Thomas of Axford The Lion of the Viridian Order Identity Thomas Löwe Thedric of Axford (Formerly Kade) is a 42 year old Alt-Anglian male Ailor. Simply referred to by his forename, Thomas harbours an errant nature in regards to his former surname due to undisclosed reasoning. Despite being born into a family of wealth and nobility, the Kade Citadel is no longer a location he can call home; holding no residence, this Ailor is not averse to a ‘soldier's slumber’, or commonly known as residing wherever one may lay their head. Due to the history surrounding his stature and kin, the Paladin’s goal appears to be one of redemption, seeking to repair the damage he has caused and progress through the guilty conscience he possesses. Spoiler: TL;DR Full Name: Thomas Löwe Thedric of Axford (Formerly Kade) Age: 42 Gender: Male Race: Alt-Anglian Ailor Main Ambition: Redemption Special Permission: Viridian Paladin As the second son of the late Chancellor, Lord Moriarty Kade, Thomas grew into a lavish upbringing of warmth and prosperity. As his elder, and later his younger, Brother rose to the position of Regalian Emperor, Thomas’ lifestyle merely improved. This was, until, the Diet of Axford, where Thomas exiled himself from the Imperial House Kade and returned to the basic life of a Paladin of the Realm. Having recently returned to the Holy City following the rise of the Songaskian War, Thomas’ journey across the Regalian Lands came to an end with his feet stepping foot into the City once anew. Birthed and raised in the lands of the Anglians, Thomas spent the majority of his childhood with his Brother, Alexander, in the Kade Citadel. Axford was a wonderful place for the youngling to rise, given it’s warm and friendly nature and general agricultural monopoly upon the realm, Thomas never went hungry. Dominic and Cedromar came next, the younger Brothers of which his time switched to focus upon. As the three Brothers grew, Alexander had moved to figurative greener pastures in the Holy City. Following the birth of Amalia and Xavier, and the later involvement of the Bastard Leah, Thomas distanced himself from his younger kin to focus more heavily upon his Knights Training. While the main arc of focus for Thomas is his redemptive directive, the Paladin still reaches for his own accolades as well. With returning to the fold of his Kin as his prime focus, Thomas wishes to prove himself a capable warrior to join the Emperor’s elite few; The Imperial Rosewood Order. Skills Despite his Father’s initial intentions for Thomas to ascend the political ladder alongside his elder brother, Thomas found himself knuckling down with the Brotherhood of Viridian at a young age. Despite his, at the time, nimble and faltered physique, the Knights Honour Code truly ingrained the lessons of Imperium into his heart. Within the Castle, Thomas was not a Kade. He was not a noble, nor a rich man. He was a student, and he was just like everyone else. There was no favour given to the Kade during his upbringing, and with that he learned valuable lessons which would later carry through into later life. It was through rigorous training and years and years of refinement that Thomas eventually became an Expert in the Knightly field, winning his first Grand Tournament in 282 AC with the Lion moniker and heraldry to match his name. Spoiler: TL;DR School: School of Viridian Level: Expert Source: Attended the Knights School of the Viridian Order. Visuals With a structured and poised face, Thomas’ nose and jawline easily accentuate the breadth of its definition across his slightly oval face. Having a very distinctive eye colour of Celadon Blue, the piercing nature of his gaze is often met with the lethargic expression perpetually housed upon his features. With wavy and ‘bead-head-like’ jet black hair which sits atop of Thomas’ head, the strands of hair curl at the ends to accompany the thick, arched and trimmed brows above his eyes. Thomas’ only piercings are the ones upon his ear, and any additional jewellery comes in the form of the Ivrae necklace which hangs around his neck, the Elven Bracer of Etelehta around his wrist and the wedding ring of his late wife upon his right ring finger. Thomas also harbours a scattered scar which reaches up and over his face, along his cheek and across his forehead. Bearing the typical, muscular build of a Paladin, Thomas stands at a strong 6 feet and 4 inches, weighing between 200 and 210lbs. Due to the constant state of training and exercise, Thomas’ form is expressive of his dedication to the militaristic art he strives to perfect. His broad shoulders and defined muscle distribution across chest, arms and legs are representative of his lifestyle. Due to the sheet nature of his history, experience and training, Thomas’ body is afflicted with frequent scarring, mostly found across his left side. On his right arm, a sprawling and expansive decoration of ink seems to cover his skin, arching from his wrist up to his collar, covering areas on his front and back in the Flat Early Dwarven style. While he once sported the finest attires in Regalia, time has worn away at the Paladin and such is reflected in his style of clothing. No longer wearing thin silks of vibrant and ardent tone, Thomas can now be found wearing clothing of a much humbler design, detailing his armour with pieces of armour, various sashes and cowls to reflect his current status at this moment in time. Despite his exile, Thomas continues to house the Kade colours upon his person, though in a much duller tone. A feature that is often noted is the voice which resonates from Thomas as he talks. Once jovial and filled with compassion, Thomas’ vocal assembly has dulled over the years to it’s current state. With his place within the realm broken down to it’s foundations, Thomas’ deep, authoritarian voice seems to reflect itself through his articulated words in a raspy, and cold tone to match the worn nature of his being. Spoiler: TL;DR Eye Colour: Celadon Blue Hair Colour: Jet Black Hair Style: Curly Medium and Wavy Skin Colour: Regular Ailor Pink/Regalian Clothing: Viridian Armour, or blue garments with sashes or shawls. Height: 6 feet, 4 inch. Weight: 200-210lbs Body Build: Muscular, build of a Warrior. Weapon of Choice: Longsword. Personality and Abilities Traits First Paragraph: Often considered a very cold and authoritarian man, Thomas is typically seen as an atypical Knight. Raised and indoctrinated into the Unionist Faith from an early age, the Paladin comes across as religious and calculating. While in his early years, Thomas was seen as childish and withdrawn, his loyalty and arrogance have remained as fairly visible traits throughout his life. - Typically upon first meeting, strangers may find Thomas a little difficult to communicate with unless they hold a military background, though his years away from the Regal life have led him to appear much more approachable than he once was. With a smile to the right people and a jovial attitude when it fits, Thomas seems rather warm to be around. Second Paragraph: While often appearing strong in nature on the outside, truth is said that Thomas is a terrified and lonely individual beneath the thick outer coating. He feels betrayed, abandoned, and even if his exile was self inflicted, Thomas cannot help but feel an outcast from his family, his friends, and the Empire he served so diligently throughout his life. His confidence has waived, and over prolonged exposure to political pressure will begin to grow anxious of his actions. Due to this, Thomas has become hypercritical of his words and movements, even going so far as to refuses to opinionate himself whether he holds his family name or not. Third Paragraph: Unlike his typical performance of authority and coldness around strangers and nobility, Thomas’ true self shines through when around friends and family. His loyalty, his compassion and fundamentally his very purpose revolves around protecting his family, the Imperial line. For some, the lines of loyalty blur between family and Imperium, though fortunately for Thomas they are one in the same. His unbridled admiration for his friends reaches heights of absurdity, leaving Thomas often in a tricky spot when choosing between allies and the Hohe Ehre. He’s gentle in tone but stern in nature, preferring to impart the wisdom he has learned throughout his years upon his friends to ensure mistakes are not repeated. Fourth Paragraph: Despite striving for true neutrality, Thomas falters in the sense of his duty and drive for the Empire. Although he favours imperfect means of duty, Thomas’ true alignment can only be defined as Neutral Good. Incorruptible by all but the Imperial Host himself, Thomas’ obedience to the Crown is renowned throughout his life. Corruption and Evil Deeds go against his Oath, his moral code. With that said, he once sought justification for his own wrong doings, though now his code means nought but redemption. Talents Leadership: Following decades of training, experience and battle, Thomas has led thousands and thousands of men into battle, through victory and defeat. His leadership is revered among many and as Thomas steps onto the fields of battle with blade in hand beside his fellow troops, he has been known to install a sense of confidence and boosted morale among the marks. Despite all his flaws, he is a good leader through and through, and very few have been known debate the legitimacy of his skill. Calculative: Due to his tutelage and inherent calculative nature, Thomas was able to quickly move through the ranks of both Politics and Military through quick decisions which held strong in the short term. This is a tactic Thomas learned from an early age, and cemented itself within the Viridian School. While this talent was not efficient in his Political agenda, eventually leaving him titleless and exiled, his calculative nature proves exceptionally strong during forms of combat. He is able to analyse an opponent mid-fight to effectively break through their defenses. Renowned not for his overwhelming assaults, Thomas is revered as a combatant due to how he calculates his movements. Adaptable: From battle to politics to everyday life, one of Thomas’ finest talents is his ability to adapt and alter his actions to reflect his lifestyle. Following his exile, Thomas was able to quickly adapt to the life of a Commoner due to his time in the Viridian Castle, whilst assimilating to Royal culture following House Kade’s ascension to the Imperial Line. Due to his training with the Knights, Thomas is able to adapt in his fighting style and weaponry between Pole-Arms, Horseback and Sword-and-Shield combat. Unique Style: Due to the incident which caused the injury to Thomas’ left arm and shoulder, he was forced to adapt and shift in style of combat in favour of a more unique movement. Through tutelage under various private tutors whilst adorning the Kade crest, and his years training with various sellswords since the Protectorate Occupation, Thomas’ fighting style has become nothing if not entirely adaptable when facing various types of opponents. While he still favours the Longsword and Shield, his ability to utilise nearby weaponry or the environment around him allows the Paladin to conquer a variety of opponents. Weaknesses Light Knights Syndrome: Commonly known as PTSD (Post-Traumatic-Stress-Disorder). Thomas’ time in Daendroc during the Ranger Crisis was far from fortunate. The sights, the sounds, the actions taken by each and every soldier was enough to send chills down the spines of the strongest of men. Due to this, and Thomas’ early warring during the Chrysant Wars, mostly notably the Slizzar Retaliation, was enough to leave scarring upon the fragmented memories of the time. Insomnia: Only being able to sleep comfortably on the eve of battle, or in the arms of another, Thomas finds it increasingly difficult to sleep correctly when away from conflict. The grisled truth is that Thomas’ is a Warrior, through and through, and will never be anything more. He lives and he breathes the fight, and truly the fields of war are the only place he truly feels at home. Tossing and turning throughout the night is a prevalent feature, and such is reflected across the ‘dark bags’ beneath his eyes. His presence in conversation can often be slowed or meek should the previous night be exceptionally difficult. Depression: Typically the deep, dark and depressing thoughts that cross the Paladin’s mind are kept to himself, the anxious state elevating during heightened conversations of the Ranger Crisis and the Slizzar Retaliation. While he tries his best to hide his state, Thomas will do all in his power to leave and flee from the current conversation until he finds himself in a more private, secluded location so he may deal with his depressive state through tears, grieving, or by consuming large quantities of alcohol until he inevitably passes out. It can be noted that Thomas refuses to drink any form of alcohol outside of this state. Rage: Purely when in combat, be it War or Brawl, Thomas adopts a state of rage and passion. Enacted purely out of his control, Thomas’ state sub-consciously forces him to grow angrier and angrier until the conflict is resolved, be it through peace or bloodshed. After many years, however, Thomas has managed to keep this rage at bay long enough to simply vacate and flee from the petty conflict in order to control his unadulterated rage. During his time in the Crisis, Thomas kept true to the Code of Hohe Ehre, attaching himself instead to it’s teachings to keep his mind from falling from disarray. With likely too much faith and weight placed upon his Oath, the Paladin’s only absolution was the physical combat that the battlefield offered. Due to this, when Thomas is forced into combat, he will fight to win; No matter who his opponent may be. Memories: Over prolonged exposure to horrific acts and many years of dealing with it’s aftermath, Thomas’ mind seemed to begin to fragment its own memories in the days of battle. Each and every fight Thomas has fought in his life has grayed, shrouded by a thick cloud which he finds difficulty in viewing. Each battle is difficult to recall, and pulling forth specific details of battles, or any events which surrounded the eve of war, proves a difficult task. It is unknown, however, whether this is a conscious decision Thomas has made to simply feign lack of memory due to these events for his own sake, or whether time truly has taken a toll on the Warrior’s mind. Disassociation: Be it in Battles of Blades or Words, Thomas has begun to disassociate people as.. People. It is easier for him to view individuals; people, as objects and things, creatures he must purge as opposed to men and women with thoughts, memories and feelings. To slaughter another conscious and intelligent being is no easy task, not for anyone, and due to this the Paladin internally remarks his foes as objects which must be broken in order to secure victory. This is a problem, however, for when Thomas enters a duelled combat with strangers, or even often friends and family, he can no longer view them as an individual for the duration of the battle. This can cause him to bring harm to himself, to his friends and family, and anyone around if not careful. Paternal: Following the death of his child and the near death of his younger Brother, Thomas has grown to become very nurturing to those younger than him in nature, often adopting the role of a Guardian of Protector over the children of his friends and family. With his remaining children, Thomas strives to ensure they are raised in the finest way possible, going so far as to forgo his status to keep them safe. Due to this nature, he finds himself emotionally driven when children are involved, and can easily be persuaded or blackmailed if this was manipulated by a knowing party. Left-Shoulder: Following a scattered blast from a cannon which once left the Paladin comatose, Thomas’ left arm and shoulder never healed correctly. This, coupled with it’s non-dominance, has made it difficult for Thomas to wield his trained weapons proficiently. As a Viridian, one is trained to adopt and utilise the style of a Sword and Shield in combat. With this injury in mind, the excessive usage of this arm can cause throbbing and aching, often locking in place. When on the battlefield, his Shield arm can often lock in place and cause difficulties. Fortunately, or unfortunately, for Thomas, the sheer adrenaline running through one’s body can sometimes allow him to push through the pain, though once his wears off he is nearly debilitated by the excruciating feeling which floods through his ligament. Exiled: While not truly a weakness of emotion or body, Thomas’ exiled status has caused him difficulties when communicating with those of Noble Birth, and has quite often simply been disregarded as a ‘faux pretender to the Throne’. With his wealth and status all but lost, the past few years of his life have been spent living the life of a traveling wayward, and this has taken a toll on his image. Hohe Ehre: Once again, while not truly a weakness, Thomas is definitely constricted by the Tenants of his Oath. Being forced to not only keep to the laws of his House on which he was raised, the Paladin must forgo his Noble upbringing in favour of the poor, valuing honour and obedience to the Crown above all else. This is limiting socially and politically, though has no real effect on Thomas’ emotional or physical well-being. Spoiler: Expansion Expanded Personality Quirks Ring Fiddling: Occasionally seen simply toying with the wedding ring of his late wife on his right ring finger, Thomas fidgets with the jewellery piece whenever he is beginning to feel anxious or uncomfortable. Jaw clicking: Seen as a precursor to his rage-induced retaliation, Thomas clicks his jaw whenever he is growing in anger or agitation. This is a method the Paladin in order to ‘ internalise’ his anger. Wringing hands: A typical sign of stress. Whenever heightened with worry or simply slipping off into thought about his military past, Thomas will grip and squeeze at his opposing hand until his flesh turns white. Interests Swimming: While his masculine physique disables him from competing or truly honing in the skill of swimming, it’s an avid activity that Thomas enjoys. It relaxes him, and suffice to say he’s fairly proficient at it. Pastry Making: Nothing like a good cheese scone. With downtime and away from the Noble Court, Thomas occasionally pops into the kitchen to cook up a few tasty treats. While skilled at making various pastries, Thomas cannot bake a cake to save his life. Languages: Having been tutored and taught Alt-Regalisch and Common from Birth, and with d’Ithanie lessons from his Ivrae-blooded kin, Thomas was quite the typical Kade in his pursuit of languages. Following his tutelage under Anton Ravenstad on the languages of Leutz-Vixe, Thomas has always been quite the interested linguist. Likes Apples: While he no longer has access to his private apple orchard, Thomas cannot help himself from pinching a regal apple when he visits home in Axford, relishing in their sweet taste which reminds him of his childhood. Rain: Since childhood, Thomas has always had an adoration for rain. He simply loves setting forth on a walk alone, into the wilderness or the city while the heavens open up from above. Whenever it rains, an odd compulsion to simply move and stand in the downpour overwhelms the Paladin. Chores: While it may sound odd, Thomas loves partaking in the idled odd jobs and chores around the household, bringing back fond memories of his tasks within the Viridian Keep. When his ownership over the orchard remained, he’d often take breaks simply to tend to it’s growth. Dislikes The Sun: In a literal and nonliteral sense, Thomas has a distaste for warm, sunny days, preferring the rain and the overcast. The brightness in the sky can cause irritation, and the emblem of the Songaskians, of which he holds an uneasy relation to. Heights: This particular Paladin despises heights, and has since an accident during his childhood. While inside, secure by a wall and glass, the Paladin typically harbours no problems, though when standing on a ledge the exiled-Kade seizes up and moves away from the side. Surprises: With a latent hatred of the unknown, Thomas cannot ‘do’ surprises, though only when he knows one is coming. If the Paladin knows a surprise is on it’s way, he will do everything he can to find out what the surprise entails, holding a grudge against those withholding information. When he is unaware of surprises, while agitated, will not act any further on the matter. Slizzar: A latent distaste for Slizzar still remains upon his tongue due to the Retaliation attempt many years ago. He despises these beings and is perpetually awaiting them to give him a reason for his blade to draw through their slithery scales. Life Story Childhood Thomas was born on the April 27th, 263 AC, to State Chancellor Moriarty Kade and Liliane Ivrae-Kade in the Kade Citadel in Axford, Anglia. With his elder brother, Alexander, being 6 years older than him, the pair never truly had any astute connection until their later ages. Over the course of his first seven years, Thomas’ life was one of a typical Kade. As is common with House Kade, the second-born son was initially intended to succeed his Father in the ways of his Tactical Command of the battlefield, though from an early age Thomas showed promise of following in his elder brothers footsteps. Childhood was easy, suffice to say, though it was nothing if not busy. Each day, from Monday to Sunday, tutors, nobles and other folk would roll through the Citadel to teach and guide the young Kade boys, though Thomas’ behaviour was less than astute for the Political life. The second-born had difficulty focusing on each various task, whereas his elder brother was a born natural. Throughout these years, the other siblings were born; Dominic a few years after Thomas, and the twins Cedric and Amalia came just after that. It was when Thomas turned 10 that he was sent off to study with Alexander in the Holy City for the next 4 years. It was during this year that Alexander married Eloise Ivrae. Teenage Years Thomas’ tutelage with Alexander only lasted four years, however, as his concentration and aptitude was simply not up to part with his elder brother’s. While he showed promise, weight was put upon Alexander in his older age. Due to the large age gap, Thomas and Alexander never truly paired up all too well and, with Alexander’s children which quickly followed his marriage, it was decided that a military pursuit would better suit the second-born. When he was 14, in 277 AC, Thomas was sent to the Viridian Castle to study and prepare to become a Knight. It was in these formative years that the aspiring Knight met and became friends with William Coen and other individuals he’d eventually come to know as brothers-in-arms. It was during this time that Thomas’ noble ponciness was ground out of him. It was noted by the Elders that the aspiring-Knight was extremely proficient in his studies, proving himself capable against even those older students in the School; like a machine, Thomas moved through his studied quickly, and upon his 6th year, Thomas graduated from the Castle at the age of 20 in 283 AC. During his time away, his brother Xavier was born. During these years, Thomas wowed his superiors and from graduation, was deemed a formidable opponent. While his four years of political training were not for him, they provided Thomas with some helpful knowledge which he would later use in life. Adulthood During the interim, Thomas was married off to Rosalie Lovegood, the woman of which would always hold his heart and over the course of the next 9 years, would sire their three children; The Twins, Alaric and Isabel, and Jaymes in 283 AC and 285 AC respectively. In 286 AC, three years after his graduation, Thomas was enrolled to battle against the Essa Empire alongside his kin and brother-in-arms, William Coen. The sergeants moved through and provided support throughout and aided in the victory of the Empire. In April, 291 AC, near Thomas’ birthday, a retaliation attempt from the Slizzar ensued upon House Kade and various noble families around the Archipelago as an act of revenge by the Slizzar. This assault resulted in the death of Rosalie, Eloise, Jaymes and Liliane, along with staff of the Kade Citadel and other extended family. Thomas and Alexander grew closer after this, Thomas acting as his personal 'Knight' and military confidant on matters that may be required. Due to the sheer rage induced from this event, Thomas won his first Grand Tournament in 291 AC, earning the title of Paladin at the age of 28. The years that followed had Thomas distancing himself from his children out of sadness for the loss of his own, and heading into various wars for the sake of the Empire alongside his brothers-in-arms. From the Ranger Crisis up to the Protectorate Occupation were fairly ‘average’ for the Kade, having met his Half-Sister Leah during this time and combating various forces. Through ups and downs in his political career, Thomas gained and lost titles according to his erratic behaviour, though his military prominence remained. Recent Years Through his Brother's ascension to the throne, Thomas worked closely with Alexander and aided the Realm in all matters he was able; however, following the Protectorate Occupation, and the Axford Diet, he was found 'guilty' for crimes during the Occupation, crimes of which were never truly proved through the Paladin felt it in the best interests of the Empire to lay his back to the whip. This left a lasting resentment in his mouth for the Empire, though during his travels this anger has quelled. Thomas exiled himself to travel the world and become further in touch with who he is and what his purpose may be. Unbeknownst to him, upon his initial return, Thomas found himself denounced from the Kade name due to his absence during the following Regalian crises. Upon his understanding of this information, Thomas left the Archipelago once again to continue his travels, feeling no obligation to remain following, what he felt, was yet another betray. It was during this time that Thomas sought to find purpose in life, meeting farmers, warriors and all forms of Nobility from low to high. It was his own task, a duty to himself to correctly align himself with his Oath not only to the Realm, but also to himself. During this time, Thomas learned of the, more or less, annihilation of the entire Viridian Order. With the order falling apart and the previously prestigious and important staple of his life having crumbled to dust, the Paladin's anger and resentment towards his brothers-in-arms and the Order he once fought for seemed to dissipate. While he held anger against them, they were his family, and he is saddened to see it's desolation. In 305 Thomas returned to Regalia at the height of the Songaskian War, his blade and shield at the ready for any foe which dare test the might of the Paladin. To repair his image, the Order and his name, Thomas seeks retribution and redemption in whatever form he may so be able.
@Tahmas Surprise Review! This application is a step up from when I last reviewed Thomas. Only a few things to take note of: The two personality traits "Conflicted," and "Decisive," seem to contradict themselves. If someone is conflicted, they are caught between two decisions and are unable to chose, while when they are decisive, they pick a decision and are definite about it, sticking until the end. You seem to add a lot of unnecessary "u"s in some of your words. Uncle Sam does not approve. (chuckle) One might draw from the "Unknowing" dislike the fact that Thomas is curious. Maybe you ought to add another dislike. I feel that even though you have the required number, it still feels a little empty. Not being able to use a bow and an axe are not really weaknesses if they do not affect him all of the time. For instance, so long as Thomas is using a sword, he is totally unaffected by this weakness. Please remove this and find a suitable replacement, though it appears you already have three weaknesses besides that anyway. What arm is Thomas' rigid shoulder in? Does it affect him holding a shield or sword? Nothing wrong with the Life Story that I can tell, excellent job! A few mischellaneous notes based on my own interpretation on Thomas through our interactions in Roleplay: Doesn't Thomas enjoy tending to an apple orchard of his? I think it'd be neat to add this in. Thomas enjoys drinking, correct? Maybe add this as well as what his favorite drink is. I wouldn't say that Thomas is overly childish, rather, very jovial.
@Shayin Personality trait has been edited, Conflicted has been removed. I refuse to remove my 'u's from my words. Added the trait Curious Added 2 more dislikes and 1 more like. Weakness removed Rigid shoulder is the left shoulder, added in which it effects. Childish changed to Jovial
Added Relationships: N'omiel Mtriche, Jehenna Lampero, Arend Alder and Belle Silkvar Replaced Weakness: Rigid Shoulder with Insomnia, I was finding it very difficult to roleplay out the rigid shoulder, and I feel like I can do this much better. Added Like: Drawing Added Dislike: Surprises Added Traits: Paternal and Mendacious To add in section about Knights Syndrome soon.
Major Update of legitimately everything. So uh, gonna tag some RP staff for total review. @Shayin @Jared4242 @MonMarty @0romir @Catcat1305
I am reviewing this character! So Viridian Order... why? What drives this goal, why does he feel the need to repent? What are his goals in relations to his loved ones, or his friends? What are things day to day, in-game you can work towards to keep interest with the character, and ensure you're always moving forward? Answer these questions for me and yourself in Goals. I find a particular combat weakness, that balances his top-notch combat skills, so add one more weakness that doesn't necessarily make him "weak" to anyone, but will allow for a bit f fear to creep into you ooc when you combat rp. Other than that, I'd suggest you pay a bit more mind to Personality Traits; describe how these traits present Thomas to others, how he's percieved. That should add a sentence or two to each individual trait. Tag me when you're done @Tahmas Your Progress: Under Review!
My Review: Wasn't he removed from the Kades and whipped for failing to uphold the ideals of his order during the Occupation? Did these accusations from his family not affect him in any way, nor the public whipping? They aren't mentioned in the life story which is why I ask. Did learning of the death of 90% of the Virdian Order have any impact on him? If it didn't, perhaps explain why. Please tag me once these edits are done in green.
@HydraLana changes made. I thought I had written about the exile and denouncement already, though I had left it out. I have added this in. The death of the Order has also been added into the lifestory, mostly as an ambition towards the end.
