Played Character Finn

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  1. Non_Player_Char

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Finn
    • Race: Ailor (Pride Silven)[Slizzar]
    • Age: 18
    • Gender: Male
    • Eye Color: Blue/Silver (Slizzar)
    Core Concept
    • Finn was orphaned young; From political controversy, to rejected orphan, to folk hero - Finn went through much, developing innate magic powers that enhanced his body and endlessly searching for a place where he could belong.
    Proficiencies
    • Strength: 2
      • Diver Pack (Swimming Expert) - Swim as fast as Mai-Allar and hold breath for much longer. Able to see underwater and can dodge once underwater per server restart.
      • Breaker Pack (Brawl Stampede) - 10m in a line.
    • Constitution: 1
      • Recovery Pack (Bonfire) - [Mundane/Self/2hrCD] - Passively heal 1 wound every 10 seconds. Lasts until user moves or is attacked.
    • Wisdom: 2
      • Mech-Suit Pack (Dark Metal)[Artificer]
        • Addiotic Patent
        • Medical Patent
      • Thaumaturgy (Blood Incantation)
    • Dexterity: 1 (+1 Slizzar)
      • Trickery Pack [Roguery] (Dirty Fighter) - [Mundane/Melee/RestartCD] - After being struck by a melee attack, fire a firearm point buy technique at the attacker. Choose: Belt Shot, Purifying Shot, Piercing Shot, Winging Shot, Splash Shot, Covering Fire, Cover Shot.
      • Parkour Pack
    • Magic: 7
      • Alteration (Area Power) - Able to use powers anywhere.
      • Displacing (Arcane Knockback) - [IP/1bR/30minCD] - Blasts opponent 10 blocks away.
      • Illusionism (Reflection Strike) - [IP/10bR/1hrCD] - Copy of self appears beside target and strikes (melee) before vanishing. The hit functions as a normal melee hit as if the user had 5str. Can be countered.
      • Materialism (Material Armor) - [Buff Power/Self/2hrCD] - Grants 1 block token. Ends when the block token is expended. User doesn't take fall damage when jumping from any height.
      • Control (Strangling Brand) - [IP/EmoteRange/2hrCD] - Place mark above target, lasts 10 mins or until triggered. If target uses a mundane technique, target becomes weakened for 10mins. Target can only be targeted every 2 hours.
      • Cleansing (Instant Cleanse) - [IP/Self/3hrCD] - Target self and cleanse most recent debuff.
      • Mimicry (Altered Self)
      • GREATER MAGE: Illusionism (Illusioned Self) - [BP/Self/2hrCD] In reaction to a basic attack, block damage and tp 10 blocks away.
      • GREATER MAGE: Casting (Magic Bolt)
      • GREATER MAGE: Control (Leap Denial)
    • Charisma: 1
      • Life Leech (Techghost Summoning Pack)[Void] - Will for Life; In return for protection and a small quantity of power, the young void spirit is allowed freedom within its new body, to experience the world.
    Languages
    • Common
    • Slizzar Racial

    Appearance Information
    • Finn is muscular and athletic in build. He is 6'2 and has chiselled features but a warm and sometimes slightly derpy expression. He often flits from determined and serious to jovial and jesting. He doesn't take much pride in his appearance, but his active lifestyle has meant that his body is well-kept and very defined. His hygiene is something that he keeps on top of, ensuring that he is always clean after physically exerting himself, however, his hair can become unkempt.
    Life Story
    • Finn was orphaned early on in life and thus does not know his parents. His father and mother were and largely still are both nameless entities to him, and he doesn't think all that much about them until he comes across a journal that belonged to his grandfather. He was raised by a wonderful orphanage in Regalia and never went hungry. Finn even had access to many books, though lots of which were Regalian Propoganda, depicting valiant knights and tales of heroism. - His powers were innate and unruly. He was forced to master them in his childhood quite early on, only further crushed by the realisation of his Slizzar heritage on reaching the age of eighteen. Despite being unofficially disowned, he was granted a greater than average education with a plethora of teachers. Even towards his adulthood, he was garnered with tutors that taught him basic combat techniques, politics and battle tactics from retired Academy professors and handsomely payed veterans.
    • Finn did a bit of everything, but never truly excelled, trying to avoid using magic or any other unfair abilities he had. That is to say, he tried many crafts and helped out a lot with odd jobs, but never became professionally competent in any of them. Rather, Finn became an odd Job man, carrying things and helping the older hunters with their work in the wilderness - Given that he was not expected to actually uptake a position amongst the peerage unless something happened to his Aunt, the then matriarch of the Silveira family.
    • Finn recovered his grandfather's journal on leaving the orphanage, handed to him by the sister of the sect. In it, he learnt much about himself, about his grandather's horrible deeds, regret and guilt - and obtained a stronger purpose than ever as a result. To rectify the man's wrongs, even if he didn't consciously know it. A vampire. A murderer. A man outcast from his blue-blooded family for his actions - that he as his grandson now suffered for, Eldradon D. Deredda, of the Silvertongue house.
    • Now in Regalia, Finn seeks to help the weak and live out his ideals; wanting to become a hero like those he read about as a child. Ignoring what he has most recently learned; that he was raised in a faux-orphanage to separate him from his noble house due to the actions of his grandfather, but never executed or fully disowned due to a lack of heir. More over, that he is not even human, as a slizzar, a series of visions and powers confronting him on the daily since turning eighteen.
    Background:
    • After capturing Terrence, having successfully assaulted and raided their estate, dispatching a group of five strong purist fighters, Finn and a group of Occult headed to the sewers, taking refuge in the Cahal’s sanctuary. There, within the mana-tree, Artarel made themselves present, the Arken of Justice. Bestowing judgement on Terrence, and granting Finn viewing of an inspiring feat of spellcasting that he sought to glean as much as he could from. There, they saw a vision.
      • The viewer felt placid and calm. Looking from a vantage of suspension, in a yawning white void. Then a hand extended, metaphorical fingers curling around a concept. For terrence it was his sense of family, being crushed in a vice grip. Visions of all the times Erwin had hurt him began to flood his mind for what felt like an eternity. Then it was his sense of purist pride, a series of Kades, usually depicted as marble statues flashed before him. Their eyes were purple, glimmering like an Archon’s. His sense of Wirtem culture was destroyed next, with hovels where mage children were shot by masked Lothar, burning villages where the Velheim crossed beyond Hadrian’s wall in the days of old. The treatment continues until there was nothing left to visualize, only the white void itself. Next, Artarel put Terrence in the place of his patients, being helpless to prevent himself from destroying him, peace by piece. “Who were you to judge?” The demigod questioned lowly. “Who are you to condemn a man to erasure, for your own self-satisfaction of virtue, for your own desire to be… useful?” Terrence soon felt his shattered psyche seep back into him, in reverse order, the last of all coming his sense of family, filling him momentarily with warmth and resolve. “Truth is involiable. Truth is the righteousness of history. The idea of a bureaucratic sychophant like you deciding what is judged as truth, and what is not, is as pathetic as you Wirtem who deny the nature of your own Empire, washing down the profuse taste of blood with beer and parades. Repentance for you will never come at the hands of the Lothar, who for all their wiles and judgement are cruel servants of closed-mindedness and ignorance. No, no. You can never redeem yourself, for justice and mercy are alien - you can redeem yourself in the grave, if you so wish, or you can live and remain a sinner. There is no reason for me to kill you. Revel, at least, in this. But remember. You are no better than any of those you have condemned. And their weeping souls will chastise you from beyond the grave, begging for the restitution of their fortune, and for the vengeance of their ills against you. So live well, and live justly; and do not forget what you have heard today, for I have forbidden its forgetting. Remember that you were spared here today, by those who have every right to let your blood flow through the gutters of the stinking hole they were forced by your ilk to call home. That is all I have to say.” The arken finishes, ripping their hand back from his head, causing the strings holding him aloft to dissipate, Terrences’ body crashing back into the shallow pool of water.
      • Terrence’s face contorted, staging for a scream that did not come. Avalla, an onlooker of the Cahal, fell to their knees. Out of awe? Guilt? Reverence? Tears flowed freely from them in witness. Those watching all had similar experiences; whilst Finn stood straight, staring right at the Arken, soaking up knowledge of her mastery over magic, so that he might hope to glean some for himself.
    • Encounter with the Arkon of Justice (3/12/2023), once more Finn saw the Arkon of Justice, this time in a park answering the questions of all that approached. He stopped and stayed to listen, whilst observing their essence and cultivating his magic.
      • The Old Law; ‘as does the doer, unto them is done. If you live in accord with these principles, make peace with your fellow man and do not become greedy or wish for more than is yours, I will have no issues with you. The Arken proclaimed themselves the immortal enemy/rival of Pride.
    • [3/24/2023] Finn narrowly survives being attacked by four void cultists, reducing him to bloody tatters before he manages to escape inside of the Seraph Ward.
    • [4/24/2023] Finn is accepted as the apprentice to Gyrivenn, moments before coming face to face with his friend Naravan who has been corrupted and turned to the Dread. Gyrivenn and Naravan engage in a heated fight, with Finn being stopped from intervening by his new master.
    • [4/24/2023] Finn applies the blood incantation thaumaturgical ritual to Xavier Velasquez (coldestkiller)
    - Finn Silveira attempts to keep his life in high society separate from that of his life in Crookback fighting to protect people and provide the discarded youth (orphans) of the city with opportunities. As such, he smartens up his appearance drastically and minorly changes his eyes to be a bit duller when prancing about amongst the peerage. It's not a perfect disguise, but eventually he plans on two becoming one, and thus it merely has to survive for a time.
    - Crookback; Finn S.
    - City; Count Félix Silveira
     
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  2. Mollymock

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    Claiming this app for review. Expect a reply shortly.
     
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    The only thing to bring up is this. Since the character has the Graven Horror pack, they're actually Ordial Occult. Other than that, the app looks AOK. Make this change, tag me and we're good to go.
     
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    Hello, could you please re-review this? ^-^ @Mollymock
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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    Changed under 5 prof points, took me a while to decide on them with recent changes. Waiting on the Curseborn before hopefully taking that, as it fits the chars design.
     
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    @Caelamus I've made some rather large sweeping changes in preparation for Curseborn, moving away from a purely physical fighter to more of an augmenting Mage upclose fighter.
     
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    @Caelamus Please re-review when you get chance!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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  12. RunicScrawl

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    First and foremost, we'll need you to change the name of "Finn the Hero". This has too much of a correlation to a character in media, which as per our rules is not allowed.

    Please list if this is Artificier or Technician. I imagine Artificier, but listing it is required.
     
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    His... name isn't Finn the Hero. That was just a joking reference on the ooc app. His name as an Ailor Silven Mage is Finn. None of his background is at all related to Finn the Hero from adventure time. He doesn't wield a sword, have a dog, or anything even remotely related to the media character... What part of the actual character screams media ripoff?

    Secondly, he can ONLY be an artificer due to the rules of being a technician. @RunicScrawl
     
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    Thank you for making the change of adding the required clarification!

    The correlation is the name itself rather than anything else, simply don't make that reference anymore. Or, change the first name so you can keep making "the Hero" jokes.
     
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    I have removed the hero part from the app itself. Though I think this is an incredibly nitpicky reason to unapprove an app in the middle of roleplay, over a reference that ultimately is so loose it's laughable. That's like me flagging up the Surian Mist Beast form, for copying the Turian from Mass Effect.
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    Except my character is a Silven, doesn't look like 'Fin the Human', is a Mage, has an entirely different background and personality and has no images or anything else that could possibly misconstrue the character I'm playing as anything related to the media character.

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    Thank you for making the changes
     

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