Character Information Full Name: Zakiatou Nickname/Nicknames: (None Yet) Race: Songaskian Age: 27 Sex/Gender: Male Sexuality: Bisexual Affliction Info: Envy Silven - Gold Iris, Red Limbus Core Concept Character Concept A Silven hunter who was raised by cultists who worship his mother, the Arken of Envy. Being arrogant as he believes this makes him better than other people and other Silven and makes him think that he needs to follow his mothers religion to the highest degree. Religion He is a follower of The Cult of Envy. Proficiency Information Strength: 7 Duelist Pack Heavy Pack Warrior Pack Demolisher Pack Pursuer Pack Heavy Charge Pack Brutalist Pack Constitution: 5 Block Pack Protectorate Pack Counterplay Pack Bruteforce Pack Ironheart Pack Wisdom: 0 Dexterity: 0 Magic: 2 Mimicry Pack Casting Pack Charisma: 0 Ability Information Racial Abilities: Songaskian Racials Envy Silven Abilities: Lord & Master Lord Whispered Spell Point Buy Rune Smithing Dueling Brand Prison Break Evil Tongues Arcane Sight Sand Element Languages Common (Free) Sofaal (Parental) Appearance Information General Appearance A 6’5 muscular songaskian with a shaved head, bushy white eyebrows and void silven eyes. Mutations & Extra Features Non Applicable Alternate Forms Sofawaati Form - He turns himself into a bipedal black desert dragon without wings. Life Story Childhood Zakiatou was born in a Songaskian sect of the cult of Envy. Him being praised from a young age for his existence as the followers believed he was a gift of Envy. He was treated like royalty in a sense which causes him to think he is more important than others. Adolescence Once he was able to train in combat, the Cult made him train with the traditional shield and spear. Telling him it was necessary if he was to kill other Silven one day. Early Adulthood Once he was a teenager he began to go out on his own. Wearing armor given to him by the cult, which he wore when he first found a lone Silven of the exist. Giving him an edge up and allowing him to kill it, believing that he was superior over the dead silven it enhanced his arrogant traits. Adulthood Once he was twenty six he left the cult, believing that he needed to go out into the more Silven populated areas to take what he deserves… Well what he thought he deserved. Realizing that going to drowda would be the higher death chance. He would instead travel to Regalia. Arrival In Regalia He would arrive in the Regalian docks. Moving off and looking for Silven.
Could you perhaps go into deeper detail here as to who they are a silven to, what they feel about that, and how that relates to their faith? It seems to be a key point to this character's identity, and should likely be explained a bit more here. Make this change, tag me and we should be good to go.