Kelvenne Raviirn

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    "MAY SHE WEAVE FATE IN YOUR FAVOR."
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    ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ

    [ FULL NAME ] Kelvenne Raazz’ël-ranvanokh Raviirn Rokh-Kiir Raz-Dothenaar.

    Kelvenne, praised of the Night of the Weeping Stars, of Kaahl Raviirn, of higher rank in the Pursuit of Pride, blood of Dothenaar.
    [ RACE ] Cult of Pride Kathar.
    [ AGE ] Twenty-seven years. Born the 19th of January, 283 AC.
    [ GENDER ] Fluid: focused more on the expression of traits of fitness, softness, and elegance through personality as per cultural heritage, rather than physical characteristics. Prefers to be referred to neutrally (they/them pronouns) but accepts feminine terms of address (Priestess, miss, etc.).
    [ EYE COLOR ] Golden.


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    [ PERSON ]
    A faithful young priestess looking to grow and guide their community into a new age of belief and wonder, and nurture the climb to higher heights however they can - while also loyally serving their Gods as Their hands upon this earth.

    [ FAITH ]
    A zealot who believes fervently in the Pantheon of the Dark Ancients of the Void and will do anything to defend and carry out the missions of their Gods. While they lend worship to all the Gods in unequal amounts due to their role as a priestess, they do lend greater favor to some Cults due to their own desires and their heritage. Their patroness is the Weaver of Fate Odella the Endless Whisper, and Kelvenne is committed to seeing Her demands through in particular.


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    ᴘʀᴏғɪᴄɪᴇɴᴄʏ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ

    [ STRENGTH ] zero.
    [ CONSTITUTION ] one.

    ➤ ironheart pack.
    [ WISDOM ] four.
    ➤ deeplore wisdom.
    ➤ dimenthist wisdom.
    ➤ mineral wisdom.
    ➤ communicator artifice pack.
    [ DEXTERITY ] zero.
    [ MAGIC ] seven.

    ➤ alteration.
    ➤ area power.
    ➤ displacing.
    ➤ magic blink.
    ➤ blessings.
    ➤ mercy of life.
    ➤ enchanting.
    ➤ disruption.
    ➤ casting.
    ➤ breaking.
    [ CHARISMA ] two.
    ➤ west linguist pack.
    ➤ state saboteur pack.

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    ᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ

    [ ALL IN THE PURSUIT OF POWER - MAGESPARK ]
    ➤ enhanced arcane mastery.
    ➤ enhanced vision mastery.
    ➤ enhanced dread manifest.
    ➤ enhanced dread sanguine.
    ➤ enhanced dread shadows.
    ➤ dread chains.
    ➤ void monolith.
    ➤ sacrificial perfection.
    ➤ arsenal of chaos.
    ➤ demon clone.
    ➤ voidborne champion.

    ➤ not currently active.

    [ MAGIC POINT BUY - VOID ALIGNMENT ]
    ➤ magic combatforce.
    ➤ alteration.

    ➤ area power.
    ➤ displacing.
    ➤ magic blink.
    ➤ blessings.
    ➤ mercy of life.
    ➤ enchanting.
    ➤ disruption.
    ➤ casting.
    ➤ breaking.


    [ SPELL POINT BUY - SPECIALS ]
    ➤ surfwalking.
    ➤ time cleanse.
    ➤ arcane wardrobe.
    ➤ self control.
    ➤ health call.
    ➤ dueling brand.
    ➤ life wall.
    ➤ prison break.
    ➤ chain break.
    ➤ arcane sight.
    ➤ pocket scan.
    ➤ scan sight.
    ➤ evil tongues.
    ➤ water element.
    ➤ fire element.
    ➤ light element.
    ➤ celestial element.
    ➤ time element.
    ➤ nature element.
    ➤ heat immune.
    ➤ cold immune.

    [ RITUALISM - VOID WORSHIP ]

    ➤ ritualistic manifestation.
    ➤ ritualistic scripture.
    ➤ ritualistic crafting.
    ➤ ritualistic manifestation.
    ➤ perfect sacrifice.

    [ ARCANOLOGY ]
    ➤ mutating.
    ➤ knowing.
    ➤ purging.

    [ ARTIFICE ]
    ➤ communicator pack.
    ➤ medical patent.
    ➤ common patent.

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    [ FREE LANGUAGES ]
    ➤ common.
    ➤ a necessary learned language. carries a thick dread empire accent when speaking that pinpoints them from ennen’dor to those who can tell the difference in the regions.
    ➤ pannarokh / katharic.
    ➤ native language. speaks in a refined temple dialect with a strong accent from the bay of beshark region, where they emphasize the vowel sounds and elongate the words a bit more.

    [ WEST LANGUAGE PACK ]
    ➤ d'ithanie / ithanian.
    ➤ lëtz / leutz-vixe.
    ➤ altalar / high elven / ïsursa’ïos.
    ➤ allorn / modern empire altalar.
    ➤ suvial.
    ➤ sulvaley / isldar.
    ➤ sinnayed / sihndar.
    ➤ saan / maquixtl.
    ➤ ibeth / ashal.
    ➤ vasar / eronidas.

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    [ MUTATIONS ]

    Kelvenne carries constant mutations. Their eyes are bright, shining gold upon a dark grey sclera, and when they are cut or injured, their own blood spilled is the same hue. They are capable of manifesting other mutations at will, and cleansing them from themself overnight if desired.

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    [ PHYSICALITY ]
    Kelvenne is a slender, birdlike priestess with long limbs and a taller height, standing at 6’6” or 198 cm. They have a scholar’s build yet no curl to their figure so endemic to the libraries: there is proud straightness to their back, and their shoulders are usually tucked back with confidence, chin lifted. They have shoulder-length, blood-red hair that is prone to a subtle curl, often twisted and braided away with golden pins. They apply a ritualistic, shining metallic gold paint to their cheeks and their lips every morning: two streaks running down their cheeks from their eyes down to their jaw.
    ➤ Across their forehead stretches a priestly golden Diadem, ornately carved at its center and inlaid with ten gems, with a lilac amethyst and a deep emerald as the centerpieces and other, differently colored gems arranged around it with seemingly no symmetry to their hue. They often wear other golden jewelry as well like thin chain bracelets or stacked bangles and rings, but this is notably the only piece in their collection with any gem or engraving.
    ➤ They often wear clothing that values presentation and ease of movement in either the styles that are more commonly seen in their people or the Regal stylings of the Capital. Reds, whites, and violets are preferred. It is a mix of both feminine and neutral styles depending on how fluid they feel that particular day.

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    The child’s birth is a hurried affair some weeks after the New Years’ festivals at the Mage’s Academy of Dothenaar. The bloodline is strong, even though the father’s face is forgotten; blessings run through it, and it is for this reason (and not, of course, the mother’s unwillingness to be bogged down by a child in her studies) that they are taken to the Temple in the foggy Bay of Beshark. Their mother is challenged to a duel in the wake of their birth and accepts as a matter of pride; it is the last spell she ever casts.

    Ennen’dor is a city where no one stays long except the priests and the artisans. The faces always change, but that means there’s always work to be done: rituals to learn, statues to clean, stories to drink in and histories to study. Kelvenne takes well to the work of a priest and its demands. They research into Tharracology, learning the deep secrets of the art - as they learn more, their faith deepens and they move to the healing houses, the libraries, and the other areas of the Temple to continue their studies and their servitude to their Gods.

    With their crafts honed and their unwavering dedication to their Pantheon carved within their very soul, Kelvenne stays at the Temple some years longer before finally resolving to make their own way in the world. This begins their travels through the Dread Empire, visiting the many Temples they knew of to learn more about the ways of worship amongst their people. From Parthalaar to Dothenaar to Akathkya, they drift for three years to collect stories and secrets of the many who turn to their Gods for comfort and for power.

    Their attentions turn to a City much like the one of their raising, where people come and go in waves, sometimes staying and sometimes going. The familiar environment pulls at their spirit, and before they can quite catch themself, they find themself boarding a ship to the gem city of the Regalian Empire for a newly forged future.

     
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    @Volaie requesting a re-review and a cleanup of the thread!
     
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    Approved. Will start cleaning thread now.
     
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    @Volaie changed arcane magic to sensor magic and added pet husbandry to use the extra unused charisma point bc cat >:O also pronoun change
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Need a new reviewer! Changed medical type from mundane to magical, added ritualism to sheet. Other changes that didn't get reviewed before include arcane magic to sensor magic and spending the unspent charisma point to get a cat. Because I like cats.

    (I wrote the little blurb about having more cats because I keep them as NPCs for games for rituals in the base, as a "before we can start, you need to gather all these things up and oh by the way you need four cats. Good luck get hunting!" but I only use the one cat in active personal roleplay.)
     
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    Cwaimed fow weview !! :3

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    awh thank u uwu!!!!
     
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    @Yurs changed blood magic to arcane magic!
     
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    @Yurs did some QOL updates to the thread
    • updated gender bit
    • updated mage kit bullets
    • updated backstory with a paragraph about traveling to learn about worship in other temples
    • updated backstory to fit new mage kit
    • removed blood fingers mutation (moving to casting aesthetic)
    • edited physicality description
    • added detail to religion
    • added religion part to core concept
    • changed name prefix to be more powerful one
     
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    @Caelamus changed ancient speech to shadow magic, updated magespark link w/ new kit and revised line of backstory to include reference since it's a demon-focused kit
     
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    As a forewarning, if you make changes you have to change the tag to re-review. Don't leave it on approved. Although I will re-approve it anyway.
     
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    @Caelamus okay sorry hi me again subbed pet husbandry for fire magic
     
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    @Caelamus hi i'm so sorry me again swapping mimicry for enchanting with the new update pushed
     
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    ok.
     
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    @Caelamus swapped old common alchemy pt for communicator artifice w/ medical and common patents
     
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