ever since she was rather little has come across to others be it her family or her friends or even total strangers as someone that is rather outgoing and fun loving. She suffers from a weird mix of Narcolepsy and Adhd (Add would be the correct term the differences are minor)causing her to act hyperactive at odd moments during the day and randomly pass out during the afternoon. She comes across as fun loving and childish even at the age of twenty two just being used to being treated like the youngest in such a large family for her entire life she projects this type of mentality onto everyone she meets. Among friends this behavior feels explained and is witnessed making it easier for her to just be herself. But around strangers or those she wishes to befriend she tries to clear up quickly in an apologetic manner isn't a mad person and rather fun to be around. She trusts rather easily believing she should be the one to change when situations don't go as planned lending to a lot of situations where she might not see the danger of it.


    2. Internal || Insecure, When Salvia was a young girl she never really cared about what people thought about her. She just rolled with the punches and was naive or sometimes down right stupid to the fact others were not fond her of her or insulting her. She always had loving people around her that would tell her otherwise and her family would share not much bad stuff with her opting to show her the good side of life instead of the bad. After the death of a close friend off hers that all started to change. She grew more aware of other people's feelings going out more to see the change happen with in them. She grew scared of what others might think of her and how she acts. It became an underlying fear of hers that others would not wish to be seen with her because of the way she acted. Still she tries her hardest to suppress these things. She still wears the branches she sees as antlers from when she was a young child as she feels stronger with them. When she takes them off she sees people notice a difference and becomes scared they might think she has changed, changed for the worst. So she still wears them for her own comfortable feelings of not being judged.


    3. Relationships || Devoted, Salvia is a rather devoted person. Loyalty is something she treasures in life and her ambitions mean the world to her. When at work she can’t be stopped and feels incomplete when not finishing what she has started. The same happens when she meets new people that accept her into their life as friends, family or more. She will be at their beck and call ready to defend and protect or even heal them if needed. She has a lot of love to give and will give if you are nice to her. She still keeps a journal of all her previous customers and makes sketches of people all the time with the intentions of gifting them things. In the end she just hopes it doesn’t come off as clingy.


    Salvia pretty much acts the same to family as well as friends. She wishes to be loved and helped thinking she can't take on the world alone. Still the reactions and dependencies differ between the two. She knows that her family will always be there for her and even if they are busy think about her well being. Friends tend to not have that same bottom line for her, if she messes up they might leave. Bound by blood gives her a secure feeling in the end.


    4. Morality || Luxuria, Salvia acts neutral towards most she meets in her life. Still she is overly joyed when those she that wish to grow closer put trust in her and wish to be friends with her treasuring them and willing to trust and forgive them for anything they did. Her morals lie with her friends and family and are easily influenced if she thinks the person holds a higher opinion than her. She will drop hobbies, life goals and more with in a second if a group of people tell her it makes her look bad in the public's eye. Once when younger a man even persuaded her into giving up her necklace to him which she deeply regretted but she thought he was going to do good things with it.


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    Narcolepsy - Every since she was a young seedling was tiny she found herself having troubles with sleep. It was chalked up mostly to her being to hyper active during the night times and unable to get asleep but it became a problem and rather odd when she started passing out during the day time as well during work, hobbies or even during parties. Now that she has gotten a lot older she has tried to live with it a bit more taking naps or relaxing periods during the day. She has never really been able to do combat because of this, not that she would want to. But the fear of falling asleep in the middle of combat does haunt her a little. What scares her more is the thought of once she does find someone she loves falling asleep on them!

    ADHD, Salvia has suffered from what is known as ADHD all her life now. She is rather scatterbrained and takes out her energy on the most random things. When she was younger she never seemed to care much about this attitude and behaviour with in her daily life expect when her parents would scold her for doing something way to dangerous because of her adventurous spirit getting the better of her. Though this had it’s positives of it being easy for her to make friends as she is rather spontaneous in her actions. Things like handing out flyers or gathering crowds come naturally for her. Still with age she had grown a little timid about it all. Her overly imaginative mind plays tricks on her sometimes being sometimes positive when it comes to art and things she wishes to create but negative when it comes to her feelings.



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    Naive Child (1-8 Years)
    She grew up taking up many hobbies such as painting, sewing and gardening spending her time with family friends as her busy parents spending time with them when they took time off and created joyful memories with her. She grew to love medicine after a family friend she thought of as an uncle named Saelethil showed him healing others as she enjoyed this aspect. She requested to learn more from her father as over time they spend afternoon together growing closer through learning.

    The young seedling still has memories of bothering her siblings about romantic interests and following them around everywhere they went. She drew them practicing eagerly with her art skills as she worked upstairs as a young child in the old apothecary trying to sell tea and such to customers while downstairs herbs were sold.



    Mischievous Girl (8-16 Years)
    When she turned eight she adjusted rather easily to the idea of becoming a more grown up yanar. She still act childish around her family and friends but because she became more aware of people and their feelings towards her she also grew insecure. It didn’t help that the man she saw as her uncle passed away right in front of her causing her to grow sad for a long time. She tried to find comfort and love outside of her family soon after bonding with Agari a fellow Yanar over trying to find romance and often hanging around the tavern late at night to talk to males her age.

    She grew in love with sewing and tailoring at this point as well wanting to create her own garbs and gain affection from her parents through projects she could create and present to them. She made her mother dresses for noble events and still remembers when the elven family changed their name and colors meaning she had to make all new garbs for them all. Her happiest memory is still her father modeling a starry night dress for Elizabeth black an image she can never get rid off even if she tried.

    The city felt too busy for her at this point. Her family was busy, her siblings were older and more advanced than her and she felt a little left behind in it all, as if living in glorious shadows that were willing to drag her along to happiness. She followed in her sisters footsteps and joined a school, her’s instead of alchemy being medicine wanting to focus more on healing injuries than illness


    Creative Minds (16 -22 Years)
    Upon entering the school of Medicine she swore and oath to never hurt anyone ever again as she hadn’t even remembered a point in her life when she would have wanted to. She grew a bit more tough and thick skinned making quick wits with other students and still letting her passion for creating clothes and art from nothing blossom. She went with full hopes of working alongside her family in the clinic that they build up with so much blood sweat and tears. She hopes that she can make them happy and show that she is a contributing part of the family.

    Returning home her family will be something she has to be ready for hoping she won’t revert back into her old childish and outgoing self and rather stick the landing of becoming an adult.

    After arriving in Regalia and staying with her mother for a bit while her family worked in the clinic Salvia found they clinic didn't really need her assistance. Many had joined and even though she loved hanging around the place she wasn't much for loitering if she wasn't really being off any use. She grew bored and soon found herself wandering into the slums with a friend she met in the park sticking to a straight lined path until she found the tavern. It reminded her a lot of the sewer which made her heart beat a little faster with excitement. It was strange but she soon found herself falling in the the crowd of teenagers and young adults running about the place even going so far as falling for one of them with out realizing it much. She enjoyed it and told herself to keep safe and not expect to much. Some insecurities arose when they treated her like she feared they would. Like a plant girl from a wealthy family that could do nothing but smile and draw things, an idiot plant. She wanted to proof them wrong but at the same time didn't want to change for others as she was comfortable with how she was, though it may be odd. She started dating Juneya Perrot who she first thought did it as a joke at her expense but has shown over time that he truly does care for her. She is even willing to live with it if it turns out they were using her in the end as the time with Juneya is the best time she had in a while. The young boy promised to teach her some of the magic he knew that she normally wouldn't be able to get a hold off. Something she is still grateful for as she hopes to put it to good use.
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    A great application so far!
    Make these changes in blue and tag me when you're done!

    Basic Information (Required)

    • Please remove the Special Permission heading, seeing as that system is no longer in use following the proficiency update.
    Skill Information (Required)
    • You're exceeding your amount of allowed points! Seeing as your character has attended the School of Alchemy, you must minus ten points from her total of proficiency points, leaving your character with twelve points to spend.
    Personality and Abilities (Required)
    • When it comes to your first paragraph, I don't in any way see how this follows the character application template whatsoever. The first paragraph is supposed to touch on how your character is perceived by others, though you specifically only talk about how your character suffers from ADHD and how she generally feels inside, which should really be included as a Weakness and possibly be included in your character's second paragraph. I would like for this paragraph to be re-written entirely, having you pay very close attention to the template and following it to the best of your abilities as you've done with the rest of the application.
    • Looking at your third paragraph, I would like to see another sentence or two added differentiating how your character acts towards family and friends as a whole. I know that you touched on this near the beginning of your paragraph, but I would like to see the difference between how she acts towards both parties, seeing as you've just grouped the two together. I'm noticing that when it specifically comes to the Personality and Abilities section, you dance around the important points. I have quite enjoyed reading and going through this application so far, though it does still need some work when it comes down to highlighting the specifics.
    Talents (NA)
    • Please remove this section seeing as it is no longer applicable following the new proficiency update.
    Weaknesses (Optional)
    • I would like you to include your character's ADHD as a weakness and expand upon it.
     
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    Approved! Thank you for the speedy edits!
     
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    Just a little peer review, remember you need to have trustee to have magic and I don't believe you have trustee yet.
     
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    @WildRoze, This is indeed correct, please remove the spell before I re-review this character application.
     
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    I have currently requested Trustee and am patiently waiting for the results. The update past the magic really isn't much so i'll wait until I hear more about it. <3
     
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    @HydraLana After Trustee results I have edited the app. The only update now is the backstory with no magic added.
     
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    My Review:
    • What is this stuff above each section of the Proficiencies?
    • Please remove the Talents section as it is no longer part of the Character Application Template.
    • What year, you leave this very open to interpretation but because Yanar can mature so quickly, I would like you to state her birth year.
    Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @WildRoze
     
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    It's detailing how many points she has left to spend. But it was suppose to be a cap of 60 so I added this for detail.
    Removed talents
    Added a year in backstory and birthday.
     
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    Update Log:
    - Edited some Proficiency points around.
    - Added Stage performance to Proficiency
    - Added Magic = Trustee Level A granted.
     
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    Re-approved, but be careful about your word count, I chose not to include the stuff in the spoiler but with it, you would have gone over 900.
     

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