Kudzie

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  1. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Kudzie
    Janfakɛla min ɲɛda ye ba kelen ye
    Basic Information
    • Name: Kuzdie Niatama
      • Aliases: Mutendi, Thabo, Onias, Vusa
    • Race: Songaskian
    • Age: 62 (appears as a 40 year old Songaskian)
    • Gender: Male
    • Eye Colour: Amber | Red (Vampiric)
    Core Concept
    • Kudzie has turned his back to the sun since becoming a vampire. Once a follower of Mussaktu, he is now a follower of the void and a practitioner of the Cult of the Ageless
    • Kudzie has turned his back on his people, rejecting their faith and state. But in the end he is devout to the way of life and in some cases an extremist. He is a devotee to the anti-undead philosophy found in the Masaya and wishes to continue that.
    Proficiencies
    • Strength: 7
      • Coward Pack
      • Pursuer Pack
      • Brutalist Pack
      • Skirmisher Pack
      • Duelist Pack
      • Hunter Pack
      • Heavy Pack
    • Constitution: 3
      • Block Pack
      • Counterplay Pack
      • Resilience Pack
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 3
      • Escape Pack
      • Slight of Hand Pack
      • Parkour Pack
    • Magic: 0
    • Charisma: 1
      • Stupid Luck Pack
    • Commutable Points:
      • Afflicted Predator Pack
      • Afflicted Evasion Pack
      • Afflicted Cursemaster Pack
      • Artificer Barricade Pack
    Abilities
    • Blooded Vampire Specials - Active
    • Songaskian Specails
    • Songaskian Abilities:
      • Altered Power
      • Subjugation Immune
      • Armour Summon
      • Flame Immune
    • Strength
      • Technique Parry
      • Disarming Strike
      • Crocodile Tears
      • Leaping Charge
      • Pinning Throw
      • Concussive Strike
      • Knockback Sweep
    • Constitution
      • Shield Block
      • Range Counter
    • Dexterity
      • Backup Shot
    • Commutable
      • Instant Leap
      • Quick Cover
      • Misdirection
      • Power Curse
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Sofaal (Native)
    • Dragon Speach (Songaskian Special)
    Appearance Information
    • Kudzie - Normal
      • Kudzie is a realitively lanky Songakian with thick dreadlocks and two horns that extend from above his forehead, over the top of his head before thinning down to a point. Kudzie often wears a mask to publicly show his status as a traitor to the Masaya and Mussaktu. He likes to keep his eyes red.
    • Mutendi - Vampiric Form
      • Mutendi is Kudzie's vampiric from. It is not too different from his normal self. The notable features are a red smoke that will seep from his mask, scorpion tails that will slip in and out of his deadlocks and tawhroon-like markings that will move around his skin and appear a glowing voidly red.

    Life Story

    • Childhood
      • Kudzie was born into lower class family within the pearly city of Diernali and lived a relatively standard childhood for someone in his position.
    • Adolescence
      • Kudzie's family worked around the gold mines where hordes of undead would work the mine. Here he began to develop opinions on what to do with them.
    • Early Adulthood
      • After his compulsory military service he became a vampire and began to lurk around Diernali around the mines, picking off small groups of undead.
    • Current
      • After being chased out of the pearly cities, Kudzie looked elsewhere and found Regalia, a city full of strife and chaos, maybe a place he could continue.

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    Sisi bɛ kuma ne fɛ ani ne ka miiriliw bɛ maanaw fɔ ne ye

     
    #1 Naz_Cook, May 16, 2020
    Last edited: Oct 5, 2022
  2. Mollymock

    Mollymock Regalian Citizen

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    Hey there! Claiming this app for review! Expect a reply shortly.
     
  3. Mollymock

    Mollymock Regalian Citizen

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    This is quite the pious approach to religion. Please expand upon this devotion with a sentence or two of justification.


    This life story is a wee bit short for a character of this age. Please expanding upon it some more. There's also a couple of spelling errors that you might want to have a quick fix at.

    Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete @Naz_Cook!
     
  4. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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  5. Mollymock

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    Re-approved!
     
  6. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Changed the whole character up pretty much
    • Backstory
    • Profs
    • Special Abilities
     
    #6 Naz_Cook, Dec 24, 2020
    Last edited: Dec 30, 2020
  7. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Sorry! Missed this. Next time, be sure to tag me when you want a re-review: I won't see it otherwise.

    But! Approved!
     
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    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Approved! But in keep in mind, your use of sorcery is gonna be restricted so long as you're afflicted.
     
  11. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    @Mollymock Changed proficiencies and changed abilities section for the vampire, racial, and abilities updates
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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  13. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Another overhaul. Basically a new application.
     
  14. WingedJade

    WingedJade Seiros Enthusiast Staff Member Lore1

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    I will be taking this application for review. Expect a reply shortly.
     
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    Looks good, approved.
     
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  16. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Approved.
     
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