__________________________________________ --- ☩ Character Information ↬ Full Name | Thomas Henry Hale ↪ Known Aliases | Tom, Tommy↬ Race | Heartland Ceardian Ailor ↬ Age | 23 ↬ Gender | Male ☩ Core Concept ↬ A reformed petty criminal, the unseemly and bothersome young man continues to follow the wishes of his overbearing, Celate uncle by serving the Unionist community in any way he can to repent for his past transgressions. ☩ Proficiencies ↬ Strength | 1 ↪ Unarmed Expert↬ Constitution | 3 ↪ Debuff Endurance ↪ Shield Block ↪ Shield Taunt↬ Arcane | 2 ↪ Puretek Sanction ↪ Puretek Wrath↬ Wisdom | 1 ↪ Tech Hook↬ Dexterity | 7 ↪ Spray and Pray ↪ Splash Shot ↪ Critical Hit ↪ Agonizing Shot ↪ Dagger Expert ↪ Sharp Reflexes ↪ Soft Landing ↪ Disguise Pack [Ailor Buff I]↬ Faith | 0 LANGUAGES ↬ Common (Native - Fluent) ↬ Calem (Partially Fluent) ☩ Appearance Information ↬ A slim, wiry man, Thomas stands at about 5’10” with very little musculature, his shoulders being the only defined part of his body. He is typically seen wearing what could be described as the clothing of a chimney sweeper. ☩ Plot Hooks ↬ Born in the quaint town of Henford-upon-Frent, Thomas Hale was one of three children conceived by George and Lucy Hale, the eldest being his twin sister Judith, followed by his younger sister Marian. ↬ The untimely death of both parents sent the three children to their uncle, a Celate named Gregory. While their uncle merely wished to mold the children into dignified followers of the Creed, Thomas in particular was more rebellious. ↬ As he delved into his later teens, Thomas would become the exact opposite of how someone raised by a Celate would act. He was loud, disrespectful, and - not to mention - a petty thief. He would later be arrested for the failed robbery of a jeweler, spending some weeks in prison. ↬ Terrified at the prospect of returning to prison, Thomas decided to heed his uncle’s advice for once, resolving to clean up his act. With his two sisters already living in Regalia, he decided he’d start there. ↬ In recent years, Thomas would be taken under the wing of a seasoned detective named Malcolm Lowe. They would eventually form the short lived Ministry of Information, where Thomas would spend several months as an undercover agent across the archipelago until its dissolution.
Hello, apologies for the delay! Here's my review: Abilities -Please remove the empire linguist pack as you don't have a the point buy for it. Outside of that, everything looks good and checks out. Please make the above changes, and tag me when your done or if you have any questions!