Played Character Verger Abanweard

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    Basic Information (Required)
    • Name: Vergar Abanweard
    • Age: 40
    • Gender: Fluid (He/They)
    • Race: Eronidas/Kissut
    • Sexuality: Polygamist Androsexual
    • Occult: Ordial Mage
    • Reference: Olivier Richters
    Core Concept
    • Verger is a staunch Draconism worshipper, taking Daiana as their patron and doing whatever they have him do.
    • A militant who had spent most of their life in war zones and battles, recently he has dived back into Regalia with a renewed sense of himself.
    Appearance Information
    • Verger has a prosthetic left arm in various versions: Hallowtech, Teal Crystaltech, steamtech, and Hoplastec. Their body is covered in tattoos depicting their life with magma coloration to the marks.
    • Verger is a 7'5 Eronidas with a figure resembling a bodybuilder with stocky muscle, usually contained in Regal-inspired garbs that consider the Eronidas clothing style to accentuate their build. Their hair once curly is shaved on one side and styled in a side-swept style or gelled back.
    Preferred Weapons
    • Flame and Spark - Twin Warhammers made of Brassheart with Moltrin core, the molten-like metal looks to be spelling out. One with Vasarcon saying 'Protect the Sapphire' and the other reads 'Protect the Amethyst.'
    • Damning and Haunting - A pair of pepperbox pistols made with blacksteel barrel and a brassheart stock, their names in burning Vasarcon and glimmering bronze respectively.
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    Skill Information (Required)
    Combat Style

    Total Points: 0/14
    • Strength: 5
      • Weapon Throw(Free)
      • Technique Parry
      • Concussive Blow
      • Pinning Throw
      • Diving Tackle
      • Careful Fighter
    • Constitution: 0
      • Thick Hide(Free)
    • Intelligence: 1 (Damartech and Hopslatec)
      • Tech Auto
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 1 (Ordial)
      • Magic Bolster
    • Wisdom: 1
      • Chem Mend
    • Charisma: 0
    • Faith:6 (Dragon Mage)
      • Sacred Dispel(Free)
      • Shaman Stance(Free)
      • Shaman Aura
      • Shaman Pounce
      • Shaman Darkness
      • Shaman Ancestor
      • Shaman Brutality
      • Shaman Fury
    Languages
    • Common
    • Vasar
    • Sofaal(Learned from a lover)
    • Zoram(Learned from children)
    • Shalota(Learned from Nallma)
    • Sinnayed(Conversational level)
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    Plot Points
    • Gymbro| Verger loves to train his body though not for combat but as a passion that grew in the city. He loves to talk about training in any aspect from protein supplements to what is the best part of the body to train first.
    • Community-driven| The warrior is loyal to his brethren and their honor code, they serve as a contact for Eronidas of foreign descent to enter the empire with work.
    • Philanthropist| Mainly from their partner, they've developed an interest in Alchemical and Technical innovation, usually funding their husband's research or those he thinks to have talent in such industries.
      • They have a particular interest in Marayan and Blacksteel technology.
    • Charitable| Even though charity is disliked among Eronidas, Akurgal has seen what it means to those less fortunate in the city. He will offer money to those that seem to be in bad shape, he pays extra well for entertaining fights in the arena.
    • Devoted Husband| Verger is married to Nallamath Llanom, developing an interest in Marayan and Meraic History and knowledge, welcoming tales of the vaults and planned expeditions, and even willing to throw some coin into such. They also have a new spouse named Onvyr, an Aelrrigan knight.
    • Marken| Verger is a Marken attacked by one during their teenage years, he has taken great care to try and hide it from the public, his family, and his current husband. He is a Brawl Marken, keeping suppressants usually hidden at home. Battling it for decades, they tolerate the condition as much as possible.
    • Neron Warrior | Verger heard the news that his brother had perished to a Behemoth Shade in Kur. He had a Diliris Graft implanted in his body with his brother's soul shared into his body.
     
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    Please make the following edits and tag @BiBiBirdie when complete.
    Please include that this is primal magic.
    Please include a mention of how this character came to be an Archon in their life story.
     
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    @BiBiBirdie
    It is done
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @BiBiBirdie I slightly messed as I was updating but changed state general to State Dignitary since it was meant to be Diplomat and gave myself Deeplore pack as ancient ero
     
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    @BiBiBirdie changes in red with there being more training packs decided to swap to one of more sense since he is a Giru Oracle. Made them even more of draconic tank
     
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    The Tradeoff Pack and it’s -3 Strength only occurs when the ability is used. It’s like a single charge that you activate during combat with [Defensive Stance], not a permanent effect. So, Akurgal should just have zero strength, not -3.
    Should probably just edit this to say “Regal-inspired” instead.

    Aside from this, the Sheet is looking good. @NoctisUmbra
     
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    The pack says it's a passive that is always on and can't be turned off. The ability is activated automatically when I get hit for the first time then I gain the three strength back. Is it not automatic nullification?
     
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    It's a bit of a weird case. It is written as 'passive', and so you effectively have -3 Strength, but this isn't something that needs to be listed on the application (though I guess you could in parentheses?). You still technically have a default 0 Strength for things like, say, progressions- but it's just being temporarily reduced by the passive ability. Once you use the block after all, you end up bouncing back to your default 0 Strength again. It's more something to keep in mind whilst in-game and up against other people with Strength, similar to the Rama Special which gives them +1 Charisma passively on progressions. Sort of.
     
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    It's why I put it in parentheses that it's tradeoff cause I will not remember.but I did add 0 Default in bold
     
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    ezalB Student of Hydration

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    Aight that should be good. Approved!
     
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    Great and powerful. I have updated my progs for the update
     
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    Re-approved!
     
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    @ezalB With the changes in dragon worship, I moved some points around to retcon Archon status since none of the dragons really felt good for Akurgal. So he's Slightly mundane Paladin.
     
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    Sounds good. I hope the change will work out well! Re-approved.
     
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    @ezalB I'm stealing Unarmed combat since Eronidas be good at wrestling and Palattu
     
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    Just indicate it's called the "Fisticuffs Pack" as opposed to the "Unarmed Pack" of old.

    Simple change for you to do though, and I won't hold up the app on that, just be sure to do it. Re-approved.
     
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    Akurgal is an Al-kissuti adopted Ahâzu Eronidas since the temperament of Al-kissuti doesn't completely suit the lad. Only change until the faith update
     
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    Keeping it updated in case I come back to him or find a mote of inspiration.
    Gave him one more magic point from strength for protection and blessing as paladin vibes with added specials and since I got cool link power to just buff my strength in a fight.
     
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    claimed for review
     
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    Re-update according to the new Eronidas update that released today. Get that done and I can get you approved.
     
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    I do believe I got everything squared away, I'm shiny bronze tank. Swapped out magic for mundane strength cause I got want I need for magic from the new touch specials
     
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    @WingedJade I have dipped my hands into the new point buys. Green Tank!!
     
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    @WingedJade Did a bit of an update to get some more tanking.
     
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    Dropped down to page three
     
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    @RaggedyGrace RIP Ritualism but I filled in new point buy temporarily for faith
     
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    Reworked Plot Hooks
     
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    Eronidas rework for Verger/Akurgal
     

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