Étienne D'estée

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  1. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Étienne d'Estée
    Bois flotté

    Basic Information
    • Name: Étienne Grande-Pouvoir L'éléphant Coeur d'Estée de Ciden Kulu
    • Race: Ailor
    • Age: 28
    • Gender: Male
    • Eye Colour: Swampy Green
    Core Concept
    • Étienne was reaised around a variety of religions but eventually ended up in a staunchly unionist household. He is now loosely unionist, teetering on the edge of believing in certain folklore traditions and superstitions.
    • Étienne was raised in chaoitc world where cultures, races and religions often clashed, he reflects this chaos and thrives of it. He enjoys it when world gets turned on its head and taking any opportunity to make sense out of the chaos.
    Proficiencies
    • Strength: 4
      • Brutalist Pack
      • Tactician Pack
      • Skirmisher Pack
      • Coward Pack
    • Constution: 3
      • Light Shielding Pack
      • Block Pack
      • Wood Craft Pack
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 3
      • Sniper Pack
      • Suppressant Pack
      • Shelter Pack
    • Magic: 0
    • Charisma: 4
      • East Linguist Pack
      • State Leadership Pack
      • State Saboteur Pack
      • Pet Husbandry Pack
    Abilities
    • tbc
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • d'Ithanie (Native)
    • East Linguistics Pack (Linguistics)
    Appearance Information
    • Étienne is a sturdy man that reaches 6'2" in height, his skin is darkish tan in colour and his hair is wavy and black that reaches to just above his
    Life Story
    • Childhood:
      • Étienne was born on the southern coast of Essalonia where the worlds of Ailor, Qadir and Songaskia met. His mother was an ithanian who fled to the edge of the known world and his father a Alior born and raised on the distant continent.
    • Adolescence
      • By his early teens, his father had not died on a foolish glory driven quest to kill a Gargantuan Stoneback Phant. His mother decided to leave the continent with Emile to get a new life in the Regalian Archepaelgo and began working for the d'Estée family as a handmaiden. His mother soon got ill and passed away. Étienne was then adopted by the d'Estée family.
    • Early Adulthood
      • Étienne decided to visit his homeland in Essalonia after finishing his education at the Regalian Ecological Academy. On the voyage he shipwrecked and befriended some fishermen who had found him washed up on a beach like driftwood. After an incident defending these fishermen, Étienne ended up locked in a cell. .
    • Current Situation
      • Five years passed and he was finally released. Emile soon got passage on a ship back west, or more specifically the city of Regalia. As he was short on regals on arrival he has decided to stay and work to fund his next adventure. In the meanwhile he has found himself a companion of a stray dog he has called Remy.

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    Taqqalahi tisnant alshash, ere s taqqal sallul asraf
     
    #1 Naz_Cook, Feb 19, 2021
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  2. Arhbi

    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    Ending up in Sihai lands is acceptable on the condition that your character washed up in isolated western trading ports, and did not venture any further than that.

    I'm going to intervene here. Unless you have a backstory special permission, I don't believe it possible for your character to have had relations with Sihai nobility. You'll need to remove this unless you apply for a canon backstory and get approved. You'll also need to amend the 'Current Day' part of his life story accordingly.

    Make the changes, mark them in red, and tag me when you're ready for a review.
     
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  3. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    @Arhbi Thanks for pointing all that all out. I was aiming quite high there. I have changed that part of the backstory. All edits made in RED as you asked.
     
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  4. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    @Arhbi
    • Aged down 3 years
    • Got rid of linguistics
    • Moved some points around
    • Updated for Ailor update
    • Changed backstory (basically replaced Dexai with Hadravia)
     
  5. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    Perception is a talent proficiency and the wiki states that only 5 point have to be invested into a talent to get the racial boost.

    Named the schools and subjects as well.
     
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    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    You are right. Approved
     
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  8. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    I pretty much changed the whole thing but the backstory is more or less the same.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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  10. Naz_Cook

    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    @Caelamus I just removed magic and put profs in alchemey and ranged cover pack
     
  11. WingedJade

    WingedJade Seiros Enthusiast Staff Member Lore1

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    Update this to the new Artificer point buy if you wish to keep alchemy. Tag me when done and we can get you approved.
     
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    Naz_Cook My mouth is a wormhole for Toohey's Extra Dry

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    @WingedJade Got rid of the alchemey and put the point into pistols
     
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